very well written.add those quotations which you would be able to reproduce in exams.

VALUE OF FAITH IN COMPUTERIZED WORLD:

Life without computers is unimaginable today. Computers, along with the Internet, have changed the world in a way that can be termed as incredible. With the advent of computers, Homo sapiens entered the Information Age. Suddenly it became child’s play to process a massive amount of data.As computers brought convenience to all aspects of modern life. With the help of a computer, one could use dictionary and encyclopedia programs paint a picture and even design a house. Whatever one’s need, there is a software program made for it.for this reason man’s faith on it has risen in it and he start depending mostly on it.No doubt technology occupies more than 80% of life but still it has many drawbacks too, like it complicated life,the increase in transportation technology has brought stressful traffic congestion in some area, potentially devastating nuclear weapons become more powerful and proliferation has become easy with communication and transportation advancements. This leads to socially stressful military concepts like mutually assured destruction, people will lose their jobs to machines that will do the work for them, unforeseen genetic mutations as the result of genetic engineering, or perhaps something more subtle which can destroy the ozone or warm the planet. As a conclusion I can say that the technology helps us a lot in our lives,it help us to communicate, to shorten distances but it generate problems more then it solve.Having faith in computerized world is not bad but having too much faith can lead to disastrous consequences.
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Beneath every cloud is a silver lining
This proverb implies that even miserable situations have a positive side.no doubt,one gets frustrated,depressed and melancholic in untoward conditions.but,he should always remember that adversity has a way of teaching lessons.for most of the people, it provides an opportuinity to understand oneself in a better way, and also exposes his latent qualities. The wisdom,thus,lies in seeking good even in bad.helen keller was deaf,dumb and blind ,but she arose to wisdom.it is quite probable that her talents would never have developed had she been blessed with the faculties. that most of us take for granted. As William shakes peare said,” sweet are the uses of adversity,however like a toad,ugly and venomous,wears yet precious jewel in head”.under the rule of the congress ministries, muslims were severely tortured and persecuted.atteplts were made repeatedly to tarnish their religious identity.their prayers were often interrupted.the slaughter of so called” mother cow” was avenged with the killings of multitude innocent muslims.nevertheless, the ruile helped muslims to realize their individual identity ad paved way for a separate homeland. roman poet Horace stated,”adversity has a way of eliciting talents, which in comfortable situation would have lain dormant”.without experience of misfortune, there is little possibility that a man will ever express himself fully.it opens the faculties of mind.without untoward situation, a person always thinks in a limited pattern.his talents remain coveted.such situations also enable one to grow stronger and prepare one for next upcoming challenges.thus, hardwork and optimisim,even in inauspicious circumstances,helps one to cope with difficuilties.

dear, i think watever you wrote is not much relevant with the stated topic.as in the later part of the paragraph,there has been a shift from computers to technology.in addition,i felt certain grammatical errors are there.the beginning of paragraph is quite well written, but the last part is very carelessly attempted.you forgot to use commas after suddenly, and before but. morover,i have heard that one should not attempt in paragraph with words like "i,you ,me etc" but i am not sure if that is a rule or not.

If you have heard it, sorry to say, you have eared wrong. Perhaps, it was typo error, you missed giving not between 'should' and 'attempt'.

Aniqa hashmi, Don't use I and Me in your essays, expansions e.t.c

Is democracy an ideal form of government?
Democracy is the political system for the people and of the people.the word democracy orginited from greek words “demos” meaning people and “kratos” i.e power.democracy derives its power either, directly from people or, through representatives (representative democracy).democracy illustrates the lofty principles of freedom(freedom of expression, freedom of media and freedom of speech), equality and majoritarian rule. under a democracy, everyone is equal before law and has access to power. today, 120 countries are democratic.the type of democracy practiced in every country depends upon the history of political system, time period for which democracy has been practiced and the elite. there is no fixed template of democracy, it is the form of government which adjusts itself according to the climate of the country. this is why some countries exhibit best form of democracy while others, such as Pakistan, are transitional democracies.it is the most suitable form of government as it has been termed as “the last form of government”. Democracy provides common man the right to choose government of choice.in addition,as this form of government enjoys popular support, it becomes easy to introduce and implement new policies. democracy is aimed at ensuring peace and stability in the region and therefore, has been acknowledged the best form of political system.aristoltle said, ”Democracy is when the indigent, and not owners of property are the rulers”Without democracy,rights of the common man are often exploited. dictators with the support of the elite enforce rules,that satisfy there ingenious aims,without much consideration to its impact on general public.In current scenario, therefore, democracy is the ideal form of government.

sadaf thanks for correcting but don't computerise world mean technology?

Copying material from other sources and pasting it here won't work at all for you as well as for rest of the aspirants.

Mention the source, from where this material is being copied.

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Not 100% copied.

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