Is it recommended to use comma after these words: moreover, however, additionally, therefore in any English writing?

Future can never be predicted with perfect accuracy but it can be gauged by considering certain parameters. The similar reality is substantiated by the adage which implies that the personality of an individual can be envisaged by a cursory glance over his childhood. The personality of an adult is simply a product of traits and characteristics he exhibits in his younger age. His attributes are often the developments of the features he had when he was a child. As Milton has aptly pronounced, “The child shows the man, As morning shows the day”. Most of the qualities, be it physical, mental and social, ripe with the passage of time and are manifested in mature form in adulthood. It seems true that a child with positive traits and habits will emerge as a constructive member of the society while a child with negative predispositions will prove a curse in social terms.
The history bear witness to the fact, the childhood preferences and inclinations determine the man of future, by having many such personalities in its annals. Hazrat Muhammad (P. B. U. H), a great reformer, who changed the map of the world with his revolutionary thoughts, was equally a man of generosity and high acumen in his childhood. Similarly, Adolf Hitler harbored a stubborn child himself and he emerged as the most cruel man in the cosmos. Titian, an eminent Turkish artist, is another epitome of it. But the maxim does not always stand true and the existence of exception can never be denied.
In a nutshell, the childhood is a crucial phase of life and it must be dealt carefully on the part of the parents as it paves the way for future personality. The parents must pay heed to the temporal and moral training of the child to make him a productive organ of the society.

Man has reached space and is moving further in all dimensions.

A clause which is started in past cannot end into present. So, you used MAN REACHED SPACE and jumped into present at once. It is not grammatically correct.

So, it was better to use HAS.

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You can. Comma will be recommended correct if you start a sentence and give a comma after told words.

If I am not wrong, you have not given the topic of expansion. May I know the topic of expansion first?

yes zohaib, title is Child is the father of man.

The content is pretty good, but you need to work on the flow and the overall feel. Same thing as yours, but with some minor corrections, such as sentence structure:

The distance from a holy place is by no means proportional to one's closeness to God. This pure relationship does not depend upon physical presence, rather it is a matter of the soul; a soul which is invisible and yet very deep. It is a matter of the heart, where God resides.

Notice that I haven't changed the content of the paragraph, only the structure.

Thank you for the guidance.

I will keep in mind your corrections in my next writing.

P.S. I think there are no grammatical mistakes in my above writing.

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If the above post has any grammatical, punctuation or any other mistake in English please mention it.

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No, there wasn't any grammatical error, just that any piece of writing should have a good flow so that the reader won't get irritated. I always keep that in mind and although my writing skills are not nearly as developed as those of some other members on this forum, they've improved in the last couple years.

koi meri expansion bhi check ker day . mujh say narazgi ha sabki?

Meri expansion abhi tk kisi na b evaluate nai ki

aur meri b nai ki check kisi na expansion