whAT IS so wrong with copying material? i think they don't penalize for it in the css exam ,then there should be no objection on pasting it as well.

i also think its not much bad but they are right it will not enhance one's own writing skills.

the axiom rightly alludes towards the greatness of mothers and their instrumental role in the molding of a nation,more like a craftsmen.they are,undoubtedly, the shapers of society.apparently, we live in a world dominated and ruled,mostly, by men.but, a greater insight will tell us that it is a mother who carves these men into great statesmen and rulers.napolean said that: "give me good mothers and I will give you a good nation"
it is the mother who teaches a toddler to speak and walk.when he grows up,she becomes her mentor.she teaches him how to behave,read and write,how to react to events and,more importantly,when to speak.a man's social,religious orientations are reflections of his mother.thus, a naive,docile boy is transformed into a mature,sagacious person,who controls the reins of worldly affairs- all thanks to the great mothers.
the pages of history are full of such examples: Jauhar brothers,eminent scholars and prominent leaders of Muslim masses in the sub-continent,were always very indebted to their mother,Biamma.she,alone, brought them up in such and excellent manner that jauhar brothers became the heart-beat of billions of muslims.another example is of einstein,whose work in the field of physics changed the lives of every living soul on this planet.but,very few know that he was a dunce in school and he could not learn to speak till the age of three years.it was the hard work and persistent efforts of his mother that he became a genius scientist.
therefore,the hand behind every successful man is of mothers,who nurture and nourish them so that they can lead the world tomorrow.mankind owes their successes and pleasures to their mothers.

"Let us agree to disagree in an agree-able way"


The above phrase exhibits to get agree without anymore arguments and aggressive counter dialogues. It is better to get agree on the things peacefully without any violence and destruction; so that a person can reach his destination without any more delays. Peace and harmony are the valueable assets to remain in the state of calmness and being a good decision-maker. If a person or leader is not profound , he would not be able to take appropriate decisions for his / her own being as well as for the state so. No doubt, wisdom encloses the fact that to leave the unsolved and knotted things despite work hard to be accomplished. The ebbs of the history makes it very clear that in conflicts, wars and disputes, people loss at large. During the independence of Pakistan, many losses like property, houses, vehicles and above all lives of the innocent people had been scarificed. Currently, Indo-Pak relationships are at the high strain. It is advised by the sagacious analyst that Pakistan should adopt the diplomacy and construct friendly ties ostensibly. It will certainly promote good image of Pakistan on international forum. No doubt, the war with Taliban has made the circumstances even more miserable. So it is more favorable to settles the disputes by saying no more “NO” and stubborn attitude on the lives of ingenuous civilians, hence all the policy-makers, state-bodies and establishment should give up the short-terms gains in favor of longterm and everlasting benefits. Not even on official levels but also in an individual life, one should accept the changes and avoid the ancestral habit of quarreling on the liitle trivials. Indeed, it leads towards the consolation and successful life.

MAN GETS WHAT HE STRIVE FOR
"GOD HELPS THOSE WHO HELP THEMSELVES". it is the tested principle of life that the man gets what he endeavors for. ALLAh almighty in the Quran says," i do not change the conditions of a nation unless they want it themselves". this is the principle of life. we can see in the world those big powers who are leading the world,today in every walk of life, could become possible only because of their struggle and hard work, they did. the study of life histories of all great personalities of the world reveals that their lives were full of struggle and they faced great trials and tribulations to achieve their aims. In this world, those succeed who struggle and endeavor.The life of Muhammad (P.B.U.H) is in front of us.Once he was alone, but he continued his march towards his goal and come out with flying colors.So if one wants something, he should make struggle for it, as without struggle nothing is possible in this world.God helps those who help themselves. where there is a will, there is a way.Hard work is key to success.

all the colleagues are requested to check my expansion and propose recommendations to improve my thoughts and writing skills.

to be v. honest,i could not understand the gist of your expansion.very circumlocutory and confounding.words are being forced to fit in.my advice for you is to read dawn editorials and observe the way of expression in it.very soon , with practice, you will acquire cohesion in sentences.

The saying reflects a reality of life. A person who always gratify his desires make his life miserable. A person who is addicted to tea, will always search for it, no matter where ever he is. Same is the case of a drug addicted person. To manage for his drugs, he can go any extent and can cross any limit. Even sometimes he go for earning money in an illegal way. Due to drugs addiction, he become blind. He loses the sense of differentiating between good and bed and finally from a noble person he is changed into a gangster or rascal.
Students, if they prefer their desires over their studies, get failed and ruin their future. Initially they use media for their social interaction with people who are far away from them but when they get addicted to the use of social media, they no more enjoy their studies and the ultimate result is nothing but their academic failure. Other than students, people from any walk of life, when they start blindly following their desires, they get into trouble. A middle class person wishes of (or desires for) having a six digits salary but when he gets that much salary he now feel the desire for a nice car and a flat in a big city or posh area. Even though when he gets such cars and flats, now his wants compel him for big building and he wants to compete with the elite of the local society. But when he gets success over these elites, he desires for competing owing companies in international markets and he wants to overpower the millionaire at international level. In short he starts following a way which have no end and he is always in tension as he always desires for more and more and all those things that he possess seems to him very little. On the other hand if a person prefer his principles over his desires, his life become easy. He feels internally satisfied because all those things that he possess seems to him enough and he don’t need all those things which are not his requirements. As a result he do not need to strive for the gratification of his vein desires. Islam also teaches us not to follow the way of fulfilling of desires . In fact Islam gives us practical training of how to overcome our desire by means of fasting.

Sara, although I didn't read the original paragraph which you have expanded above; I feel that you have completely fed in all the ideas lying in that original para. Your paragraph is complete in its sense of expression and your language is also excellent but I would like to point out a small spelling mistake only because you have repeated it; instead of "Bed" in the title and 3rd line of the first paragraph of your expansion the correct word should be "bad".

can essays be also checked here?i have completed all expansions of past 5 year papers .now i want to post essays.

Democracy is a system made by man,it has may flaws.
It give equality to voter which is against the natural law.
those who are educated and those who are not educated cant be equal.(as per Quran teachings).

Ideal means perfect without any flaw,so it is not an ideal system because it has flaws.

we have also examples of Saudia Arabia,UAE and many other arab states
having no democracy but best governance system.

while India which is claiming himself "world largest Democracy" has poor governance,law and order etc.

so it is not an ideal system As Pluto in his idea of state claimed that ideal form of government cannot be achieved.

As it is practice in many developed counties so it can be best,but it is not ideal.

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