Originally Posted by wasif786

Better to wear out than to rust out

If things are bought to use these would be beneficial for the user and allow him to change his appearance. *What exactly do you want to say in this sentence?*

Anything, purchased by the intend of making huge collection of different varieties without using them are useless.

Anything, purchased with an intent to make a huge collection and not using them, is of no benefit.

For example if a person buys a new car and park(s) it in his garage to please himself. he does not use it as a mode of transport the engine of a car would be rusted out. it would have lost his physical and monetary value. There would be a new model of a car available in the market to capture the attention of buyers.

For example(,) if a person buys a new and park(s) it in his garage just to please himself (and) does not use it for transportation, the engine of the car would rust out. it would have lost its physical and monetary value.

If he does not put it in a right direction or properly use it. He will not be able to get a head out of it.

If he does not put it in a right direction or properly use it, he will not be able to get (a head out of it? what is this?)

Everyone has different abilities. one needs to find out his own talent. its an art which enables him to face multifaceted challenges of life. He should not follow others blindly. Honey bee seems to be a very small creation but it produces pure honey which is an essential part of human food.Hence, its better to wear out ( use your talent) than to rust out.

Originally Posted by MINUSoptimist

War is no solution to problem

A barbaric activity that results in nothing , bur brings catastrophic effects to life and land. (What is that barbaric activity? the reader does not get an idea (or even if he has some idea, you have not penned it down). War: A barbaric activity(use undertaking) that results in nothing but catastrophes for the world.


If wars are not stopped, they would eventually conclude towards an end to mankind.
If wars are not averted (stopped: means that the war is going on. Averting is like we are ending the war before it even starts. Avert would be appropriate word in the context of this topic)

Dialogue and reconciliation are two most effective tools that can avert the mammoth of all disputes and problems , history itself is witness to it

( i have just attempted introduction , trying to set my sails in a proper direction , guidance needed)

Regards

Originally Posted by umarabbas

Please find my comments above. Good effort you have that all essential spark!

Originally Posted by Nishi

its good effort ...try to share something on current topics too . like industrialization....and how to handle such topic

Originally Posted by googlechrome

Please please check my outline:

Forests are the lungs of earth. Destruction of the world’s forest amounts to death of world, currently we know. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Problem: deforestation
Time scope: present plus future
Place scope: Plant earth
Coining the name of essay:


“Perils of deforestation”
Outline:
1- Introduction:
After industrial revolution in 18th century, more land and natural resources became a prerequisite for economical and social growth of countries. Consequently it gave rise to indiscriminate deforestation and wasteful use of natural resources. On one hand more fuel produced more environmental hazards while on the other hand, forests, the moderators became increasingly thin. This resulted in pollution and general spread of diseases and much more disturbances for ecosystems. Thus trees are the lungs of planet, making it habitable for us.
2- Effects of deforestation:
i- Atmospheric filtering stopped
a- Pollution whether noise of dust will be rampant
b- Diseases will be widespread
ii- Co2 level will shoot up
a- Very densely clouded green house will be observed
b- Temperature will rise
c- Water level rise
d- Crop yield disturbed in terms of quality and quantity
e- Polar caps may melt and summer/ winter balance will be disturbed
f- Frozen mud in northern Canada and green-Land will be releasing trapped methane
g- Skin cancer will be increased probability disease
h- Species will be disappearing
iii- Sudden rise and fall of temperature at day and in night
a- Sudden rise and fall like deserts
b- Change in energy uses not per season, but per day
c- Will make life miserable
iv- Corrosion of earth
a- Woodless land under heavy rains cannot survive its fertile crust.
b- Useful salts will be flown away to sea
v- Habitats of species destroyed
a- Not only man but so many species will be disturbed
b- An overall massacre of wild life
c- Some species will become extinct
d- Surviving Wild life disturbed
vi- Forest resources get limited
a- So many natural resources like honeys, herbs, bark, fodder, wood will become insufficient
vii- Cultivated lands will become brittle
viii- Dams will start filling
a- First stage surface scratched
b- Second stage flown into dams
c- 3rd stage capacity will go down
Conclusion:
Forests are inevitably playing the same or even sophisticated role in sustaining life on planet earth, as compared to lungs in human body. With increasing deforestation man has hemmed himself in so many problems but his survival also has come under question. Thus to let the planet live and nourish in a natural course and harmony planting forests is necessary.