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[virgo786]

EVERY NEW SOLUTION CREATES NEW PROBLEMS
The human life is full of trouble and tribulations. There is no such person on the face of earth whose life is a straight road. He must have to encounter several hurdles and obstacles. The Quran has stressed the usage of wisdom and reflective thought to address all sort of issues .The wise is the person who finds a logical solution to every problem after examining the whole scenario
The dilemma of situation is that solution; itself yields a new phase of suffering. In the wake of energy crises, the government has decided to move to the alternative source of nuclear energy. But this source would led to multiple concerns i.e. harmful disposal of nuclear waste, high cost, precedent of Japanese nuclear fuckshima,hazard for localities and so on.
There is a need of logical and analytical approach to solve problems. As Quaid had said:”think 100 times before taking a decision but once take it then stand by it like a man”. If a person is a sick because of malaria, medicine of typhoid cannot provide any help. There is a dire need to apply appropriate solutions to particular problems. Otherwise it would produce series of new issues.
Similarly the government went for IMF loan to run the business of state which produced new vicious cycle of economic chaos. It has increased the taxation and inflation rate more than ever, making life of common people, altogether, unbearable. So whether, a person or state, should think of viable solutions. Such outcome which resolves the issue in the true sense of word rather than producing new phase of problems.

[Great Afnan]

Your arguments carry little weight to substantiate your stance.

[Great Afnan]

Its not about applying wrong and illogical solution to any problem.You took it incorrectly.Conversely,it emphasises that every solution in general breeds a new problem having a different scope and dimension.Futhermore,there are also some minor grammatical errors such as in line No.1 the use of article was unneeded as you talked about human problems generally.Similarly,in line No 2 You should have used a simile to compare the problems of people with a convoluted road in order to make it metaphorically understandable.

Overall,I both liked and enjoyed reading your expansion.If it was just a beginning,I can guarantee that that is too much room for improvement as far you current level is concerned.keep practicing writing english on daily basis for at least 1- 2 hours and then just see the results.You will ultimately master writing english irrespective of whether it is an essay,a precis or an expansion.

Good Luck.Take Care