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Thanks a lot for your concern... Actually i used 'it' in place of he/she as using he makes the whole concept biased. what about those underlined sentences....where you did not pointed out any mistake?? |
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No need to say thanks brother, I feel pleased to serve the aspirants of CSS
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while in case of Islam it is moderators. Here i was unable to understand what you wanted to say. |
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Welcome. Concentrate on simple sentence structure first. You are making simple punctuation mistakes.
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Unconditional foreign aid in a correct rhythm is (a) genuine blessing. The aid which assist (assists) in improving economic conditions, enforce (enforces) developmental projects and comes with decrement of impoverishment handicapping is a boon. Wide dispersion of prosperity in recipient country is attest of foreign aid's importance (testifies the importance of foreign aid). A country, for example, (If a country) is fertile in reservoirs but poor in resources to have get vantage of these reservoirs (then) foreign aid to such a country can be benediction (a blessing) in handling to handle the resources in order to boon. After World War II, for another example, USA to reconstruct shattered European nations. (make a new paragraph and give more details of this sentence, because this sentence is hanging in the air) Foreign aid faces handful challenges as well. If it is not delivered properly, it does good only to then it only benefits corrupt leaders and does never compass targeted purport. If a nation has to compromise over its sovereignty in order to get aid then it becomes more fetal (fatal) rather than a help. , It (it) does not ameliorate economic conditions and scathe the image of a country at international level. In (the) third world countries like Pakistan and Lebanon, for example, aid is used for political purposes and , to construct villas for already rich (no need of ‘for already rich’) and is never benefited by one for whom it is sent. More over foreign aid makes a nation dependent. Israel, for example, is receiving aid from USA until 1948 to date (since 1948) and is through and through dependent on it. In most of the cases it (‘it’ is used for what? For aid?) implants longitudinal unobliging effects over (in) a country when (if) not delivered with sound conditions or used with proper management. |
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It is used for aid....
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Ok, then in new paragraph you have to use the word 'aid' instead of 'it', because the reader does not know your intention of using 'it'. |
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To clear up the idea with the help of as ordinary example as of a general (If a military general,) who has given up, assumes (thinks) that it is unimaginable to overcome his (the) rivals, (then it impossible for him to win). A dull student, for instance, takes it impossible to get the distinguish (distinction) as (because) he/she believes that it is insufferable (inconceivable). In fact he/she never tries to get it. Even an interovert can get the gift on the gab (Even an introvert can be an extrovert). Nothing, in this world, is impossible. (But to make it possible, you have to try it.). If we dive deep in the history of the (no need of ‘the’) mankind we come up (with the fact) that every impossible of one epoch is the possible of the next one. In past times, for instance, to cure Malaria was inconceivable (Malaria was incurable) but scientist tried its hand (their hard) to discover a treatment. and carried all before it. Europeans, for another example (no need of ‘for another example’) never tried to expose (disover) new sea routs (routes) to India and China. But (but) when they tried by sending expedition to come across (find) the new trade route, they lighted upon it (became successful). To be at the moon was (only) a dream but journey to moon took it to taste. When one tries to triumph an impossible, it remains so no longer (When one tries, it no longer remains an impossible), every thing is possible. We close with (leave) many things as impossible. Look up today's impossibles (We have to look towards today’s impossibilities to make them possible by hard work, wisdom and with positive mind). Life on sun, for example, is not possible because no one ever called it in question. How ever when ever it will be, it will go off well in long run. (Its really impossible, I think) Going upon above examples it turns out that impossible is impossible because it is not being tried to make it possible. When it is tried it no longer remains impossible. ( Repetition) |
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Come true is right... but i think come about is not wrong???
stands to reason/ means........ almost stands for the same meaning???? I am using the word scientist(not scientists) so 'its' is according to subject. why to use their?? come across/find....... stands for the same meaning? close with/ leave???
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Life has resilient nature, it never let hope to cut off even in the lurch. It arrives at specific conditioning through entertaining demands at variable intervals and in variable amounts and some times at discretion. This comes up with optimism. Optimism let one to crow over even in inauspicious conditions. In fact life do miracles in lurch conditions and turns the corner.
It triumphs, when there is no hope of its victory. Traditional stories, which are being recounted by a man to a child, have the ultimate positive end. They implants in the flesh and blood that every bad and the worst have a well chosen end. And in actual the same comes about. A death bed patient, for an ordinary example, bears a charmed life. A stuck labor in a mine is rescued after a couple of days. These off and thens are the very reason that the hope dies but with the last breath. If we dive deep in the history of world, we come up that every time when there was no way out but stars were in the ascendant. Subcontinent's fate in 17th century was hanging in balance. All India National Congress decided it in complete darkness. Germany, when it was quite at sea, found the hope in the shape of Hitler. USA was quite at its wit's end and was about to gave up all in vain after ten years war but it made a pile and turned the table by killing Osama. On contrary there are many cases where felicity is left awaited and never comes. A pathetic poor man facing adverse economic situations, for instance, annihilates itself because he/she remains unable to discover light in future. Over all, life is beautiful having optimistic nature and whenever it is being challenged it nails its color to the mast.
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And suppose if only a single scientist tried to find the cure for malaria then we have to use 'his' not 'its'. |
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