It is still confusing that why it can not be used in place of HE?SHE,, in order to avoid biasness?? my teacher recommends to use it??

A man is the same as it was in the childhood. The lessons learnt in the puerility are unforgettable. Science argues that the persona of a person is developed by the age of 8 and the rest of life depends upon the way, determined in that early age. According to psychology, one part of the personality's three parts is active even in newborns, that is id. Id further gives birth to ego and super ego in later age. So it is well said that a child is the father of the man.

Language is the characteristic feature of the childhood and no one ever forgets its primary language. No matter, any other language he tries to learn with utmost effort, he can never get full command of it. In the childhood, one learns to value relations and to respect parents and elders, throughout the life, he gives regard to these relations.

Negative experiences of young age leave a persistent grievous effects on mankind. Sexual abuse at the childhood causes many psychological complexities in the personality of a man. Deprivations of the puerility also walk side by side through out life.

In order to develop a healthy youth, there is a need to develop mentally healthy children. They should be teated as if they are real father of mankind.

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At a certain point in our lives...our lives become controlled by fate. That's the world's greatest lie.

confusion about what?

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Try not to become a man of success but a man of value.

confusion in using 'it' or 'he/she',
mankind enjoys lots of blessing. It/he/she deserves to have them.

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At a certain point in our lives...our lives become controlled by fate. That's the world's greatest lie.

corrections:
1. Wrong sentence structure. Correction: Man always remains same as it behaves/acts/learns in the childhood.
2. The lesson which learned/learnt
3. No comma
4. ambiguous structure of this sentence"one part of the personality's three parts is active"
5. No use of TO. It is the repetition as already used with VALUE.
6. No comma after ELDERS. Use full stop.
7. through out life. Correction. Throughout THE life.
8. spelling, i guess it is a typo. TREATED.

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Flattery is a social evil. It serves the same purpose as that of devil. Corruption, depravity and injustice are byproducts of flattery. Victim of it never knows about it but when it gets too late to mend. It is just like sweet poison.

An ordinary example of flattery is to flatter a teacher by his/her student, in order to get good marks. Flattered, if at the top of the tree, is being used by his/her subordinates to get illegitimate benefits of his/her position. It may includes to dis merit talent by manipulating flattered with help of flattery. Flatterer is such an ugly customer who never lets his/her target know that what's what and what he/she is all about.

Flatterer is a wolf in sheep's clothes and its victim goes hard with criticism because he/she becomes habitual of hanging on his lips good words about self. Under the thumb of flatterer he/she can not bear even constructive and positive criticism by sincere ones. Flattered nature of giving himself/herself airs results in reducing sincere people around him/her and enhancing flatterers.

In short; vanity, corruption, lie and many other social evils are result of flattery. All these factors, which cause chaos in a society, are obligations of devil. When devil gets an subordinate, flatterer, to fulfill its responsibilities, there remains no need of devil itself, So devil can enjoy a break.

Correction please

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Life has resilient nature, it never lets hope to cut off even in the lurch. It arrives at specific conditioning through entertaining demands at variable intervals and in variable amounts and some times at discretion. This comes up with optimism. Optimism let one to crow over even in inauspicious conditions. In fact, life does miracles in lurch conditions and turns the corner.
It triumphs, when there is no hope of its victory.

Traditional stories, which are being retold by a man to a child, have the ultimate positive influence. They implants in the flesh and blood that every bad and the worst have a well chosen end. And in actual the same comes about. A death bed patient, for an ordinary example, bears a charmed life. A stuck labor in a mine is rescued after a couple of days. These off and thens are the very reason that the hope dies but with the last breath.

If we dive deep in the history of the world, we come up that every time when there was no way out but stars were in the ascendant. Subcontinent's fate in the 17th century was hanging in balance. All India National Congress decided it in complete darkness. Germany, when it was quite at sea, found the hope in the shape of Hitler. The USA was quite at its wit's end and was about to gave up all in vain after ten years war but it made a pile and turned the table by killing Osama.

On contrary there are many cases where felicity is left awaited and never comes. A pathetic poor man facing adverse economic situations, for instance, annihilates itself because he/she remains unable to discover light in the future.

Overall, life is beautiful having optimistic nature and whenever it is being challenged it nails its color to the mast.

Corrections please

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Hope is the buoy of life

Resilient nature of life is quite due to hope. Hope finds out bright lines even in utmost darkness. If one has nothing but hope, it can get every thing and if one has every thing but hope, it can loss every thing. Hope lets one to think miracles even in impossible situations. If one cuts off hope, it ultimately cuts off life.

Hope is just like life jackets which are used when there is some accident in waters. Life jackets save lives but for a short period of time, and after that if victims are not being rescued, they die. Same is true for hope, if it does not get any positive regard it also dies.

Hope is a permanent source of happiness even in miserable conditions. An ill old woman, whose son is at border in a war, lives with a hope that one day her son will be back with medals. A patient, suffering from an incurable disease, lives with an unrealistic hope of long life.Thus in adverse conditions only hope can make one to smile.

Hope saves life when it is about to end but it alone can not help saving life for a long time.

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At a certain point in our lives...our lives become controlled by fate. That's the world's greatest lie.

Internet is a modern way of getting in touch with rest of the world.

Internet converted the world exactly into a glibal village. Now, one living in Japan is quite at written, verbal and even visual communication with the other one living in Denmark. Another hallmark of internet is that it gives free access to a number of educational journals, books, general informations and current affairs. Countless development in the field of trade and business is also one of the miracles of internet. More over it minimizes the chances of cultural clash by providing knowledge of each culture.

Along with this all, we can not ignore the way, internet is exploiting the youth. It is refraining youth from being in touch with libraries and diminishing the book reading habit among students and scholars. It thus makes therm through and through dependent upon technology. Further more a number of useless sites providing chit chat and low quality videos, which not only wastes youth's precious time but also demolishes moralities. Freedom of expression allows any one to write any thing about any one in any way. It causes chaos when one speaks bad against other's good.

To all intents and purposes, a gun itself never shots an innocent but it is the hunter who shots. A knife can cut both the vegetable and the neck. Same goes for internet. So it is up to use whether to make internet a blessing or a bane.

please mark out the mistakes

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A civil servant is paid by public to manage a state's system. He/she is hired by government mostly through competitive exams. He/she is directly responsible for any good and bad of his/her area and his/her actions can be questioned by the public. As the civil servant is paid by the public so officially it is supposed to be the servant of the public.

The situation is quite opposite in third world countries. The civil servant has long forgotten his responsibilities. He does what he wants to do or what his officers wants him to do. He promotes corruption, depravity and injustice, making most of his opportunities to construct villas by feathering his won nest. He takes himself as lord of the public and wants it to be at his back and call but this concept is now loosing grounds.

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To sum up, the purpose of the civil servant is not to entertain his seniors or to serve his own self but to serve the public...

Please mark our mistakes

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