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Aik Admi and others following this thread, I would like to bring these two outlines to your attention. Both of these are from qualified candidates. You can easily notice that they started off with 'mundane details' and came to the actual point somewhere near the middle of their essays. Yet, they both qualified. On the other hand, you have Tupac's essay (which also qualified); it was essentially focused on the point from the outset. Can you guys appreciate the contradiction? Even bigger question: can someone reconcile the apparently contradicting approaches? #FoodForThought
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Cogito,
You are right. One has to spoon feed his thoughts to the examiner. So, he won't have to budge and make the slightest of an effort to understand what the candidate has actually written. 🤓 Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk |
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Cogito...you are 100% right...
Toru might have some ingenious points to make. This is unsettling... |
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thank u so v much for ur response.how it seems,is it possible to come through this paper.my third attempt n i dont want to b a looser this time,too
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Waqar. I am sorry to break your heart but I am a normal human being and don't possess the angelic devices the CSS examiners use to tell the good from the evil. Don't bank on my word. Bus sajday mein gir jaein tayyaari ker k, shayad Allaah examiner k dil mein rahem daal de.
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examiner awarded me 65 in 2014 but failed in comprehension
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Great! Anyway I am just wondering should the OUTLINE precede the Introduction or follow it?
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yes sure, but pardon me if I miss some thing because its quite a time now.
Introduction: When you fall on ground, you still got a ground to rise again. What it takes to turnaround? (here I discussed some research findings and quoted HBR and GE reports too plus some general traits like persistence, hope, following intuition and strategy etc) characteristics of leaders who turned around things. Case study (Individuals) Abraham Lincoln: A successful friend of hard luck. Muniba Mazari: A warrior on wheel chair. Case Study (Countries) Germany: From wounded Nazi to backbone of EU. Japan: From broken empire to Asian industrial leader Pakistan: From ashes to glory; but how? What we were? What we are? What can be done? Conclusion Destiny: Made by You! That is all I remember which I wrote in outline. |
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