Yes,it is true that mostly english professors is strongly recommended to avoid examples in intro and used short sentences in outline.But in css-2015 mostly essay quailifiers were used long sentences and also enumerate examples in intro.New anaytical topics,I think demand so.

not economy but politics is the key to success


A.introduction

B.Role of successful politics in historical context
1.Abbasid caliphate at time of haroon ur Rasheed was most prosperous period because of his diplomatic ties outside and educational friendly policies at home
2.europe was pacified only after rivalries of germany,france and England were ended politically
3.President Wilson rallied Americans behind him in WW1 after playing successful politics and convinced world for his Fourteen points
4.UNO was the outcome of successful politics between World leaders
5.pakistan indepence was the result of successful politics played by Quaid e Azam although Muslims were economically worse

B.significance of polics in present world scenario
1.Gulf countries are economically strong, but weak politics have plunged them into turmoil
2.USA is still dominating the world because of its safe politics through international organizations
3.Arab economies are still unable to challenge israel because of its strong diplomatic ties with USA and Europe as well as its stable domestic politics which keep israeli nation united

C.Politics direct and stimulate growth of economy
1.china rise began after economic reformations introduced by Deng xiaoping in 1978
2.turkey stabilize its economy and overpowered its military takeovers through politics of Justice and Development party led by Erdogan since 2001
3.Fate of arab countries changed by its oil trade after 1973 when OPEC decided to increase its prices three times
4.third world countries still carry begging bowls because of weak politics who are so far failed to exploit natural resources

D. politics make atmosphere conducive for economic prosperity
1. business friendly policies attracts FDI (dubai and singapore)
2. Agriculture and Industrial sectors advanced through domestic policies
3. educational level and research culture heighten in country when there is seriousness on part of political leaders (japan, USA and european countries can be cited as examples)

E. politics of negotiations avoid wars while economy carries nations to wars by its weight
1. japans devastation in WW2
2. canada's refrendum in quebec province settle dispute forever
3. america's current advantures have got her into hot water

F. why pakistan is still not successful
1. politicians are adept at amassing personal wealth but negligent towards good goverance
2. political instabilities have failed to exploit natural resources and benefitting from ideal geographic location of country
3. failed to allocat more than 3% of GDP to educational sector
4. agriculture sector is in shatters because of weak government policies
5. tourism is on decline because of instablities and insecurities in the country

G.recommendations for Pakistan

H. conclusion


evaluate it seniors and friends please

Don't you think HEADING F is irrelevant to the topic. The topic is not asking about the reasons why pakistan is not successful...... Recommendations for pakistan heading is equally irrelevant and unnecessary.

FIRST TWO HEADINGS are superb

I think ' detailed examples' should be avoided; in the literary topic we can write enough without reference of examples but in such type of essay, an example clears our stance.

as far as the length of sentences concern, lengthy sentences should be avoided conditioned that the idea can be explained in a simple sentence.

when you have to include two to three different points in a sentence, then what to do?

do not you think breaking that single sentence into many short sentences will destroy the main idea?

Good luck sir.

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i think its plausable to discus Pakistan in the context of main theme of the essay. All the points i have discussed under the heading pertaining to Pakistan are relavent to politics . In Recommendations one can give his opinion how to adjust economy and politics by taking appropriate steps. but due to shortage of time i didnt feel necessay to write detail under it.

Discuss Pakistan in the light of the main arguments, not otherwise.

It's important to note the difference.

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okx thank you both of you .can u elaborate it little bit more by citing one or two examples

For example, write in the outline that political instability leads to chaos and every bad thing.

Then cite the examples from Pakistan and elsewhere to support your claim IN THE MAIN BODY of the essay.

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