If you really really want to discuss the two sides of one picture, then do so as explicitly as possible.

Be your own judge.

If you think that you can manage something, and others (including myself) may not agree with you on the forum, then you just go with your own flow. At least you will be confident.

And you're going to be a CSP, be decisive and opinionated.

In a practical sense, you cannot take two sides.

There will be two options for you. both are good. Which one will you choose?

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thank you safeer! after going through the outlines of successful candidates, I agreed that two types of opinion are not welcomed by checker. I endorse your point that the checker is a professor of english not a scholar of political science or sociology etc. so what he is checking is your stance, strength of your stance and then your power to prove your stance .dense essays no matter how good they are do not give one a good result. my uncle is an english professor and once i asked him to check my essay on ' internationalisation of terrorism', he got fed up after reading first paragraphs which were indirectly explaining the topic. his response was 'where is the main essay, no one is going to read such irrelevant stuff; it irks examiner'.

essay is just about relevance, simplicity and your expression of proving you right.

The value of democracy and democratic values is the different subject. you should have discussed why democracy is valued. the rest of points except 1 are good, good approach and comprehensive analysis of all the issues. nice effort

what is the next topic?

What about this one: "Not economy, but politics is a key to success".

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What is the title of the essay?

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the topic of the above essay is 'World politics stands more derisive than it had been ever before'
your above-mentioned topic is a good one, but I think we should complete the topic related to democracy 1st, so let's complete 'democracy is a culture rather than a process'. then economy and politics. we will complete the maximum number of topics in a sequence inshAllah.
others please participate

Democracy is a culture rather than a process

Introduction

Democracy is not a machine that runs by itself once the proper principles and procedures are inserted. It is a developed culture that needs the commitment of citizens who accept the inevitability of conflicts as well as the necessity for tolerance. It is a tradition of accepting differences and spirit of compromise. Democracy is not a process of cyclical selection of candidates to rule the people but a process of building the trust necessary to resolve future problems. The frequently occurring military overtakes of governments in underdeveloped societies are evidence to the fact that democracy is not a process of electing candidates through election but it is a set of behaviors, practices and norms that define the ability of a people to govern themselves and to freely decide for their interests. In the culture of democracy, people are governed by their own freely chosen rights and rules. Whenever the concept of democracy is promulgated as a process it produces elected despots to rule people; democracy succeeds only when people internalize it as a culture and then use it as a tool to secure their rights.

I think this time there will be no essay on such topic like .....Terrorism

Democracy is a culture rather than a process

Introduction
Democracy is not a machine that runs by itself once the proper principles and procedures are inserted. It is a developed culture that needs the commitment of citizens who accept the inevitability of conflicts as well as the necessity for tolerance. It is a tradition of accepting differences and spirit of compromise. Democracy is not a process of cyclical selection of candidates to rule the people but a process of building the trust necessary to resolve future problems. The frequently occurring military overtakes of governments in underdeveloped societies are evidence to the fact that democracy is not a process of electing candidates through election but it is a set of behaviors, practices and norms that define the ability of a people to govern themselves and to freely decide for their interests. In the culture of democracy people are governed by their own freely chosen rights and rules. Whenever the concept of democracy is promulgated as a process it produces elected despots to rule people; democracy succeeds only when people internalize it as a culture and then use it as a tool to secure their rights.

A. Democratic culture creates true democracy

1. Democracy is characterized by the way people see things
2. Certain values and traditions support the functional democracy
3. Freely chosen activities of societies shape the democracy
4. The capacity of people to create, sustain and improve a regime enhance the democracy
5. Willingness of individual and group to tolerate each other’s differences is basis of democracy
6. Accommodation of conflicts through debate and compromise is the power of democracy
7. True democracies of USA and Western Europe are strengthened by their democratic cultures.

B. process of democracy without democratic culture leads to failure

1. Absence of democratic culture leads to failure of democracy in the third world

2. Democracy fails to work against a rigid ideology; it works in a system where problems can be argued over and changed accepted or discarded.

C.Promotion of democratic culture is essential for success of democracy

1. Conventional factors such as education and media cannot promote democracy unless there is the promulgation of values and traditions of democracy.

2. Internalization of democratic culture in nation’s social, political and economic life.

3. Creation of a free society, pursuing its own interests and responsible for its action is prerequisites for the success of democracy.

4. The promotion of the strong culture of coalition-building promotes democracy.

Conclusion

Pakistan is a land of Opportunities surrounded by internal and external threat.
Outline:
1) Introduction;
a) An overview of current prevailing opportunities and threats
2) Brief profile of opportunities in this land of pure
A. Geography:
a) Strategic position in South Asia
b) 650 Miles of Coastline
c) Gwadar--- World’s largest deep sea port
d) TAPI gas pipeline
B. Natural Resources:
a) 185 billion tons Coal Reserve
b) 9.1 billion barrels reserve of Shale oil(crude oil)
c) Reqo Diq (a mine of Gold, silver and copper minerals)
d) Gas, oil and solar power reserves
C. Agricultural Resources:
a. Largest Irrigation network
b. Fertile lands and heavily food production
c. Leading Producers & Consumer of cotton and textile in the world
D. Economic Opportunities:
a. Semi-industrialized and 26 largest economy in terms of purchasing power parity (PPP)
b. GSP Plus status from EU
c. Pak-China economic corridor a game changer project
d. Successful launching of Euro Band, auction of 3G and 4G
E .Human Capital Resources:
a. Sixth largest population in the world
b. Youth comprising major chunk
3) Internal Threats:

a. Politicized the security institutions
b. Sectarian violence (Shia and Sunny proxy wars)
c. Energy Crisis is a disruption in economic progress
d. Terrorism the biggest threat to Pakistan
e. Poverty, Illiteracy, Social Injustice, Intolerance and Unemployment are some looming demographic disasters
f. Political instability
g. Lack of consensus and coordination among security institutes and state organs over the several critical issues

4) External Threats:
a) Conflicts with India on various matters
b) War on terror and Talbinzation in Afghanistan
c) Iran and Saudi Arabia’s conflict over Yemen issue and emerging of ISIS
d) Iran’s Charbhar v/s Pakistan’s Gwadar port
e) Tarnished Image of Pakistan in the world


5) Suggestions:
6) Conclusion:
INTRODUCTION:
Take up the opportunity or lost the opportunity is similar for a nation who would not like to realize its significance for national economy and development. Pakistan is blessed with unlimited natural, economic, geographic, agricultural and human capital resources that make her a dynamic place in the South Asia. Since coming into existence as an independent Islamic state, Pakistan is facing many internal and external threats. The challenges of threats have made Pakistan a most vulnerable place in the world. Due to this vulnerability, Pakistan has lost various economic and business investment opportunities, as well as its foreign relations are severely affected in this regard. National security is a key which ensures peace, prosperity, national integrity and national sovereignty of a nation. Safe and sound environment is the first and foremost priority of every business transaction. Foreign investors are reluctant to invest here when state is unable to protect their lives and property. Pakistan is a multi-ethnic, multi-lingual and multi-cultural place which determines its national security and creating inter-communal violence among different groups and leads to chaos in society in the name of religion which poses an existential threat to internal security. Karachi which was once, famous in the world as a city of lights and a national hub of trade for Pakistan now has become a tale of terror. On the other hand, conflicts with India on several matters and its insurgency in our provinces further worsened the atmosphere. Furthermore, the involvement of Pakistan in Afghanistan in the war on terror as an American ally after 9/11 incidence was a sole resort of terrorism resultantly in Pakistan. However, the emerging clarity among institutions and political consensus among stakeholders is a positive sign in this regard. The implementation of National Action plan, Karachi operation and Military operation in North Waziristan and Political consensus among all parties on Pak-China economic corridor are evident that all stakeholders are now on the same page.
Ambivalent, Waqarabbasi, Safeer Khan and other members plz check it.

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Mass Media can accelerate socio-economic growth (PMS-2014)

Outline:
1) Introduction:
1.1. Tools of mass media can disseminate the people for their socio-economic rights
1.2. Yes: Mass media access can accelerate socio-economic growth
2. Which role of mass media can play in social change
2.1. Mass media can break the idle of landlordism who grab the socio-economic rights of people with power
2.2. Mass media can remove the barriers of gender discrimination
2.3. Mass media can highlight the significance of education
2.4. Mass media can bring change in health and aware the people about diseases.
2.5. Mass media can resolve the environmental(climate change and global warming) issues
2.6. Mass media can restore the rights of the proletariat
2.7. Mass media can revive the culture and civilization of one’s nation
2.8. Mass media can promote new trends in fashion industry
3. Which role of mass media can play in economic change
3.1. Highlight the economic opportunities in the backward areas
3.2. Help the government in various economic projects as a opinion maker and policy formulation
3.3. Highlight the significance of bilateral trades between the nations with its expertise team network
3.4. Mass media can highlight the agricultural and industrial sectors’ problems
3.5. Mass media’s financial analysis and forecasting about future predictions will also bring positive results
3.6. Mass media can explore the international trade markets and enrich the business community
4. Way forward
4.1. Mass media should highlight the socio-economic issues at national and international forums
4.2. Mass media should restore the socio-economic image of one’s country
4.3. Mass media should help the government in frame the socio-economic development polices
4.4. Mass media should break the vicious circle of poverty with the packages of economic and taxation reforms
5. Conclusion:
5.1. No doubt mass media can change socio-economic narratives with its wide area of network.
Please check it too.

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