Originally Posted by faiza rajput

Climate change: Inaction is costlier than action
a)Introduction

b)Climate change is costing us:

((Make your main headings using the title of the essay. Write these points under the heading of the cost of inaction and omit this section))

(i)Our prevailing weather pattern
(ii)Our prevailing cropping pattern
(iii)Our healthy lives by generating drastic effects
(iv)Billions of dollars spend on reconstruction of annihilation caused by calamities

((simply write economic cost, psychological cost, social costs, security threats, food security. Remember that simpler is better))

(v)Healthy economic activity


a.Comparatively shorter winter period: Decrease demand of winter cloth

c)Cost of action for reducing the pace of climate change
i)Reduction in carbon emission *led to reduced economic activity

((*leads to))


ii)Change in comfortable lifestyle: Lesser use of refrigerator, cars, AC etc
iii)Cost associated with reduction of greenhouse gases
iv)Cost of spreading awareness about climate change consequences and its remedies
v)Cost of plantation of new trees and preservation of existing one
vi)Cost of efficient handling of household waste instead of burning it
vii)Cost of exploration of environment friendly energy instead of coal and oil use

d)Cost of inaction and letting climate change proceed
i)Ecosystems of different regions will **be hurt irreparably
ii)Weather will change permanently leaving severe effects on indigenous culture
iii)Lesser food options will be available
iv)Air will be too intoxicated to breathe without suffering
v)Oceans and rivers will eat land creating severe habitat problems
vi)Desertification will be at its peak

e)Required Actions for tackling climate change problem
i)Compliance with Kyoto protocol and Cop21
ii)Strict measurements against divergent states
iii)Increase awareness at mass level

f)conclusion


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Originally Posted by Ambivalent

The war on terror has contributed to the growing abuse of human rights.

Content to write in this essay.
-Short definition and explanation of war on Terror, and Human rights.
-The current war on terror: Pakistan, Afghanistan, Iraq, Syria, Africa, etc.
-The going on abuse of human rights: How women, minorities, children, elder, citizens, etc. go through the problems of abuse of human rights. Give examples of each, IDPs, Muhajareen, Locals people affected, Violence, Rapes, Honour killings, etc.
-Contribution of war on terror to this growing abuse.
-What are the contributions of war on terror to this growing abuse. Give all the contributions. 1. US's War in Iraq lead to the Abuse of human rights
-Then explain how it is contributing one by one: 1. Iraq's war lead to large scale sectarian conflict contributing largely to the growing abuse of human rights there.
Continue adding 15 or 20 points to make your essay healthier.
Other points can be:
2. War on terror in Afghanistan and its contribution to the growing abuse of human rights.
3. Pakistan.
4. Africa.
5. Innocents teased and their rights violated in US and Europe over security issues due to War on Terror.


Addition of points are highly appreciated.

Originally Posted by Strandedsoul

THANKS ...

in the outline , should one add the quotations ????
or simply in heading form will b more marks fetching??????

Originally Posted by burnhal

Plz somebody answer my query

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Originally Posted by burnhal

How to make outlines for essay like what to read and then write for practice?
Suggest any good book of essays for reading and practice?

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Originally Posted by burnhal

One has to have material in mind to write on topic so from where to have such material on related topic from a single source?
In simple terms how to practice if one doesn't have material.

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Originally Posted by waqarabbasi

The United Nations in 21st century; obligations and limitations
Introduction
The obligations of UN remain the same but the problems, it confronts, have been changed .the functions today are not limited to maintaining the balance of power among states. Today, it has to restore order in regions where there are no central powers and the status of states has been reduced to sub-states. The chaos which non-state actors have been producing changes the nature of the world politics. The United Nations cannot play a role of mediator among actors who have no national identities. It has to decide the future of the non-state actors, a decisive strategy to eliminate them. The rising powers also challenge the present structure of UN and demand the redefinition of the roles played by the bigger powers. The contemporary world demands a widened role of UN, recognizing the respectable status of the potential powers and their concerns.

A.21ST century widens the nature of UN’s obligations

1. Redefining the national identities of the volatile regions in the Middle East
2. Incorporating the will of the potential powers in political matters
3. Preventing the nuclear confrontations
4. Reinventing strategy to accommodate the new powers
5. Taking responsibility for impartial solution of foreign aggression
6. Proper regulation of MDGs in the world
7. Playing a leading role in protecting climate

B. Which elements paralyze UN in the 21st century?

1. Conflicting interests of the states
2. Financial dependence on few powerful states
3. The unlimited powers of big five
4. The complicated political scenario of the world
5. Its incapacity to bring the offenders to the book

C. The limitations essential for its survival in 21st century

1. Non-interference in the decision-making process of independent states
2. Disregard for the approval of military actions against weaker states
3. Restriction on the unlimited powers of big five

D. only a vigilant UNO is the need of 21st century

Conclusion

comments please,
my outline, on any topic including the introduction para, takes 1 hour and 2 hours seem to me enough to write a good essay of 1800 to 2000 words.
if there is any flaw please highlight