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Essays r a bit tricky. i wish i cud get a better understanding of the evaluation n scoring system! Like in GMAT we r able to view sample essays ranging in scores.. u know like:The following sample essay would receive the highest rating..

or maybe there is such a thing n iím not aware of it
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I appeared in the CSS-2005 and failed in the essay.
i never bothered practicing on how to write an essay. i thought i wouldnt face any probs and get away with it....but i didnt
the topis i chose was ISLAM VS WEST. i had plenty of data to dwell on but i think i failed because i didnt take into account the following factors:
1: all my essay was a disjointed chunk of seperate paragraphs. that is, paras weren't synchronized
2: my into was abysmally pathetic
3: i was using a ball point and i couldnt erase my grammatical mistakes or otherwise
4: my conclusion was astonishingly abrupt
5: i added stuff in my essay which i cud have done without
6: sometimes, my essay diverted from the main point

i got 27 out of 100, whihc was quite encouraging for i was expecting 8. anyways, fellas, avoid all of the above and start PRACTICING
REMEMBER, practice can get u 40 (dont ask for too much)
Essay is the only paper that can dampen ure wild aspirations. well, ure aspirations may not b wild. mine were
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well dears,
i appeared in css-2005, passed n secured overall 21 position.in essay my topic was, Soci-eco challenges........ i secured 47 marks. well not good enough but passing it was enough. i wrote outline first.eg.
1.Social probs.
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b.
c. n so on.
2.eco prob.
a.
c. n so on
then i inter related social n eco prob with each oyher. like povert is mother of crime. a poor ( economics) commits crime ( social).
in end i suggested, recommendations, remedies n conclusion ( gave headings also). my essay was a bit lenthy ( 35 pages). Brain storming is imp before randomly start writing. better luck next time.
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Salaam,

Brother Khattak, congratulations on your triumph. Finally you made it through. Getting a merit number @ 21 is quite a big deal. Good job.

I totally agree with your outlines, specially the part in which you related the social and economic problems. I stated exactly the same thing in my post.

Wish to see you around.

Best of Luck!

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PS: What do you think is the reason behind such a less marks in the Essay paper. Their tight checking, or something else you would like to tell ?

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'The Economist' released weekly stands at Rs. 200/each now (previously Rs. 160). It's unaffordable. You can get them in any good book or magazine shop in Karachi.

I didn't seek the first two much, but im' sure they must also be available there in Karachi.

Economists can best be perused online www.economist.com or in a periodical section in any library or university.

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Economist is world's widely circulated magazine and is available in Pakistan on the same date when it issued from London. But as Adil mentioned it is tooo costly.

You can get a copy of strategic studies digest from Mr. Book in Islamabad and can also contact Institute of Strategic Studies in Islamabad, if they can subscribe it through mail.

Quarterly Digest of Friends can also be subscribed by visiting in their office near Race Course ground in Rwp. After that they will send a copy by post.

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dear brothers and sisters....

i can not write essay properly.although i read much gen itres and have command over common gen kowledge yet i m lacig very much to get my ideas be shaped properly???

i request u all what should i do.how i should make an out line...

ANY book that ca fulfill my qyuries ????? waitig eagerly.....
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well brother zulfi........in start we face this type of difficulty....if u have enough knowledge you can write much......
1st of all read the essay topic care fully for example if the topic is Socio-economic chalenges faced by Pakistan" in this you have to defince social problems and then social problems of Pakistan in much detail and then what challenges pakistan is facing to overcome these social problem, then same case with economic problems. Then you should give suggestion and also some crticism about the policy of Govt. in Pakistan. and then conclusion. This is what you have to do in this essay.
2nd:you do brainstorming.it means that generate as many as ideas you can about the topic.

Than make an outline. If the topics is Socio-economic challenges faced by pakistan, you do like that:
Introduction
what is social what is society
what are social problems
what are economic problems
Details
Social Chaleneges faced by pakistan
Economic Chalenges face of pakistan
Critics
Suggestions
Conclusion


If any error above....please mention.................
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Lightbulb i m in dire need of short essay abt the "importance of SOCIOLOGY"

dear members i request you all to post a short essay of about 250 words on the imporatnce of sociology ......

i hope u willpost it as soon as possible ...........

i will be highly thankful to you for above act of kindness...
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dear members i request you all to post a short essay of about 250 words on the imporatnce of sociology ......

i hope u willpost it as soon as possible ...........

i will be highly thankful to you for above act of kindness...
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I couldn't find the exact match of your query, but click the linkgiven below, you may find some related information.
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hey guys i need a help i have to paricipate in a debate and the topic given is..... is english medium school important for muslims please answer me that i should go in favour or against and give some points toooo
thanks in advance
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