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hi mansoor one thing frm my personal experience lack of balance is a big issue i did the same mistake and m hopeless abt my result
I think sadly you may be right for my chances.
I did only one page on one aspect and 14 on the second

It was my first attempt you see but i did prepare.Shortsightedness in one paper can make such a huge difference,it's disappointing
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Hey Buddy , !! I cannot say much about balancing ur essay but ur cutting is the real point to be upset at right now! 2 pages straight ? r u kidding me? what happened? i am no ENGLISH but trust me , i rarely recall any cutting in my essay and u went straight for 2 pages? dude !! this could have only one explanation that u were only writing and not thinking while doing it . I pray to God to please let u through but the chances are bleak mate !
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Well i guess that settles it then.My chances are dim,however with serendipity and fate who knows.

Actually i am upset about the fact that only my essay is being discussed.SO come on,whoever wants to share their essay experience especially,please do.
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Well i guess that settles it then.My chances are dim,however with serendipity and fate who knows.

Actually i am upset about the fact that only my essay is being discussed.SO come on,whoever wants to share their essay experience especially,please do.
ok let me discuss my essay i attempted dialogue is the best course to combat terrorism i wanted to contend against the topic and suggest a multi proged strategy incluing dialogue, use of force and eradication of causes of terrorism as a long term goal bt i cud not contain myself from elaborating causes of terrorism and then with a slow speed i cud not round things off smoothly
remember it was my 2nd chance after the essay i was an uphill task to prepare myself to appear for other papers
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Dear Sassi,i hope and believe that you will pass.

The topic you have chosen,i wanted to attempt it but i honestly didn't believe in it.Whilst Terrorism itself is quite a large topic ,the topic Dialogue as a source of solving it or reducing it is much more restricted.Writing the outline for it on rough page,i could go at most past 8 or 9 pages.So i commend you on your brave choice and excellent attempt.I am also glad you didn't get demotivated too much for your other papers too leave them.

See Sassi,this is my biggest fear,that even on second attempt we are liable to make mistakes.You are a talented lad and this is your second attempt,but even then there is risk of failure you see.In your case,perhaps adding a little irrelevancy by studying the causes of terror as well as Arguing against the topic which is definitely brave and intellectually appreciated but could prove to be risky unless the quality of the essay is superb.Both these reasons could scupper a whole year of study and graft
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the css essay is always unpredictable.
u never know whatz goin to happen.
just keep ur fingers crossed.
keep praying for urself and ur friends.
now the game is out of ur court.itz now in ALLAH ALMIGHTY's.HE IS THE GREAT.HE DOES WHAT U CANNOT EXPECT OF.
i hv seen many average people passing the CSS exam and exellent people falling through it.just remember one thing,that is, never swagger.eliminate all kinds of haughtiness.we are all equal.we are all brothers.the superior and inferior only in terms of piety and taqwa that is known only to Almighty Allah.
be simple as much as u can.the ego and false pride are always harmful.

Thanx.
plz pray for me.
ALLAH BLESS U. and we all.
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