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Ammmmara tariq · #**391** Wednesday, June 05, 2013

yup .... sure i am very happy to know about this . i am at initial stage and dont know what to do and how to do ?
plzzzzz must guide me

afshan badar · #**392** Wednesday, June 05, 2013

seniors must join....give topics for eassays so we can prepare outlines for that.....if i am talking about me i am not much familiar that what type of topics should be focus.....so first tell how to structure my eassy bcoz i am weak in that area.... plz assgin me the home work then i will work on that nd dn will give u to seniors to check

mehjabeen karim · #**393** Thursday, June 06, 2013

GLOBAL WARMING
outlines
1.Introduction
2.How G.W occurs
i.Green house Gases
ii.CFCs
iii.CH4
3.Causes of G.W
i.Burning of fossil fuels
ii.Garbage and wastes of agriculture
iii.depletion of ozone layer
iv.Deforestation
v.More use of A.C
4.Consequences of G.W
i.Melting of glaciers and ice
ii.Increase of global temperature
iii.Mortality rate of living organisms increase
iv.Change of behaviour of living organisms
v.Natural disaster increase
5.Historical Record of global temperature
6.How G.W should reduced
i.Reforestation
ii.Use of hybrid transport
iii.Mass awareness programes of reducing G.W
7.Conclusion
G.W is a major threat of environmental changes in the contemporary world.G.W is the increase of global temperature due to green house gasses which is trapping heat in the environment.The causes of G.W are burning of fossil fuels,wide spread cutting of trees,excessive use of transport,garbage of agriculture accumulates CO2 in the environment.The accumulation CO2 ruptured the ozone layer by the reaction atmospheric air;Causes acid rains,Flooding and heavy rainfall.The global warming starts in the mid of 19th century and continues till today which exceeds its limit.Global warming causes many problems by affecting living organisms due harsh temperature.The melting of ice and glaciers amalgamates land and sea level.In the 20 century many countries started policy for reducing G.W programes.To avoid the level of warming of US put forward G.W programes recently.The need of hour is to take some steps to get rid of G.W for future climate and future generations as well.The reforestation program should be started and creates awareness of G.W among the populace by the dint of media the use of solar based transport by the installments of hybrid machines.

Ahmed Faisal · #**394** Thursday, June 06, 2013

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Originally Posted by mehjabeen karim

GLOBAL WARMING
outlines
1.Introduction
2.How G.W occurs
i.Green house Gases
ii.CFCs
iii.CH4
3.Causes of G.W
i.Burning of fossil fuels
ii.Garbage and wastes of agriculture
iii.depletion of ozone layer
iv.Deforestation
v.More use of A.C
4.Consequences of G.W
i.Melting of glaciers and ice
ii.Increase of global temperature
iii.Mortality rate of living organisms increase (Increase in Mortality rate of living organism)
iv.Change of behaviour of living organisms
v.Natural disaster increase (Massive Natural Disasters)
5.Historical Record of global temperature ( This point should be placed after Introduction)
6.How G.W should reduced (How to reduced/mitigate G.W)
i.Reforestation
ii.Use of hybrid transport
iii.Mass awareness programes of reducing G.W
7.Conclusion
G.W is a major threat of environmental changes in the contemporary world.G.W is the increase of global temperature due to green house gasses which is trapping heat in the environment.The causes of G.W are burning of fossil fuels,wide spread cutting of trees,excessive use of transport,garbage of agriculture accumulates CO2 in the environment.The accumulation CO2 ruptured the ozone layer by the reaction atmospheric air;Causes acid rains,Flooding and heavy rainfall.The global warming starts (started) in the mid of 19th century and continues till today [COLOR="Blue"][B](and is still continue) which is increasing day exceeds its limit.Global warming causes many problems by affecting living organisms due to harsh temperature.The melting of ice and glaciers amalgamates land and sea level.In the 20 century many countries started policy for reducing G.W programes( to reduce G.W).To avoid the level of warming of US put forward G.W programes recently( this sentence should be restructured).The need of hour is to take some steps to get rid of G.W so as to save for future climate and future generations as well.The reforestation program should be started and creates awareness of G.W among the populace by the dint of media the use of solar based transport by the installments of hybrid machines.

Mahjabeen you tried your level best. Your contents are Ok, but unfortunately you can not convey your message fully. You still need to work on grammar.

Ahmed Faisal · #**395** Thursday, June 06, 2013

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Originally Posted by shoaaibb

DEMOCRACY AND PAKISTAN:
"OR"
DILEMMA OF DEMOCRACY IN PAKISTAN:

OUTLINES:-

1. Introduction
i. What is Democracy?
ii. Definition of Democracy
iii. Types of Democracy (no need of this point)
iv. History of Democracy

2. Democarcy and Pakistan

3. History of Democracy in Pakistan ( this point is better to place after Inro)

4. Causes of failure of Deomocracy in Pakistan
i. Feudal Class
ii. Weakness of Institutions
iii. Illiteracy Rate (Illiteracy)
iv. Absence of Toleration in Public as well as in Political leaders (Lack of tolerance)
v. Lack of Cooperation, Co-ordination and Interaction between Public and Political Leaders
vi. Absence of Middle Class in Politics (No access of Middle Class In the Politics)
vii. Invovement of Institutions in other Institutions
viii. Weak enforcement of Law and Oreder
ix. Absence of Accountability
x. Weak enforcement of Constitution

5. Signs of Democracy with (without) respect to Pakistan

i. Independance of Judiciary
ii. Independance of Minorities
iii. Independance of Media and Press
iv. Freedom of Thoughts and Expressions
v. Free and Fair Elections
vi. Absence of Corruption
vii. Strongness of Institutions
viii. Presence of Middle Class in Politics

Although these points are not required here, you want to include then their better place is after Intro, definition, and history)
6. Advantages of Democracy
i. Right to form own Government
ii. Peace and Stability
iii. Formationn of new Government peacefully
iv. Government is formed by support of people
v. Ensurance of peace, security, justice and equality
vi. Economical and Social developments

No need of these points

7. Steps taken to restore Democracy in Pakistan

i. Partuicipation of Middle Class in Politics
ii. Increase the Literacy Rate
iii. Limiting the activities of Intekkigence Agencies
iv. Maintenance of Tolerance in Public and Political Leaders
v. Maintenance of Dialogues
vi. Accountability
vii. Strongness of Institutions
viii. Removal of Corruption
ix. Proper enforcement of Constitution

8. Comparison between Military and Democratic Governments in Pakistan

9. Critical Analysis

10. Conclusion

First of All, as I told before that we do not check random topics. We post a topic then everybody attempts it, so I think you should also better to follow the rule. As far as your outline is concerned, you tried your best and some points are good. However, there are many irrelevancies as well

shoaaibb · #**396** Thursday, June 06, 2013

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Originally Posted by shoaaibb

ENERGY CRISIS IN PAKISTAN
OUTLINES:-
1.Introduction
i. What is energy and its importance?
ii. What is energy crisis?
iii. Energy crisis in Pakistan

2. Causes of energy crisis in Pakistan
i. Industrial development
ii. Increase in population
iii. Older power system (generation transmission and distribution)
iv. Theft
V. Mismanagement
vi. No usage of renewable sources/alternative sources
vii. Political and bureaucratic interference

3. Current scenario of energy sector of Pakistan
i. Non-renewable energy sources
a, Thermal power
b, hydel power
ii. Renewable/ alternative energy sources
a, Wind energy
b, Solar energy
c, Energy from gabbage/bio-mass
d, Nuclear energy

4. Consequences of energy crisis
i. Economic sector
ii. Agriculture sector
iii. Industrial sector
iv. Unemployment
v. health of people
vi. Poverty
vii. Social issues

5. Recommendations/ solutions of energy crisis
i. Power conservation strategies
a, change of attitude
b, change in life style
ii. Traffic control method
iii. Demographic method
iii. Solar energy usage
iv. Water sources
v. Wind energy
vi. Tidal energy

6. Conclusion

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mehjabeen karim · #**397** Tuesday, June 11, 2013

faisal bhai plz proceeds essays preparation why member of this thread skip this useful thread.

Ahmed Faisal · #**398** Tuesday, June 11, 2013

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Originally Posted by mehjabeen karim

faisal bhai plz proceeds essays preparation why member of this thread skip this useful thread.

Sister, I really forced many times that members should participate but it seems that they are not interested anymore, so unfortunately we can not proceed with the topics until other members show their interest. Anyhow I hope other members would make this dormant thread alive in near future.

cosmopolite · #**399** Tuesday, June 11, 2013

Dear All,
Please take part in activity,as i had changed my mind of not joining an academy for Essay paper,after getting guidelines from seniors through this page,but from previous weeks it seems that seniors and other aspirates are not so much interested.i am a doing 12 hours job,haven't posted any outline but got a lot of info after reading your outstanding Material posted here.Please carry on this activity.
Shakeel bhai??DMS786 and all other where are u people?

Syeda Bukhari · #**400** Tuesday, June 11, 2013

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Originally Posted by afshan badar

seniors must join....give topics for eassays so we can prepare outlines for that.....if i am talking about me i am not much familiar that what type of topics should be focus.....so first tell how to structure my eassy bcoz i am weak in that area.... plz assgin me the home work then i will work on that nd dn will give u to seniors to check

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