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Well it is a better attempt, but try to expand your introduction. your introduction should be between 150-250 words.
There is no need to drag Islam in this essay. The topic has two domains, what is the meaning of education & what are the purposes of education. Draging religion in every topic showes that you have limited knowledge.
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Introduction.
Meaning of education
1,
2,
3
Purpose of education
political purpose
1.
2.
3.
Social purposes
1.
2
3.
Conclusion.

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There is no need to drag Islam in this essay. The topic has two domains, what is the meaning of education & what are the purposes of education. Draging religion in every topic showes that you have limited knowledge.
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Introduction.
Meaning of education
1,
2,
3
Purpose of education
political purpose
1.
2.
3.
Social purposes
1.
2
3.
Conclusion.

It is my personal perception about this essay. If im wrong plz comment
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It was a question... I have confusion about terrorism and extremism..?
Terrorism: The way of violence action in order to get their desired interests e.g. political, social, economical. For instance, target killing, bomb blasting is an act of terrorism, because they, terrorists are increasing terror in the area where they are willing to gain their vested interests.

Extremism: It is also an act of violence but it can be ideological, religions, political act in order to get their desired goals. For instance, in our current circumstances, may be foreign hands are involved to destabilize our country, and they are creating diverse problems for our country.In addition to this, Western worlds are forcing eastern countries to do each and every thing according to the western desired tendency. Simply, to force some body to do some thing is also an act of extremism.


Militant:
Simply militant is also an organization, or a group of people who are willing to achieve their goals by hook or by crock.

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Senior members are not participating activly in these days, may be they are getting busy somewhere. And, it is a good thing that like us new members are becoming very active and participating regularly. Therefore, I am going to post a topic of today, as we have nearly spend more than 4 days on one topic.


All members are requested to attempt the new topic of our essay in order to continue our discussion smoothly.

Power of Media in the modern world
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Question please check my outlines

ENERGY CRISIS IN PAKISTAN
OUTLINES:-
1.Introduction
i. What is energy and its importance?
ii. What is energy crisis?
iii. Energy crisis in Pakistan

2. Causes of energy crisis in Pakistan
i. Industrial development
ii. Increase in population
iii. Older power system (generation transmission and distribution)
iv. Theft
V. Mismanagement
vi. No usage of renewable sources/alternative sources
vii. Political and bureaucratic interference

3. Current scenario of energy sector of Pakistan
i. Non-renewable energy sources
a, Thermal power
b, hydel power
ii. Renewable/ alternative energy sources
a, Wind energy
b, Solar energy
c, Energy from gabbage/bio-mass
d, Nuclear energy

4. Consequences of energy crisis
i. Economic sector
ii. Agriculture sector
iii. Industrial sector
iv. Unemployment
v. health of people
vi. Poverty
vii. Social issues

5. Recommendations/ solutions of energy crisis
i. Power conservation strategies
a, change of attitude
b, change in life style
ii. Traffic control method
iii. Demographic method
iii. Solar energy usage
iv. Water sources
v. Wind energy
vi. Tidal energy

6. Conclusion
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Senior members are not participating activly in these days, may be they are getting busy somewhere. And, it is a good thing that like us new members are becoming very active and participating regularly. Therefore, I am going to post a topic of today, as we have nearly spend more than 4 days on one topic.


All members are requested to attempt the new topic of our essay in order to continue our discussion smoothly.

Power of Media in the modern world
I have been away for some time, but now I will try to participate on daily basis. You have rightly pointed out the topic, so now we can proceed with this topic.
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ENERGY CRISIS IN PAKISTAN
OUTLINES:-
1.Introduction
i. What is energy and its importance?
ii. What is energy crisis?
iii. Energy crisis in Pakistan

2. Causes of energy crisis in Pakistan
i. Industrial development
ii. Increase in population
iii. Older power system (generation transmission and distribution)
iv. Theft
V. Mismanagement
vi. No usage of renewable sources/alternative sources
vii. Political and bureaucratic interference

3. Current scenario of energy sector of Pakistan
i. Non-renewable energy sources
a, Thermal power
b, hydel power
ii. Renewable/ alternative energy sources
a, Wind energy
b, Solar energy
c, Energy from gabbage/bio-mass
d, Nuclear energy

4. Consequences of energy crisis
i. Economic sector
ii. Agriculture sector
iii. Industrial sector
iv. Unemployment
v. health of people
vi. Poverty
vii. Social issues

5. Recommendations/ solutions of energy crisis
i. Power conservation strategies
a, change of attitude
b, change in life style
ii. Traffic control method
iii. Demographic method
iii. Solar energy usage
iv. Water sources
v. Wind energy
vi. Tidal energy

6. Conclusion
My dear friend, we are moving in a very systematic order, which means after every 3-4 days we post specific topic and then everybody attempts it. Nobody attempts the topic on his own will. I think you should also follow the same pattern. Stay healthy.
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There is no need to drag Islam in this essay. The topic has two domains, what is the meaning of education & what are the purposes of education. Draging religion in every topic showes that you have limited knowledge.
Write
Introduction.
Meaning of education
1,
2,
3
Purpose of education
political purpose
1.
2.
3.
Social purposes
1.
2
3.
Conclusion.

It is my personal perception about this essay. If im wrong plz comment
My dear, you are partially right that if one includes Islamic context in one's writing then it shows lack of knowledge. Yes, it is right but not in every situation. Education has every direction and one can add feasible Islamic flavor in this topic.
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A commendable attempt. Your outline contains highly informative and relevant points. However, I would like to sugget that you should try to make short points in your outline rather than making verbose and lengthy sentences. Moreover, try to be precise and straightforward. Overall a nice attempt. Just keep it up.
Thank you so much dear Ghori Sahb for encouraging words Hope you will continue taking a glance at my write-ups in future.

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