Very nice effort Shakeel bhai. Your introduction is very well organized and gives a clear picture of your essay. Well, your outlined is coherent and well organized. This is a good attempt. I will give you 60/100. You really deserved these marks bro.You're doing great, continue the good work.

Sidra Your attempt is nice but you should pay a little attention on the sequence of essay because Credit will be given on organization of the essay. Otherwise it is a good attempt. I will give you 58/100 marks.

Please Comment on my attempt too. I shall be very thankful to you.

Good effort... your essay seems balanced and well organized.. you have mentioned all the relevent aspects of topic..very impressive attemp..

hello frnds i wana to join ur group bcz i m also aspirant of 2014 but the problem is that i don't know how to start ha outline of easy and how to improve my english.....will u plz guide me in this respect....bcz i have also not started preparation for 2014 papers.....so kindly guide me....

As far as essay is concerned, it requires ample practice and knowledge. English can be improved through extensive reading of dawn and other english newspapers. Besides, reading of any book related to grammatical knowledge should also be preferred. Moreover, this forum is highly beneficial. You will find great support here. In our this essay group we are making an effort of improving our written skills in a systematic and combined way. You will be welcomed, if you take part in our group. And I reassure you that the respected members of css forum will always be ready to help you by solving your ambiguities.

yes, the essay paper is the most important paper of css and pms. it needs diligent and strenuous efforts to go through. according to my perception, every one appearing in css has enough capability and skills to pass this paper but it needs some vital points to be kept in mind. i hereby suggest my personal experience.
a. always choose a topic about which you have sufficient background and information.
b. insert introduction which could tell what you are going to tell.
c. take care of order while arranging different paragraphs and points
d. there must be conclusion of the works which could summarize your whole effort.
e. suggestions and proposals are to inserted at the end which is comprised of yours observations and analysis.
f. serious grammatical mistakes are to be avoided.

thanks and suggestion and recommendations for improvement in my points are welcomed.

Your points are valid. Thanx for your essential contribution. Essay is really the most important paper. And the efforts required to prepare oneself for this paper are also vigorous. We, in this thread, are trying to improve our essay skills. We are aimed at sending outlines of various essays and helping each other by pointing out mistakes. Suggestions for improvement in this activity to have better results will be appreciated.

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I also want to join in essay practice but how i start to write essay?

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Sir!! is it with refrence to Pakistani Women??

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Make outline of following essay: Status of Women in Pakistan . I was little busy that is why could not make outline of essay. I am soon going to send my outline and introduction. Members seem to be less interested in this vital activity. I respectfully urge all to be active as much as possible.

You are welcome in this group. We hope that your contributions here will be advantageous for others. And we hope that you learn many useful things here.

Status of Women in Pakistan



Outline..


1-Introduction
a,, living a miserable life.
b,, gender-based discrimination is high.
c,, comparison with other countries' woman.
d,, woman empowerment.

2-Woman's status in Pakistan.
a,, low education rate.
b,, marginalized group.
c,, killed for honor.
d,, injustices against woman.
e,, less protected.
f,, stereotypes against woman.
g,, woman harassment
h,, role of woman in development.

3-Women in Islam
a,, Islam encourages woman's education.
b,, provides them fundamental rights.
c,, economic and social security.
d,, rejects all kinds of discrimination against woman.
e,,women before Islam.

4-Causes of women persecution in Pakistan.
a,, stereotypes against woman and man-chauvanism..
b,, Loopholes in the procedural aspects of law.
c,, Illiteracy.
d,, women economic and social dependence on men.
e,, feudalism and political interventions.
f,, Misinterpretation of Islamic shariah

5-Remedies for reforming the women conditions.
a,, Improving the education of woman.
b,, making them more independent.
c,, legislating laws on woman security.
d,, stern actions against those who make violence against woman.
e,, clear interpretation of sharia.
f,, removing stereotypes by educating people correctly.
g,, awareness campaign.
h,, encouraging women contribution in national services.

6-Conclusion


Introduction
The status of woman in Pakistan is low and she is living a miserable life. The incidents of violence against women in Pakistan are the matter of routine. The killing of woman for honor, acid throwing, keeping them uneducated and denying their fundamental rights are the common practices in our society. The gender-based discrimination is on high. It is undeniable fact that the women are being persecuted in many areas of country on account of their gender. Though the process of providing fundamental rights to woman and women empowerment is an on going process in other countries also, yet they have progressed a lot on this front. We are lagging behind in this regard. The woman is not encouraged to take part in progressive activities, rather they are persecuted and subjugated. The only way to get rid of such problems is woman empowerment and enacting and implementing more pragmatic and pro-women laws to ensure their security and prosperity. Hopefully, we are moving forward in this regard, yet the progress is very slow, and the evidence of this fact are the violence which are taking place against woman. They are multifarious. There is a dire need of taking all social realities into account and every kind of discrimination which is hampering the progress of country in general and of women in particular should urgently be addressed. Indeed, onus of doing so falls on the shoulder of those who have authority and responsibility of making things better. If really dedicated, sincere, and progressive steps are taken; we will be able to have a country where people will have opportunities and rights on the basis of their abilities and competence, not gender.

This is my attempt. I will earnestly be thankful to those who highlight my mistakes and let me know a more appropriate way of dealing with such a topic. Besides, all respected members are expected to make outline and introduction of this essay.

Regards.