Originally Posted by dms672

Very nice attempt, you have attempted really in scholarly manner. Your statistics are really impressive and you get through very easy with such sorts of attempts. Outlines are well organized, Introduction is to the point. Could you please let me know that from where did you get such outstanding statistics? and please check out my attempt, and take out mistakes as much as you can, I will be thankful to you. Thanks.

Originally Posted by dms672

Every body is highly welcomed to check out my essay, can discuss, criticize and point out my mistakes. I will be very thankful to you. Please check it out in detailed manner. Thanks.

@ Shakeel ghori such topics 'Economy of Pakistan' will not be asked in our exam, because these sorts of topics are very simple, and can be asked on lower level of exams, please post some standard topics like according to the CSS level. I hope you will consider my point, actually you need to post like this 'Causes of decline in Economic Growth of Pakistan, Its consequences, Pakistan's economy and third words in present day like this. So that we can discuss in dynamic dimensions. Though you select a very good topic but dimension was very simple.

While attempting I was thinking that what should be mentioned in this simple topic what is just our economy? just present state of economy or its causes or what? Anyway, I attempted what I understood, and shakeel sir you did not check out my previous essay of energy crisis, please check out my essay in detailed manner, as I always check out every body's attempts in detailed manner as much as I can with my limited knowledge.


Economy of Pakistan

1.Introduction

2.Present state of Economy of Pakistan

3.Historical Background
[COLOR="Indigo"]1947-1955 (New state, (without constitution, only depend on Indian council act 1935) no economic policy)
1955-1971 (Golden period, revolution in agriculture & industry)
1971-1988 (Economy began to decline in rapid speed)
1988-1999 (Till Nawaz govt. highly dominancy of Western countries due to loan, IMF, WB, (Karz utaro mulk sawaro)
1999-2008 (Pak was amongst the top 11 countries, which were on apex in economic growth (Musharf's regime)
2008-2013 (According to International Transparency report, all records of corruption have been broken by PPP govt) ( you can briefly explain Historical background in essay: no need to mention in outline)
3. Economic Problems
a. Power crises and war on terrorism, root of basic economic problems
b. Loss of MNCs business
c. Tumbling stock market
d. Unprecedented Inflation ( you have also mentioned it in impacts )
e. Declining exports
f. Loss of Foreign Exchange through Tourism Industry
g. Influx of local people from war-ridden areas and their rehabilitation
h.Poor performance of Agricultural and industrial sector owing to energy crisis and bad management (you have stated above power crisis as a root of economic problem, so i think no need to repeat again)
Decline in GDP

4.Impacts of Pakistan's economy
a.Inflation & burden on state bank
b.Decline in GDP ( you can mention impact as decline in GDP is barrier to economic development)
c.Brain Drain
d.Decline in Foreign Direct Investment ( It is cause of adverse balance of payment as it creates foreign exchange gap: decrease in foreign exchange reserve)
e.Increasing in crime owing to poverty
f.Devaluation of Pak Rupee
g.State of Anarchism

4. Remedies to strengthen our Economy
a. Improved law and order situation
b. Poverty alleviation
c. Stern accountability
d. Building new dams to curb energy crises
e. control over Corruption and malpractice
f. Outstanding monetary and fiscal policy
g.Crystal Clear foreing (foreign ) policy
i.Diplomatic dialogue with India to boost trade
ii.Free trade should be done with central and western countries
iii.Pak Iran gas pipe line
h.Strengthen technical education
i. Trust Deficit

5.Conclusion


...................Pakistan is an agricultural country. Nearly 70 percent land of Pakistan is dependent on Agriculture. Due to energy crisis, agricultural sector is going down day by day. Apart from this, Industrial sector is also becoming weak due to bad management and malpractice. As a matter of fact, due to fluctuation in foreign exchange, the devaluation of Pakistani rupees and American dollar's dominancy are becoming the destiny of our country. Poor people are becoming poorer and rich becoming richer day by day due to poor economic phenomenon. In these circumstances, mostly politicians have become vampires and they are keep sucking on the blood from the very poor people and they don't dare to work for what they have been elected. Poor people are unable to get their basic rights, people are leaving Pakistan in order to search other heavens at abroad. Foreigners do not invest here owing to uncertainty, no one knows what is going to be happened in the upcoming twenty minutes. This is the Pakistan that was created by our legend leaders i.e. Quaid-e-Azam, Allama Iqbal etc. Our founder of Pakistan what is known as Quaid e Azam who must be watching todays' (today's) Pakistan that humans and animals are drinking water from a same pond, a jobless graduate putting himself on fire, kids are being saled ( sold) by their mothers due to poor circumstances and many awful seances (scenes) are the state of sorry, which become cause of tears in the eyes, our founder of Paksitna (pakistan ) must be weeping like a wolf in a big elephantic sound that this is the Pakistan I had made for what!. However, it is the need of our ( hour) to control these circumstances by an outstanding economic system, to make our economy good enough, it must be noticed that not economy but politics is a key to success, so democracy must be strengthen and politicians must be elected after their credibility and economic polices and their agenda must be seen. On the other hand, coming government has to be good enough in order to strengthen economic growth with the collaboration of developing and developed countries. it is the time to take considerable steps so that we can make our Pakistan 'Quaid e Azam ka Pakistan'.

Originally Posted by mehjabeen karim

Economic condition of pakistan
1.INTRODUCTION
2.CURRENT ECONOMIC CONDITION
*Economy stagnant
*mismanagement
*currency devaluation
*weak fiscal (fiscal policy ?)
*inflation
*lower GDP 3.7%
*burden of IMF('s debt) repayment
*increase interest rate
3.REASONS OF ECONOMIC CRISIS
*high import and low export
*bad governance and political upheaval
*corruption endemic ( endemic corruption )
*natural disaster(s)
*energy crisis
*lack of effective regulation in agricultre and industry ( agricultural and industrial)areas
*political parties strikes ( political instability/ unrest)
4.IMPACTS ON SOCIETY
*poverty
*unemployement ( unemployment)
*social unrest
5.SUGGESTIONS FOR ECONOMIC SUSTAINABLE(ility)
*good governance and better regulation of economy
*effective regulation in agricult(u)re sector
*development of efficient debt markets
*lower petroleum import
6.CONCLUSION
Economy is the system related to the ( production ) distrubtion (, distribution) and exchange of goods among other countries ( in the country). It is the backbone of ( to ) development and progress of country. Pakistan has rapid developing economies country in the world. ( wrong sentence )She has diverse economic sectors include textile( textile is a kind of industry, third one is service sector), agricultre ( agriculture) and industry. The annual cost of Pakistan('s) imports exceeds its earning from exports. The economy of Pakistan in turmoil at present due to high inflation, weak fiscal year and lower GDP rate. As per estimation, Pakistan has 3.7% GDP rate which hampers economical developement( development). The economy has suffered in few years of ( due to ) political upheavals and fast growing population. Political upheaval also forces Pakistan economy to depend on IMF which ( who become defaulter ?) became defaulter in world. Pakistan rupee deprecates because of political and economic instability. Economy has grown consistently by broadening of financial sector of agricultre (agriculture) and industry. There is dire need of good governance and effective regulation of economy for country capital value and developement( development) ] (to add value to currency of pakistan ) in International market.

Originally Posted by mehjabeen karim

Economic condition of pakistan
1.INTRODUCTION
2.CURRENT ECONOMIC CONDITION
*Economy stagnant
*mismanagement
*currency devaluation
*weak fiscal
*inflation
*lower GDP 3.7%
*burden of IMF repayment
*increase interest rate
3.REASONS OF ECONOMIC CRISIS
*high import and low export
*bad governance and political upheaval
*corruption endemic
*natural disaster
*energy crisis
*lack of effective regulation in agricultre and industry areas
*political parties strikes
4.IMPACTS ON SOCIETY
*poverty
*unemployement
*social unrest
(try to add few more points)
5.SUGGESTIONS FOR ECONOMIC SUSTAINABLE
*good governance and better regulation of economy
*effective regulation in agricultre sector
*development of efficient debt markets
*lower petroleum import
( add more suggestions)
6.CONCLUSION
Economy is the system related to the distrubtion (distribution) however, in my opinion defining economy here is irrelevant) and exchange of goods among other countries.It is the backbone of development and progress of country( relate backbone with country, not with progress or development, like it is considered as a backbone of country). Pakistan has rapid developing economies ( (?) country in the world.(Pakistan has rapid developing economy country? what does that mean?) She(do not use it) has diverse economic sectors include textile, agricultre(agriculture and industry ((industry is not a sector). The annual cost of Pakistan imports exceeds its earning from exports. The economy of Pakistan ((is) in turmoil at present (at present? means it was really good previously? if it was then mention it otherwise i donot think this is related sentence. it will be considered just irrelevant) due to high inflation, weak fiscal year ((weak fiscal policies)and lower GDP rate. As per estimation, Pakistan has 3.7% GDP rate which hampers economical(not needed) development. The economy has suffered in few years of political upheavals and fast growing population (( I didnot get this sentence), it can be stated like this" The economy of Pakistan has been continuously suffered by Immense population and Political instability.) . Political upheaval also forces Pakistan economy to depend on IMF which became defaulter in world. Pakistan rupee deprecates because of political and economic instability. Economy has grown consistently by broadening of financial sector of agricultre and industry.((what does that mean? consistently grown means pakistan has never faced any as such important economic problem, but you mentioned so much problems above and below , its absolutely not related , plus highly confusing) There is dire need of good governance and effective regulation of economy for country capital value and developement ((development)in International market.

Originally Posted by Saqib Bangash

Outlines

1)Current Conditions
a)Agricultural country (its fact or u say economy depend on agricultre)
b) other financial sectors situations
c)GDP

2) Causes
a) Corruption
b) Political disorder
c)Lack of Technology
d) Increase-decrease in import export
e) Educational concerns
f)Shift of talent
g) lawlessness



3)Effects
a) Country Entire growth towards decline
b) High inflation
c)poverty
d)selfishness and materialism
e) Higher rate of Crime

4)Suggestions:
a)To eradicate corruption (is this suggestion for increase economy how explain plz)
b)Ensure to give employment opportunities for everyone
c)Promoting professional and technical education
d)Imposing law and orders
e)Decrease on import and encourage to export

5)Conclusion




As per estimate, about 70% of Pakistan is an agricultural country but no doubt ; with regard to economy, other major financial sectors can not be ignored. It is harrowing that, very few companies are successful to be placed in “blue chip” category, while majority of others are exposed to downfall significantly. It is justifiably true that, among all major causes of collapse, Corruption on macro level; is on top, which impedes country to progress by leap(s) and bound. Correspondingly, remarkable increase of shift of talent to other countries, rise and shrink in import,export respectively, lack of technological advancement are some other factors, causing a reason for deterioration. As a consequence, the whole country diverts to road to ruin and eventually involved in a situation, where selfishness and materialism are on peak, crimes rate increased,prices hike, poor becomes poorer while rich continues to amass wealth much than ever.
It is rightly said by Napoleon that, Growth and strength come only through continuous efforts and struggle” and now each one of us, must have to come forward. Firstly, corruption must be eradicated immediately, discourage import, and a wise policy should be adapted to promoting professional and skilled education on priority basis. Why talented qualified workers are going abroad ?, Facilitating them with excellent opportunities to have them back. Off course; in order to, meet these goals, maintenance of law and order is also essential.

Originally Posted by mehjabeen karim

nice attempt check my attempt and let me clear which i ask in your essay. And tell proper usage of punctuation.