its tooo tough to write in tht fashion what ur friend is doing now a days.
willl u give me some contact terms about ur friend

thanks

once again what happened after sending that letter to FPSC, any response?

once again nothing happen
though it has nothing to do wid me but minhas wht can happen simply nothing in my opinion
so chill nd letter per ziyada umeedein mat lagao
i can see M.A.N aap k us super-writer friend ki mang to bohat barh gayi hai

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Woods are lovely dark and deep
But i have promises to keep
And miles to go before i sleep
And miles to go before i sleep
S.Nosheen

janab Amjad Haseez sahib,janab M.A.N sahib,hamaray essay ko sarhanay ka shukriya..jahan tak expressions ki baat hai tu pehli 2 attempts main bombastic expressions istamaal kar kai anjaam dekh chukay hain..kuch hamaray guru CSPs nai kaha tha kai bhai zuban asaan istamaa karni hai takai agla samaj bhi sakay..u need to convince him/her rather confuse them.baki Allah malik hai..baki kuch PSPs kai saat behtha hua tha tu unhoon nai kaha kai saab luck hai..CSS kaabliyet ka exam nahi ha,rizk ka exam hai..agar mera rizk likha hua tu mil jai ga..warna fanatically aur 3 attempts qualify karnay walay bhi hamaray samnay hain,allocate nahi ho sakay.
baki DMG walay sahib ki outline parhi,mujhay doubt hai kai 5000 words main unhoon kai kaisay yeah saab likh liya..un ko tu apnay words count karnay kai liyeh bhi 3 hours darkaar thay.
baki meri best wishes saab kai saat hain..un kai saat khasoosi taur pai jinhon nai yeah essay attempt kiya..nosheen aur meray essay main 19/20 ka farq hai.so gudluck tu u and all of them who attempted this topic.
abb atay hain black magic waloon pai..tu janab ek amil nai kaha kai paas ho jao gai 10 ullu(owls)chahayeh takai amal kiya jai..7 pakar liyeh hain 3 rehtay hain..koi meri help karna chahay tu bara pan hoga.hahahahaha.

@spiritless
i agree with you hundred percent.
Simplicity of language is the first thing...the first two paragraphs of my essay were as

The scourge of terrorism is a new threat to the present world.It has made the world unsafe.The inclusion of suicide bombing has worsened the situation. Ruthless use of force has aggravated it furhter.Actually , the causes of terrorism are being ignored.
Violence begets violence.So, terrorism can not be uprooted militarily.Blatant use of force is always counterproductive.It induces sympathies for those against whom it is used.It is evident from the situation in Iraq and Afganistan.It is also evident from the outfall of military operation in the Tribal Areas of pakistan.As a result,the war on terrorism has become a war for terrorism.
These were the first two paragraphs in my essay.i think you can easily grasp the meaning.Now, the result depends on the blessing of Allah.

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When going gets tough ,tough gets going.

Aslam o alaikum to all.
well where the 4-5 k words requirement baffled many of the
candidates of css this year, it had no effect over me and same was the case of techniques of writing essay.nobody should think that he is gonna fail in essay if he wrote relevant essay with gud symmetry and flow giving a glimpse of a united whole.i know people who wrote 1500 words and passing css exam and even getting allocated..i just saw the instruction and ignored the rubbish stuff and started my work slowly giving 45 mins to outline and writing about 2500 words on 23(2+21) pages.so plz be hopeful and pray. i went 4 state of women rights in pakistan.. plz give comments over my essay.
my essay went like this

1- introduction
2-state of women rights in pak
a-economically
b-politically
c-socially
d-educationally
3- real position of women vis-a-vis man in the light of Islam
4-Anti social practices
a-honor killings
b-karo kari
c-watta satta
d-low wages
e-domestic and sexual violence
5-history of women rights in pakistan
a- under quaid
b-under Z.A Bhutto
c- under Zia
d- under Benazir
e- under Musharraf
6- Importance of women rights
7-suggestions for empowering women
a-in economic field
b-in politacal field
c-in social field
8-conclusion
my conclusion was not gud only 5 lines i could write so was introduction

plz produce your comments how you see it ...do i have some chance of success...........??>?>>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>

listen dude to tell u the truth "hamein kia pata chance ka hum to jo khud likh ker ayein hai us k chance ka nahi pata "
anywayz ur outline seems good and i think u did ur best so dont worry inshaAlah acha hi ho ga
and 19 kon hai or 20 kon???

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Woods are lovely dark and deep
But i have promises to keep
And miles to go before i sleep
And miles to go before i sleep
S.Nosheen

thank you 4 your appreciation and may Allah bless you too
any body who wrote on women ???????????

i am also armed if bad comes to worse.??????>>>>>>

salam to all candidates
i have been observing this discussion abt essay paper ....i just want to add only one thing and dat is DONE IS DONE....so no use to waste ur energies now ....just relax and cross ur fingers for results like me ....no body can change now what had happend ...so chill out and relax
regards

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Aghyar Wayi Chi Da Dozakh Jaba da....
Za Ba Janat Ta Da Pukhtu Sara Zam

@bushra dilmir
Dear sis
agar essay main "topis of essay" and "scholour" jaisay spellings use karain gay.....then for sure result would be a big "F"....

...now coming towards ur point.....lets us c if My friend passes the essay paper then 4 sure he is a genius and a scholar 37-42 words/minute are not impossible if you have grip over the topic or you have prepared a related topic before the examination....but you have to keep in mind that hand writing speed counts a lot in CSS examination......

....i can write 34-37 words in a minute[37words * 60 minutes * 2 hours = 4440 words]...i have tried it just to counter check....

Regards
M.A.N

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