Originally Posted by Adeel Ahmed

Dear, though I didn't attempt this essay but I shall pinpoint some of technical things of essay.
First of all, I would say that it is an argumentative Essay in which you have to defend your Claim whether Privatising Higher Education a knowledge-oriented or money making.
Intially, You can discuss both aspects of the topic but later you need to part away your claim from the counter argument. For example, you may say
I. Intro
II.an Analysis of privatising of H.E
A. Privatizating H. Education changes Institutes in money making market.
1. Claim 1
2. Claim 2
3. Claim 3
B. P.H.E transforms the institutes as knowledge-based arena
1. Claim 1
2. Claim 2
3. Claim 3
III. P.Higer Education generates unmeasurable knowledge than making money
A. Research Based
B. Affiliation with international Universities
C. In Campus facililities
IV . Conclusion

However, your Essay does not seem to be an argumentative essay but rather you attempted it simply as Cause , and Solution of the topic.

Originally Posted by wasfagillani

it was an argumentative topic.....
and if you see in detail i have given the detail of impacts which clearly defend it...and solutions to defend my argument for generating knowledge.....
as every issue has some causes and impacts and solutions...solutions are your points in favor of any issue...
education is core issue in our country....

Originally Posted by futuristic

i wrote on Pakistani sportswomen as new ambassador of soft image of Pakistan.....
i chose this topic on basic premise of me that it was solely related to pakistan and second thing it involved women folk.
As i cleared the essay gender equality is a myth in 2013 so it forced me to choose this one.
i hope that my this assumption rather absurd will go good..............
Allah please fetch me 40 marks ......:/ .......