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If we interpret fight as struggle, then the only arguments that are strong go against the topic. No Nation becomes great without striving for it. And what is a great nation? What parameters are needed to gauge greatness? It must have a big economy, its economic indicators should be high enough, standard of living should be above the world average. Finland fits the profile. But how about geo-political influence? A say in the world affairs? For that you need Armies, technology, alliances etc. then the United States comes to mind. How did it become a great nation then? After winning the second world war, and then the cold war. So economic, scientific, technological, militaristic struggle or fight is necessary for a nation to become Great.
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Are you writing a book?
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No. It's just an essay I wrote for my exam
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Great Nations win without fighting.......
kindly evaluate my outline.........kindly seniors give me marks out of 10 for my outline and your valuable suggestions.
Introductions: Topic Defined General Remarks What makes Great Nations great: Political Stability Sound economics Policies Accountability and Justice Technological Advancement Social Maturity military Power Fighting .......Does not mean Violence rather it means competition. Competition of Economy Competition of Military Competition of Scientific innovations Competition of Diplomacy Great Nations wins without bloodshed Economic monopoly Diplomacy ......victory without wars. Technological advancement.....long term victory over world Political Stability.........Leadership of the world Huge Military........threatens rising revolt against their supremacy. An overview of few great Nations of 21st century. Americans.........lead the world Chinese..........Economic Big Wigs. Germans........heirs of Romans Japanese.......worshippers of rising sun. Can Pakistan be ranked among great nations Conclusion: |
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Wow. If i have come across the best outline for this essay, its this one. When i looked at the topic for the first time, I sketched an imaginary outline almost same as yours.
Most aspirants didnt consider the other side of the topic - Great nations DO engage in fight/wars if its a requirement of the time. Plus the fight against evils that you mentioned - Though most people elaborated the Nation versus Nation fight, the perspective - that a nation has to fight against many things internally too to become great- is a desperate requirement to score in the 50's or 60's band. |
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What makes Great Nations great: Political Stability Sound economics Policies Accountability and Justice Technological Advancement Social Maturity military Power
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One of my dictionaries defines fighting as:
<--- Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English ---> fighting n [uncountable] when people or groups fight each other in a war, in the street etc fighting between --- heavy fighting between government and rebel forces --- Fighting broke out in the crowds. Now, what I mean to say is: You can take the topic in either way, against the topic or in favour of the topic. But, if your stance is against the topic then your argumentation should be very strong to convince the examiner that ''Great nations win by fighting/struggling''. Moreover, for perception in either way, you must throw some light in the very start that how do you perceive the topic. Like, you should define the topic, the keywords I mean, according to your own perception. This thing will make your essay confusion-free even for the common man who would read your essay. Consequently, making things simple an easy and hitting the target(Topic of essay) result in getting good marks. Anyone can differ in opinion.
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