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Assalam o Alikum,
Can you please send me your number? I can help you out with english essay. However, I am really going to need your strategy regarding Pak Affairs, Current affairs and Isl. |
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Can you share your strategy regarding Indo Pak History? Ma Sha Allah youve scored pretty well on it in contrast to the other candidates.
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Well see my last post. I have shared the rule and procedure regarding re counting and I am going for it. I do not know that they genuinely do it or it is just a drama. We can just try. Although there is further procedure if one is not satisfied with recounting, still I will not proceed further if recounting remains fruitless. They do not show us mark sheets which is pathetic. Boards show mark sheets. My paper was rechecked in F.S.C. and my 20 marks were increased. I have one attempt left and I do not want any "PANGAA" with FPSC. However, the persons who do not have any chance left, must fight till end i.e high court.
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About your outline, well I am not an expert. I will like qualified people to evaluate it. However, I will point out few things. Also, you can get more ideas once I will share my outline. After introduction of topic, If I have understood correctly, You have written 3 paragraphs on explaining what is this phenomenon. This was not the demand of examiner. He already knows about the phenomenon. And in introduction, phenomenon can be explained in that 1 paragraph. The main thing of discussion was threats and how to counter them. That part was not asked and you did include that in start. Not a good impression. Examiners usually decide your fate in outline and introduction. They only go further in those essays which have good relevant outline and introduction. After that, they usually read first few paragraphs and conclusion. In your case, you have committed blunder in my opinion. Lets go further. In threats, you have shared few points. Some are effectively explained that how they are threats and some are not. Always consider your examiner layman. Make self explanatory phrases in simplest possible language. Do not write examples etc etc there. If you will explain those things there, I think there is nothing left to include in essay. Your point should tell which threat and why. In my opinion, some of these points are threats and some are evidences of threats. You have focused more on making points and have not explained them effectively. Simply point making is not enough. You have to tell that how it is related. About counter mechanisms, points are relevant but not adequately explained in phrases. You have merely written points. Also, introduction can be the reason for these marks. Since you have not shared it, so, I cannot tell if it was the reason or not. |
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The word " examples" was not mentioned in the outline, but adequate examples were given in the main body to validate each point . |
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I have pointed out mistakes from the material shared by you. I cannot possibly know what you have written in the paper. You have ability to write much better essay. Your knowledge of the topic is more than my knowledge. You just need to learn essay writing techniques. Also, practice of outline and introduction will help you. Better to get your work checked by good English teacher. Try to make phrases which will relate the shared concepts with the phenomenon. Essay teachers are not an authority on knowledge. They cannot possibly know everything. They are, however, experts in Essay writing skills. So write it in a why in which you can effectively convey what you are trying to say. |
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@Topgun
How did you attempt IR paper 2? Kindly share your preparation strategies for that too.
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You need to seek guidance from a teacher whose main area of expertise is essay. Even a serving or former CSP, a person having experience in CSS essay could guide you better. I passed essay in my previous attempt while i failed in Precis. Essay is a technique, there is no problem with your English or grammar. A CSS essay demands clarity, cohesion, relevance and absence of any contradictions within your body. I also feel that A Zeee bhai is right in pointing irrelevant start to your essay. It is unnecessary to write 100 points in your outline. While it is good if one can write 50 to the point headings and then sub headings in his outline yet i have seen people passing with 15-17 points in the outline. I myself remember i gave 4-5 main sections, like Intro, causes, effects, recommendations and conclusion. Where as i put 4-5 points within each section. So my outline could hardly finish one page. All you need is to practice 8-10 essays and show it to a Essay specific teacher, a CSP teacher or a senior candidate who has passed essay 2-3 times. They will check your arrangement and relevance as I'm sure grammar is not an issue here.
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