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[B][B][QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;515052][B][I][U][SIZE="3"][COLOR="DarkGreen"]Life succeeds in that it seems to fail[/COLOR][/SIZE][/U][/I][/B]
[COLOR="DarkRed"]There come ups and downs in life when man looses all his hope[/COLOR].Desires ,dreams ,ambition [COLOR="darkred"]embodied man `s[/COLOR] will whereas sufferings ,miseries and tortures test the trueness of these dreams and desires.These are tested best by quality of being determinant ,resolute and [COLOR="darkred"][COLOR="darkred"]handwork.[/COLOR][/COLOR] [COLOR="darkred"][COLOR="darkred"]All of us granted by what we have and receive what we face.[/COLOR][/COLOR]When we can get what we want [COLOR="darkred"]by[/COLOR] :unsure::unsure:uninterrupted tries and efforts.As a result ,we get fruit of it like it has fallen from tree in our lap. The survival for fittest is applied in [COLOR="darkred"]today world[/COLOR].People become hopeless due to excessive competition .But we have example of Babur-the king, who was deceived by his courtiers and betrayed by his [COLOR="darkred"][COLOR="darkred"]own subject did not loose[/COLOR][/COLOR] hope.He had to travel from pillar to post and post to pillar .Ultimately ,he saw spider on the wall falling again and again while resting in the cave. [COLOR="darkred"][COLOR="darkred"]But it did not left its efforts to climb and at last it wins[/COLOR][/COLOR].So he gathered army ,went back to battle.He won when there was no hope to win without much wealth and resources but with courage and will power.[COLOR="darkred"][COLOR="darkred"](Is this story not about KING BRUCE)[/COLOR][/COLOR] We can win every thing [COLOR="darkred"]by[/COLOR] :unsure:the wings of courage and will power .These are tested again and again and then we are rewarded according to our [COLOR="darkred"]suit and metal.???[/COLOR][COLOR="darkred"][COLOR="darkred"]No one in this world has to remain empty hands because we are the creature of Allah.who knows what is best for us.[/COLOR][/COLOR] (Conclude well!)[/QUOTE] [COLOR="darkred"][COLOR="darkred"] [COLOR="darkred"][COLOR="darkred"] I have highlighted and coloured some mistakes. Correct them yourself, Sis G. Try yourself first. It will help you a lot. :)[/COLOR][/COLOR] [/COLOR][/COLOR] [/B][/B] |
Life succeeds in that it seems to fail!
There come ups and downs moments in life when man looses all hopes.Desires ,dreams ,ambition modify man `s will whereas sufferings ,miseries and tortures test the trueness of these dreams and desires.These are tested best by quality of being determinant ,resolute and hard working. All of us are granted by what we have and received what we have to face.When we can get what we want by uninterrupted tries and efforts.As a result ,we get fruit of it like it has fallen from tree in our lap.
The survival for fittest is applied in today world.People become hopeless due to excessive competition .But we have example of Babur-the king, who was deceived by his courtiers kept his spirit high .He had to travel from pillar to post and post to pillar .Ultimately ,he saw spider on the wall falling again and again while resting in the cave. But it(spider) did not left its efforts to climb ,at last succeeds in it.He was motivated and gathered his army ,went back to battle.He won when there was no hope to win without much wealth and resources but with courage and will power.([B][COLOR="DarkGreen"]It was about babur too ,i have read it in history books .but what can i say about it because same has been heard by me regarding Robert bruce too) [/COLOR][/B] According to Iqbal (tundey bad e mukhalif ce na ghbra aye uqab! ye to chalti he tujy ooncha uraney ke liye!) [B][U][COLOR="DarkGreen"] O`Eagle! afraid not from opposite air storms. To take you upward blows ye.[/COLOR][/U][/B] We can win every thing by the wings of courage and will power .These are tested again and again and then we are rewarded according to our determination and will power.Abraham lincon`s father was a wood cutter but he become prime minister by dint of his courage and ambition.All of us succeeds in life either by efforts or by luck .Allah has stated that He did not tests man more then his scope.So rewards him as a result of countless efforts.So darkness ,miseries and misfits leads towards success.All the world heroes like Iqbal,Quaid ,Benjamin Franklin ,Nelson Mandela ,Ghandi and Holy prophet(P.B.U.H) rose up in the age of darkness and with aegis of will ,courage nailed down success. |
[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;515263]There come ups and downs moments in life when man looses all hopes.Desires ,dreams ,ambition modify man `s will whereas sufferings ,miseries and tortures test the trueness of these dreams and desires.These are tested best by quality of being determinant ,resolute and hard working. All of us are granted by what we have and received what we have to face.When we can get what we want by uninterrupted tries and efforts.As a result ,we get fruit of it like it has fallen from tree in our lap.
The survival for fittest is applied in today world.People become hopeless due to excessive competition .But we have example of Babur-the king, who was deceived by his courtiers kept his spirit high .He had to travel from pillar to post and post to pillar .Ultimately ,he saw spider on the wall falling again and again while resting in the cave. But it(spider) did not left its efforts to climb ,at last succeeds in it.He was motivated and gathered his army ,went back to battle.He won when there was no hope to win without much wealth and resources but with courage and will power.([B][COLOR="DarkGreen"]It was about babur too ,i have read it in history books .but what can i say about it because same has been heard by me regarding Robert bruce too) [/COLOR][/B] According to Iqbal (tundey bad e mukhalif ce na ghbra aye uqab! ye to chalti he tujy ooncha uraney ke liye!) [B][U][COLOR="DarkGreen"] O`Eagle! afraid not from opposite air storms. To take you upward blows ye.[/COLOR][/U][/B] We can win every thing by the wings of courage and will power .These are tested again and again and then we are rewarded according to our determination and will power.Abraham lincon`s father was a wood cutter but he become prime minister by dint of his courage and ambition.All of us succeeds in life either by efforts or by luck .Allah has stated that He did not tests man more then his scope.So rewards him as a result of countless efforts.So darkness ,miseries and misfits leads towards success.All the world heroes like Iqbal,Quaid ,Benjamin Franklin ,Nelson Mandela ,Ghandi and Holy prophet(P.B.U.H) rose up in the age of darkness and with aegis of will ,courage nailed down success.[/QUOTE] [COLOR="DarkRed"] The mistakes which I had highlighted you didn't correct them. :)[/COLOR] |
[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;515453][COLOR="DarkRed"]
The mistakes which I had highlighted you didn't correct them. :)[/COLOR][/QUOTE] I did it.. see it again . :) |
[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;515263][COLOR="DarkRed"]There come ups and downs moments in life when man looses all hopes[/COLOR].Desires ,dreams ,ambition modify man `s will whereas sufferings ,miseries and tortures test the trueness of these dreams and desires.These are tested best by quality of being determinant ,resolute and hard working. [COLOR="darkred"]All of us are granted by what we have and received what we have to face.[/COLOR] [COLOR="darkred"](Is main zara khobsorty la o)[/COLOR] When we can get what we want by uninterrupted tries and efforts.As a result ,we get fruit of it like it has fallen from tree in our lap.
The survival for fittest is applied in today world.People become hopeless due to excessive competition .But we have example of Babur-the king, who was deceived by his courtiers kept his spirit high .He had to travel from pillar to post and post to pillar .Ultimately ,he saw spider on the wall falling again and again while resting in the cave. [COLOR="darkred"]But it(spider) did not left its[/COLOR] efforts to climb ,[COLOR="darkred"]at last succeeds in it[/COLOR].He was motivated and gathered his army ,went back to battle.He won when there was no hope to win without much wealth and resources but with courage and will power.([B][COLOR="DarkGreen"]It was about babur too ,i have read it in history books .but what can i say about it because same has been heard by me regarding Robert bruce too) [/COLOR][/B] According to Iqbal (tundey bad e mukhalif ce na ghbra aye uqab! ye to chalti he tujy ooncha uraney ke liye!) [B][U][COLOR="DarkGreen"] O`Eagle! afraid not from opposite air storms. To take you upward blows ye.[/COLOR][/U][/B] We can win every thing by the wings of courage and will power .These are tested again and again and then we are rewarded according to our determination and will power.Abraham lincon`s father was a wood cutter but he become prime minister by dint of his courage and ambition.[COLOR="darkred"]All of us succeeds[/COLOR] in life either by efforts or by luck .[COLOR="darkred"]Allah has stated that He did not tests[/COLOR] man more then his scope.So rewards him as a result of countless efforts.So darkness ,miseries and misfits[COLOR="darkred"][COLOR="darkred"] leads[/COLOR][/COLOR] towards success.All the world heroes like Iqbal,Quaid ,Benjamin Franklin ,Nelson Mandela ,Ghandi and Holy prophet(P.B.U.H) rose up in the age of darkness and with aegis of will ,courage nailed down success.[/QUOTE] [COLOR="darkred"][COLOR="darkred"][SIZE="3"] . Good ending, better than previous one. . I have again highlighted some mistakes, correct them yourself. :)[/SIZE][/COLOR][/COLOR] |
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There come such ups and downs moments in life when man loose all hopes.Desires ,dreams ,ambition modify man `s will whereas sufferings ,miseries and tortures test the trueness of these dreams and desires.These are tested best by quality of being determinant ,resolute and hard working. [B][COLOR="DarkGreen"]All of us are granted by what we have and received what we have to face.[/COLOR][/B](give me idea now .I am unable to do it )]When we can get what we want by uninterrupted tries and efforts.As a result ,we get fruit of it like it has fallen from tree in our lap.
The survival for fittest is applied in today world.People become hopeless due to excessive competition .But we have example of Babur-the king, who was deceived by his courtiers kept his spirit high .He had to travel from pillar to post and post to pillar .Ultimately ,he saw spider on the wall falling again and again while resting in the cave. But it(spider) did not left its efforts to climb ,at last had succeeded in it.He was motivated and gathered his army ,went back to battle.He won when there was no hope to win without much wealth and resources but with courage and will power. According to Iqbal [B][U][COLOR="DarkGreen"] O`Eagle! afraid not from opposite air storms. To take you upward blows ye.[/COLOR][/U][/B] We can win every thing by the wings of courage and will power .These are tested again and again and then we are rewarded according to our determination and will power.Abraham lincon`s father was a wood cutter but he become prime minister by dint of his courage and ambition.All of us succeed in life either by efforts or by luck .Allah does not test man more then his scope.So rewards him as a result of countless efforts.So darkness ,miseries and misfits lead towards success.All the world heroes like Iqbal,Quaid ,Benjamin Franklin ,Nelson Mandela ,Ghandi and Holy prophet(P.B.U.H) rose up in the age of darkness and with aegis of will ,courage nailed down success. |
[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;515476]There come [COLOR="DarkRed"]such[/COLOR] [COLOR="DarkRed"](omit it out[/COLOR]) ups and downs moments [COLOR="DarkRed"](Omit out moments)[/COLOR] in life when man [COLOR="darkred"]loose[/COLOR] [COLOR="Purple"](loses)[/COLOR] all hopes.Desires ,dreams ,ambition modify man `s will whereas sufferings ,miseries and tortures test the trueness of these dreams and desires.These are tested best by quality of being determinant ,resolute and hard working. [B][COLOR="DarkGreen"]All of us are granted by what we have and received what we have to face.[/COLOR][/B](give me idea now .I am unable to do it )] (Ap Is Ki Urdu main translate ker k batain.) When we can get what we want by uninterrupted tries and efforts.As a result ,we get fruit of it like it has fallen from tree in our lap.
The survival for fittest is applied in today world.People become hopeless due to excessive competition .But we have example of Babur-the king, who was deceived by his courtiers [COLOR="purple"]but[/COLOR] kept his spirit high .He had to travel from pillar to post and post to pillar .Ultimately ,he saw spider on the wall falling again and again while resting in the cave. But it(spider) did not l[COLOR="DarkRed"]eft[/COLOR] [COLOR="Purple"](leave)[/COLOR] its efforts to climb ,at last [COLOR="DarkRed"]had succeeded[/COLOR] [COLOR="Purple"](succeeded) [/COLOR]in it.He was motivated and gathered his army ,went back to battle.He won when there was no hope to win without much wealth and resources but with courage and will power. According to Iqbal [B][U][COLOR="DarkGreen"] O`Eagle! afraid not from opposite air storms. To take you upward blows ye.[/COLOR][/U][/B] We can win every thing by the wings of courage and will power .These are tested again and again and then we are rewarded according to our determination and will power.Abraham lincon`s father was a wood cutter but he become prime minister by dint of his courage and ambition.All of us succeed in life either by efforts or by luck .Allah does not test man more [COLOR="DarkRed"]then[/COLOR] [COLOR="Purple"](than)[/COLOR] his scope.So rewards him as a result of countless efforts.So darkness ,miseries and misfits lead towards success.All the world heroes like Iqbal,Quaid ,Benjamin Franklin ,Nelson Mandela ,Ghandi and Holy prophet(P.B.U.H) rose up in the age of darkness and with aegis of will ,courage nailed down success.[/QUOTE]. |
[FONT="System"][QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;515476]There come such ups and downs moments in life when man loose all hopes.Desires ,dreams ,ambition modify man `s will whereas sufferings ,miseries and tortures test the trueness of these dreams and desires.These are tested best by quality of being determinant ,resolute and hard working. [B][COLOR="DarkGreen"]All of us are granted by what we have and received what we have to face.[/COLOR][/B](give me idea now .I am unable to do it )]When we can get what we want by uninterrupted tries and efforts.As a result ,we get fruit of it like it has fallen from tree in our lap.
The survival for fittest is applied in today world.People become hopeless due to excessive competition .But we have example of Babur-the king, who was deceived by his courtiers kept his spirit high .He had to travel from pillar to post and post to pillar .Ultimately ,he saw spider on the wall falling again and again while resting in the cave. But it(spider) did not left its efforts to climb ,at last had succeeded in it.He was motivated and gathered his army ,went back to battle.He won when there was no hope to win without much wealth and resources but with courage and will power. According to Iqbal [B][U][COLOR="DarkGreen"] O`Eagle! afraid not from opposite air storms. To take you upward blows ye.[/COLOR][/U][/B] We can win every thing by the wings of courage and will power .These are tested again and again and then we are rewarded according to our determination and will power.Abraham lincon`s father was a wood cutter but he become prime minister by dint of his courage and ambition.All of us succeed in life either by efforts or by luck .Allah does not test man more then his scope.So rewards him as a result of countless efforts.So darkness ,miseries and misfits lead towards success.All the world heroes like Iqbal,Quaid ,Benjamin Franklin ,Nelson Mandela ,Ghandi and Holy prophet(P.B.U.H) rose up in the age of [B][B][B][SIZE="3"]darkness[/SIZE][/B][/B][/B] and with aegis of will ,[FONT="Verdana"]courage[/FONT] nailed down success.[/QUOTE] [COLOR="DarkRed"] . Try to use sentence structure correctly. . Avoid controversial examples. . Don't show your love for Allah. Try to come up with balanced approach. . Avoid repeating the sorted out mistakes. . You have improved a lot. Practise more. . Try to write two drafts of expansions. First correct, vitalize and beautify your expansion, then, post your 2nd draft here. It will help you a lot. . Try to bring flow in your sentences. You have got it but it needs more improvement. . Don't try to translate your expressions from Urdu to English. Think in English. :) . Never mind my criticism. Ap K Mutabik! O`Eagle! afraid not from opposite air storms. To take you upward blow ye. . I want you to clear your CSS exams. Hopefully, you will do it. If only you understand what I say. :) Regards,[/COLOR][/FONT] |
[B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2012[/B]
1.Self done is Well done 2.The Bough that bears most bend most 3.Nearer the Church, farther from God 4.Rich men have no fault 5.Cut your coat according to your cloth [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2011[/B] 1.child is the father of man. 2.life succeeds in that seems to fail. 3.yellow journalism. 4.Love is beautiful but baleful god. 5.The violence of war can be diluted with love. [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2010[/B] 1) When flatterrers get together, the devil goes to dinner. 2) The impossible is often the untried. 3) A Civil servant is a public servant 4)Internet---a blessing or a bane 5) Hope is the buoy of life. [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2009[/B] (i) The importance of industrialization. (ii) Do we live better than our forefathers? (iii) Protecting freedom of expression not lies. (iv) Adopting unchecked Western life styles. (v) Variety is the spice of life. [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2008[/B] a. To rob Peter to pay Paul b. The child is father of the man. c. Art lies in concealing art d. Life without a philosophy is like a ship without rudder e. A contented mind is a blessing kind. [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2007[/B] 1- Honesty is the best policy but advertising also helps. 2- It is hard for an empty bag to stand upright. 3- A suspicious parent makes an artful child. 4- Spontaneity and creativity as symbols of freedom. 5- Means justify ends [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2006[/B] (a) Where ignorance is bliss, it is folly to be wise. (b) A pen becomes a clarion. (c) Charms strike the sight but merit wins the soul (d) What fools these mortals be! (e) Stolen glances, sweeter for the theft. [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2005[/B] a. each man is the architect of his own destiny b. ignorance is bliss, knowledge worry c. democracy fosters mediocrity d. unhappiness is best defined as the difference between our talent and our expectations e. they know enough who know how to learn [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2004[/B] 1.One may smile and smile, and be a villain. 2.Gather ye rosebuds while ye may. 3.No sensible man ever made an apology. 4.Our thoughts are ours, their ends none of our own [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2003[/B] (1) Lots of people confuse bad management with destiny. (2) If a window of opportunity appears don't pull down the shade. (3) We are all inclined to judge ourselves by our ideals: others by their act. (4) Goodwill is earned by many acts: it can be lost by one [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2002[/B] (a) The winds are always on the side of the ablest navigator. ENGLISH (PRECIS AND COMPOSITION) (b) Keep your face to the Sunshine and you cannot see the Shade. (c) In strategy it is important to see distant things close, and take a distant view of close things. (d) You \vill find poetry nowhere unless you bring some with you [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2001[/B] (a) Modern history registers so primary and rapid changes that it cannot repeat itself. (b) “The golden rule is that there is no golden rule”. G. B. Shaw (c) Crisis tests the true mettle of man (d) It is excellent to have a giant’s strength; but it is tyrannical to use it like a giant [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2000[/B] (a) Society is produced by our wants and government by our wickedness (Thomas Pain). (b) We learn from history that we do not learn from history. (Hegel) (c) Liberty doesn’t work as well in practice as it does in speeches. (Will Rogers) (d) Politics is strife of interests masquerading as a contest of principles. (Ambrose Pierce) |
[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;515627][B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2012[/B]
1.Self done is Well done 2.The Bough that bears most bend most 3.Nearer the Church, farther from God 4.Rich men have no fault 5.Cut your coat according to your cloth [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2011[/B] 1.child is the father of man. 2.life succeeds in that seems to fail. 3.yellow journalism. 4.Love is beautiful but baleful god. 5.The violence of war can be diluted with love. [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2010[/B] 1) When flatterrers get together, the devil goes to dinner. 2) The impossible is often the untried. 3) A Civil servant is a public servant 4)Internet---a blessing or a bane 5) Hope is the buoy of life. [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2009[/B] (i) The importance of industrialization. (ii) Do we live better than our forefathers? (iii) Protecting freedom of expression not lies. (iv) Adopting unchecked Western life styles. (v) Variety is the spice of life. [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2008[/B] a. To rob Peter to pay Paul b. The child is father of the man. c. Art lies in concealing art d. Life without a philosophy is like a ship without rudder e. A contented mind is a blessing kind. [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2007[/B] 1- Honesty is the best policy but advertising also helps. 2- It is hard for an empty bag to stand upright. 3- A suspicious parent makes an artful child. 4- Spontaneity and creativity as symbols of freedom. 5- Means justify ends [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2006[/B] (a) Where ignorance is bliss, it is folly to be wise. (b) A pen becomes a clarion. (c) Charms strike the sight but merit wins the soul (d) What fools these mortals be! (e) Stolen glances, sweeter for the theft. [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2005[/B] a. each man is the architect of his own destiny b. ignorance is bliss, knowledge worry c. democracy fosters mediocrity d. unhappiness is best defined as the difference between our talent and our expectations e. they know enough who know how to learn [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2004[/B] 1.One may smile and smile, and be a villain. 2.Gather ye rosebuds while ye may. 3.No sensible man ever made an apology. 4.Our thoughts are ours, their ends none of our own [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2003[/B] (1) Lots of people confuse bad management with destiny. (2) If a window of opportunity appears don't pull down the shade. (3) We are all inclined to judge ourselves by our ideals: others by their act. (4) Goodwill is earned by many acts: it can be lost by one [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2002[/B] (a) The winds are always on the side of the ablest navigator. ENGLISH (PRECIS AND COMPOSITION) (b) Keep your face to the Sunshine and you cannot see the Shade. (c) In strategy it is important to see distant things close, and take a distant view of close things. (d) You \vill find poetry nowhere unless you bring some with you [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2001[/B] (a) Modern history registers so primary and rapid changes that it cannot repeat itself. (b) “The golden rule is that there is no golden rule”. G. B. Shaw (c) Crisis tests the true mettle of man (d) It is excellent to have a giant’s strength; but it is tyrannical to use it like a giant [B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2000[/B] (a) Society is produced by our wants and government by our wickedness (Thomas Pain). (b) We learn from history that we do not learn from history. (Hegel) (c) Liberty doesn’t work as well in practice as it does in speeches. (Will Rogers) (d) Politics is strife of interests masquerading as a contest of principles. (Ambrose Pierce)[/QUOTE] [COLOR="black"][COLOR="black"][COLOR="black"][COLOR="black"][COLOR="black"][COLOR="SeaGreen"][B][SIZE="4"][LEFT][LEFT][B] Well done. It seems there is no repetition of topics. One should know only the art of writing expansion _ cramming will not be beneficial at all. Thanks to God that we all are learning the art. :)[/B][/LEFT][/LEFT][/SIZE][/B][/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR][/COLOR] |
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