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SADIA SHAFIQ Thursday, November 22, 2012 11:18 PM

[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;515627][B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2012[/B]


1.Self done is Well done
2.The Bough that bears most bend most
3.Nearer the Church, farther from God
4.Rich men have no fault
5.Cut your coat according to your cloth

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1.Self done is Well done[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B]


[B]''Well done is better than well said.'' [/B]
[B][COLOR="DarkGreen"]
Benjamin Franklin[/COLOR][/B]


Self done is well done work leading towards discoveries ,inventions and technological revolutions .Renaissance of civilizations is proceeded by discoverers ,writers , innovators and intellectuals .The self worker are independent over circumstances knowing how to deal difficult situations and get achievements. Dependent persons can not find ways to find solutions of problems unlike hard workers and thinkers .[B][COLOR="DarkGreen"]Aristotle said,’ Man is a social animal’’.[/COLOR][/B]It implies man is dependent on others. Reliance is good because it bonds the members of particular society. However, it should be restrained for productivity of individuals.Because It enables oneself to survive in bitter circumstances.


Jaber bin hayan ,Bo Ali seena,Ibn-e- Nafees ,Iman Abu Hanfia (R.A) ,Umer khyam and many others had brought the renaissance of Islamic civilization whereas Edison,Newton ,Samuel Johnson and others are precursor of Modern English civilization.All positive changes evolved in societies of self workers.The only constant is change ;so civilization survived and sustained by them. The Holy Quran also lights on this theme describing man earned wages by dint of his hard work is a friend to Allah. Muslim civilization in its culmination worked on the principle of”[B][COLOR="DarkGreen"] Necessity is the mother of invention.'' [/COLOR][/B]So they rationalize laws creating field of ‘’asul’’ or ‘fiqa’ . Euro-civilization have borrowed these principles earning respect and credit today .Their achievements have made them world greatest power of this century.

According to Iqbal,
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Celebrated they were, embracing Islam.
Derogated you are, negating these.[/B]

In fact society is organized and developed when it inherited independent persons .Fall of civilization is followed by lazy and talkative persons who are not ready to take initiatives ,not willing to take risks.So courage ,will and handwork are the qualities of self doers and inventors . When Muslims were traders ,sailors ,scientists ,and writers ,they were best administrators and rule over the world .

SADIA SHAFIQ Thursday, November 22, 2012 11:30 PM

@last para
 
when it inherits

SADIA SHAFIQ Thursday, November 22, 2012 11:43 PM

[B][COLOR="DarkGreen"][SIZE="3"]
comprehension 2012 .'' Rich men have no fault"[/SIZE][/COLOR][/B]


Skilled and handicaps ,learned and illiterate ,wealthy and poor ,statesmen and subjects and managers and labours are present in every society.Human nature is full of faults but one can avoid from these by using reasoning capability .However learned ,skilled and statesmen have opportunities and know-how to deal with problems .so it is generalized they have no fault ,in fact all have but they learn the skill of cure .People who are unable to tackle the miserable situations show contemptuousness towards them.



[B][COLOR="DarkGreen"] Bad men excuse their faults, good men will leave them.[/COLOR][/B]
[B]Ben Jonson[/B]


The good students know how to beat others and take the top most position.He will work with utmost care .so carefulness leads him towards hard work ,smart work and new tactics to lead.Leaders are also distinguished from rest of the society because they have skills to nail their ambition .Among good leaders Churchill and Abraham were the best leaders considered founders of USA.They also faced the difficulties and problems but they knew how to sort them out .So Richness is achieved status of man that make him mobile upward in the society.

[B]''Average people teach their children how to survive. Rich people teach their kids to get rich''[/B]

There is differences in approach between these two factions ;one think how to survive while later ponder over occupying top most position in respective fields.That`s why rich people are leaders having skills near perfectness .The other important thing is they are brilliant to conceal their faults and highlight their marvels.

SADIA SHAFIQ Friday, November 23, 2012 08:12 AM

[B][COLOR="DarkGreen"]''Cut Your Coat according to your Cloth''
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Allah has given specific capabilities and resources to each individual .These implies each of us has given authority vary person to person.One can either generates further wealth by using given one or remains contented .Contentment is an Islamic junction prescribed to Muslim Ummah for multi-purpose benefits.when a person keeps his expenditure according to his income ,he remains satisfied .In modern age materialism provokes among masses lust to buy above then their purchasing power .This situation has caused lending on the basis of interest creating in-debted society.That's why Islam has taught us moderation ,the key element spending a prosperous life.


The rule of moderation is applicable in all the institutions of government; family,politics,economy and religion. It forbids extremes in a particular system ,also applicable to each and evey individual of society .Islam has given rights to each individual according to his /her responsibilities.So one can enjoy freedom in limits.West has given undue rights to individuals which has caused social evils.These evils not only destroyed bodily health but leads towards spiritual death. Hazrat Ali (R.A) had taught his subjects that one should restrained between these two extremes . He ( R.A) remained contented through out his life and never aimed to get more and more wealth or power . In fact ,greed ,lust are evils leading towards other sins like murder ,fornication and devastation of community .That's why ambition is considered a moral sin.
[B][COLOR="DarkGreen"]
"The Tragical History of Dr.Faustus'[/COLOR][/B]', by Christopher Marlowe lights on this particular theme. The hero of that play wanted unlimited power and wealth , stood against Almighty and made fun of Holy scriptures .In the end ,he had faced disappointment which hindered him to ask for forgiveness.And the state of hopelessness destined hell for him .


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[B]"Till swollen with the cunning of self- conceit
His waxen wings could not mount above his reach,
And melting heavens conspired his over throw.
"[/B][/COLOR]

The theme of greed ,ambition and lust have lessons for us .These characters in man creates hopelessness and extremes.And man becomes insane for his ambition.He tries to get all the things by wrong means . contentment is blessing in guise which creates humane attitude in man.All of us can not get undue resources and wealth.Also it is necessary for healthy procreation of society .

SADIA SHAFIQ Friday, November 23, 2012 09:47 AM

[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;515750][B][COLOR="DarkGreen"][SIZE="3"]
comprehension 2012 .'' Rich men have no fault"[/SIZE][/COLOR][/B]


Skilled and handicaps ,learned and illiterate ,wealthy and poor ,statesmen and subjects and managers and laborers are present in every society.Human nature is full of faults but one can avoid from these by using reasoning capability .However learned ,skilled and statesmen have opportunities and know-how to deal with problems .so it is generalized they have no fault ,in fact all have but they learn the skill of cure .People who are unable to tackle the miserable situations show contemptuousness towards them.



[B][COLOR="DarkGreen"] Bad men excuse their faults, good men will leave them.[/COLOR][/B]
[B]Ben Jonson[/B]


The good students know how to beat others and take the top most position.He will work with utmost care .so carefulness leads him towards hard work ,smart work and new tactics to lead.Leaders are also distinguished from rest of the society because they have skills to nail their ambition .Among good leaders Churchill and Abraham were the best leaders considered founders of USA.They also faced the difficulties and problems but they knew how to sort them out .So Richness is achieved status of man that make him mobile upward in the society.

[B]''Average people teach their children how to survive. Rich people teach their kids to get rich''[/B]

There is differences in approach between these two factions ;one think how to survive while later ponder over occupying top most position in respective fields.That`s why rich people are leaders having skills near perfectness .The other important thing is they are brilliant to conceal their faults and highlight their marvels.[/QUOTE]

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sonia5 Tuesday, November 27, 2012 07:07 AM

Man probes into space but not into himself
 
[B]Man probes into space but not into himself[/B]

As man covers the phases of development, his curiosity to know more about the world also increases. It is this curiosity which has lead man to the present state of advancement. Man has discovered unseen treasures in such places which were unimaginable to be accessible in past. Man is anxiously trying to pave ways to populate mars while his inner self is still deserted. As man discovered the world and even reached to the space, he left his self far behind. In modern era, we are well-acquainted with the outer world but are strangers to our own self. It is a dilemma because the real discovery is the discovery of the self, which is often ignored. One can uncover immense spiritual beauty and supernatural mysteries if he peeps into his inner space.
We should first introduce ourselves with our inner self. The worldly success is material and cannot impart happiness to our inner self. Great philosophers, mystics, and Sufis have stressed upon discovering the self. The poet of the East, Allama Muhammad Iqbal, has introduced the concept of 'khudi' i.e. conscience and he wanted to revitalize the lost status of humanity by discovering the self. Socrates, the great philosopher of all time, says “know thyself”. We are hollow beings if we don’t know about ourselves. Material things can give material benefits but inner contentment and peace is possible only if we know about our self in detail. So, instead of drowning in the river of discoveries, we should dig our own character, explore it and build upon it to seek real self-actualization.


[COLOR="blue"]Kindly evaluate my comprehension note so that I can improve.[/COLOR]

Regards
Sonia

sonia5 Tuesday, November 27, 2012 08:30 AM

Child is the father of man
 
[B]Child is the father of man[/B]

This proverb of Wordsworth means that a man is the product of the child. The developmental stages impact the personality of a child and can be witnessed from the child’s behavior when he grows up a man. The qualities, understanding and behavior developed in childhood flourish and are displayed in the grownup’s personality.
The examples from history clearly prove the application of this maxim. Many great men of past, who changed the course of human history and introduced new horizons to the greatness of humanity, displayed their unique character in their childhood. The nobleness of Holy Prophet P.B.U.H), the valor of Shivaji, the aggression of Hitler, Nepolean and Clive, and the curiosity of Newton are some of the attributes which distinguished these men in their childhood. These attributes groomed up and polished with age and became a prominent feature which distinguished these men in the world.
Hence, the legacy of childhood grows with the growth of child. Although man keeps learning throughout his life but keen significance should be levied on the growth of child’s character in childhood because it is the most critical phase of child’s development which has far-reaching consequences.
In the long run, inborn talent and natural aptitude emerges and distinguishes the man in the sphere in which he has that natural bent since his childhood. Parents should be seriously concerned to determine the child’s natural inclination so that he can be directed in the right way to build upon his natural talents and prove successful.


[COLOR="blue"]Kindly evaluate my written work so that I can improve it. [/COLOR]
Regards
Sonia

Da Skeptic Tuesday, November 27, 2012 04:44 PM

[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;515627][B]

[B]Q.4 Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2007[/B]


1- Honesty is the best policy but advertising also helps.
2- It is hard for an empty bag to stand upright.
3- A suspicious parent makes an artful child.
4- Spontaneity and creativity as symbols of freedom.
[U] 5- Means justify ends[/U]


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Isn't it 'Ends justify the means'?? Macuavely has said so..

aishamemona Thursday, November 29, 2012 06:06 PM

[COLOR="Magenta"][B]Political will power and implementation of policies [/B][/COLOR]
Making policies has never been the plight of our government. It is the lack of implementation which keeps the wheel of problems moving. Today our government not only needs to take initiatives and hard decisions, it also needs to give a boost to the dying economy by practical will power.


[B][COLOR="Magenta"]Corruption and malpractice[/COLOR][/B]
However, corruption, misuse of funds, malpractices of all departments must be eradicated at all costs. Besides, the energy consumption and wastage must be avoided and eradicated at all costs.


[B][COLOR="Magenta"]Trust Deficit[/COLOR][/B]
Last but not least, the public trust and support is of utmost important. No policy can succeed if it does not enjoy public support. Media can play an effective role in creating awareness and trust that it is actually a global problem which can only be solved with help and conscious effort by every citizen.

[B][COLOR="Magenta"]Conclusion[/COLOR][/B]
Conclusively, Pakistan is facing severe overpopulation problem in the current circumstances. As a matter of fact, no country is free from this problem because it is present nearly in every country but the winners are those who overcome it. Therefore, to curb this problem requires transparent effort at every level and the future policies should be oriented. Although Pakistan is currently facing overpopulation problem but it does not mean that it is going towards its end. Nations face multifarious problems but together they work for towards the solution. The sooner we realize the gravity of the situation, the sooner we will emerge out of this problem. The same is the need of hour. Government as well as every single citizen of Pakistan has to play its own specific role to bring about a positive change. Though the task is difficult and time consumer but not impossible. Commitment, trust and hope are the tools to overcome the problems.

[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]I have made this from several resources and it is finalized for my essay. Pleaseeeeee check it out critically. I really appreciate those who are active in this thread and really you are doing a remarkable job for the aspirants.

I am in wait :pp[/COLOR]

Da Skeptic Thursday, November 29, 2012 06:40 PM

[B]@aishamemona
Is it an expansion??? What is the topic of it??[/B]


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