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Default Rome was not built in a day

There is no short cut in life. For every task to be accomplished, there is a need of uninterrupted and vigorous efforts to be made. Rome,which is symbol of development and civilization, did not pan out to be what it is today in a blink of eye. It was a long journey of change from an impoverished place to its current position of civility in the modern world.

Prophet Muhammad made strenuous efforts to enlighten the benighted hearts of Meccans for around 13 years but in turn while attempting to assassinate him, they forced him to migrate from his beloved homeland. But it happened that he entered Mecca as conqueror. It all took a long span of 22 years. Wonder lamp of Aladin exists only in fairy tales and has nothing to do with the real word.

However, it is a matter of common observation that people by-passing the hard work often obstensibly succeed in achieving their wordly gains but in fact they are patent losers. Their so called success prevails for no time and vanishes soon. Real mega-hit which marks indelible effects is the success which is attained by matchless effort and vigour.

There is no ultimate goal to reach but to execute this trek of life with truthfulness and through proper channel should be the aim of our lives. Result remains with God.
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FAILURES ARE THE PILLARS TO SUCCESS


Life is the name of regular struggle. Success and failures always go hand in hand. Astute people learn from failures to curb the causes of failures. This act leads the person towards success. Ambitious people considers the failures a blessing in disguise. History has revealed that most prominent rulers whose reign lasted for more than a decade, have learnt a lot from failures. Muhammad Ghori, a great warrior had got a crushing defeat in the first battle of Tarain at the hands of Prithvi Raj Chauhan II. But he ably overcame him in second battle of Tarain by using the latest tactics. Life never ends at the verge of failure, rather it lets the person knows the flaws and enable him to curb them for future. Thomas Eddison, renowned scientist invented the electrical bulb after thousand time of failures. When he was asked about his failures, he replied that, there are not the failures, rather I know thousand techniques by which the bulb can not be made. Failures enables the person to know the meager faults, and paved way for success. Mn is not superficial being. He has always some weakness in him. No one is perfect. Every single person faces the failures but the successful people always learn from failures and curb the roots of failures. As failures are the pillars of success.

kindly mark the expansion and let me know how can I improve it. Thanks
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FAILURES ARE THE PILLARS TO SUCCESS


Life is the name of regular struggle. Success and failures always go hand in hand. Astute people learn from failures to curb the causes of failures. This act leads the person towards success. Ambitious people considers the failures a blessing in disguise. History has revealed that most prominent rulers whose reign lasted for more than a decade, have learnt a lot from failures. Muhammad Ghori, a great warrior had got a crushing defeat in the first battle of Tarain at the hands of Prithvi Raj Chauhan II. But he ably overcame him in second battle of Tarain by using the latest tactics. Life never ends at the verge of failure, rather it lets the person knows the flaws and enable him to curb them for future. Thomas Eddison, renowned scientist invented the electrical bulb after thousand time of failures. When he was asked about his failures, he replied that, there are not the failures, rather I know thousand techniques by which the bulb can not be made. Failures enables the person to know the meager faults, and paved way for success. Mn is not superficial being. He has always some weakness in him. No one is perfect. Every single person faces the failures but the successful people always learn from failures and curb the roots of failures. As failures are the pillars of success.

kindly mark the expansion and let me know how can I improve it. Thanks
I am no authority on expansions, but structure of the Expansion should be like this:

First paragraph is ones introduction which contains Meaning and then explanation of the proverb or saying. Secondly, comes the body, called second paragraph, of expansion which should be full of relevant examples, facts and figures. This paragraph is crucial because you support your expansion in it. A quotation at the end of body or concluding paragraph adds to the beauty of expansion. Third and last paragraph is ones conclusion, which briefly sums up ones whole expansion. Try these methods and you will improve the way you write.
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Default Is Democracy An Ideal Form Of government

Democracy is a form of government which represent the bulk of the society,provided each man with the right to vote.It is open regarded as a govermnent in which every one has a share.
The success democracy depend upon the political culture the people of the country had developed.The question arises is democracy really the best form of government? if at is the democracy which claimed that "if a dog died due to thirst on the bank of farat i would be answerable for that"(Hazart Omar RA) if at ensure the liberties, freedom and rights of people then it is definitely the best form of government.
But if is the government, based only one one man one vote then its results would be the contrary. for one man one vote must not ensure a responsible government.it may the establish the dictatorship of Hitler or theology like Iran.
In countries having good literacy rate and sound political culture democracy is a blessing,and in countries with low literacy rate and an unsound political cultures like that of the underdeveloped countries it is merely a government of ignorants and mean for exploitation of majority by minority.



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If gold rusts what shall iron do

The presented adage reflects the stark philosophy of human life that perfection is a rare commodity in this world of sins and woes. What to speak of iron when gold starts rusting. LIikewise, it is very hard for a common individual to strive for perfection or virtue when charismatic leaders and even saints are prone to commit blunders.
In this fallible world it becomes very difficult for an under develop nation to survive when giant like USSR have been crumbled into pieces. There was a time when it was said that the sun of great Britain's empire never sets but today their very authority is confined to tiny part of western Europe. Similar ly, it becomes very difficult for a country like Pakistan to get out of a quagmire of economic meltdown when the so called super power on earth the United States of America is teetering on the edge of abyss.
Although the situation is too gloomy and dark for an ordinary individual or a nation to choose and tred on a path as the glory of great men and nations is rusting, yet one must not loose hope and have faith in oneself and Most importantly in God because God has promised for success if one strives.
So let us be, ,therfore, , optimistic like shelly and sing :
"The worlds great age begins anew,
The golden year's return,
The earth doth like a snake renew. "

Yes I mean iron should start singing as shelly sings

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Bhai. can you please let me know that how much can i score with such kind of paragraph?
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It is hard for an empty bag to stand upright
This is a symbolic proposition that unveils the anecdote of empty bag. Here’s an empty bag indicates an empty stomach .Moreover hunger is such an evil that can cajole anyone. An empty stomach person goes beyond the moral limits. The fire of hunger is direly needed to be extinguished. Hunger is caused due to paucity of resources .Mean while it has become very hard for a destitute to show a moral attitude. Less economic resources constrained the poor in the chain of helplessness. Holy prophet (PBUH) once said hunger makes an individual too helplessness to believe in god and ultimately tend to make one godlessness.
Human has divided the world into two spheres, developed and under developing by advanced technology and economic incentives. The under developing countries have suffered from scarcity of several resources that render social evils and caused anarchy in the society. Doubtless poverty is deemed as major obstacle in the way of progress. In the country like Pakistan a large part of population is under the cloud of poverty. It is seemed as an incurable disease due to lack of effective policy that can vaccinate the poverty disease. In this context major part of population falls in the darkness of poverty and helplessness, and cripples the moral structure of society.
Third world countries failed to make a flawless policy to resolve the impoverishment issue. An effective policy is dire needed to provide some relief to poorness but rather doing this the policy is made in a way that it is empowering the rich at horse’s pace, while a poor is being neglected in all walks of life. Moreover a rich is becoming richer and poor is falling in deep darkness of disgrace. Consequently such a system might render lawlessness in society. A destitute might indulge in the social evils like theft, robbery to extinguish the fire of hunger. All that means that an empty stomach is unable to show moral attitude.
Islam the religion of peace a mankind preaches and strongly emphasis the egalitarian society. Islam does not allow drawing line of discrimination on the basis of caste, creed and wealth. Moreover Islamic teaching shows a path of successful in world and hereafter .Islam introduced a system of zakat though which a helpless is benefitted with some relief. A rich person by following the teachings of Islam spends few economic resources in the name of zakat to ameliorate the misers. In this way the fire of hunger and helpless is extinguished up to some extent.
Consequently it would not be wrong to say that a helpless becomes a toy in the hand of rich who exploits the basis of right of a destitute .At the same time poor is unable to stand on his feet due to lack of resources, ultimately fall in the darkness of disgrace. In this context the dictum is beautifully and wisely quoted that an empty bag is unable to stand upright.

Very nice attempted dear. But try to give instances from the contemporary world.
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Dear as far as your proposition is concerned, you have conveyed the theme clearly but is not up to the standard of expansion as Ahmed Faisal has suggested.....
You must have to follow the rules of expansion to obtain flying colors........
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attempt this one.Good friends are hard to find, harder to leave and impossible to forget I want contemporary examples. Divide your expansion into three paragraphs. Do it now
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Good friends are hard to find, harder to leave and impossible to forget

The proposition unveils the importance of friendship. Good friends implies that an understanding between two persons of mutual interest. They use to share common problems except involving in material consideration. Human is bestowed with several relations but the friendship is the one, which is made by one's personal wish. Mutual Understanding is direly needed to perpetuate the friendship. In this context good friend are hard to find.

A good friend is a great assets in one's life.A Human passes through several stages of life. One shares the secrets, sorrows and happiness with a good friend by making him confidential.If he is unable to reveal his suppressed emotions, would render him in the darkness of depression. No doubt, it is the human nature that he feel relaxed by sharing sorrows and happiness.

A part from that, only a sincere friend points out one's shortcomings and try to rectify it. Meanwhile a good friend will tell you when your face is dirty.
Moreover if a man dies before fulfilling some desires, then a good friend struggle hard to achieve the unfulfilled desires.

On the contrary present time is the time of selfishness and materialism. In modern society a sincere friendship seems no where. A friend of today might become an enemy of tomorrow and vice versa. All it means that the definition of a good friend is degraded.

Consequently a renowned writer has wisely quoted "A friend is need is a friend in deed." In this context the proposition philosophically reflects the importance of a good friend.
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