''Social and Economic securities for Women in Islam.''
Outline
1.Status of women in Islam.
i) Islam has legalized the equal status of women.
ii) Current plight of women in world has badly hampered their status quo.

2.The term women is derogatory for Men .
i) Extermination of Eve from the heaven is generalized one;women the root cause of all evils.
ii) The Hindu civilization had depleted all previlages for women .
iii)The pathetic condition of Women in Arabia before Islam is evident fact of their disgarce and humiliation.
iv) Advent of Islam followed the renaissance of women status which had diminished sexism .


3.Economic and social insecurities for women today .
A. Collapse of Family Institution.
i) Male chuavanism has rooted seeds of sexism in the society i.e Asiatic or African society.
ii) Divorce and dowery devices are threats for females ,no choices are given for mate selection and Violence in Family has increased .
iii) Marriages with Quran -e- pak ,infanticides,Prostitution and whoredom,Sale of women to resolve disputes and rapes have become common in the world.
B.Economic Insecurities For Women.
i). Dower is monopolized and women have to rear their children theirsleves.
ii).In most of the developing countries like Pakistan ,they have been deprived from their due share in inheritance as well as from education
iii)Women are economically socially empowered in Islam

4.Economic and Social securities for women In Islam
1.Marriages which provide social as well economic security
2.share in husband`s and father`s inheritance.
3.Dower for women is econimic security for women.
4.women right for mate selection and right to get divorce when circumstances are inbearable.
5.Education is necessary in islam for women .Many women are more learned then men in caliphte era.

(wajood e zan c he Qainat me Rang .
Isey ke saz ce hey zindage ka soze daro)
women ,the ornamnet of the universe.According to Iqbal,
The song of her presence dilute the pains of Life .

5. The Music of universe has lost and its has beauty vanished .
A. Social order has been disturbed and society is leading toward nagative social change.
1. Youth is attracted towards voices and child abuses have become common law and elderly status have been destryed and old housed are in process.
2. Divorce rate have been increasing and extra marital realtions are common in practise which has detriorated the prestige of mother.
3.Jane Austen`s prediction of Marxism turns out true.
B .Richness is the Honor and honor is richness .
1.women consist of half of population of world but could not earn for themselves in changing scenario of industrailzation and urbanization.
2. Prostitution has become industry world wide.
3.women have become burden for family because society because society wants dowrey for marriages and parents are reluctant to give them education.


6.The future of women is Unbecoming.
1.Male and homosexulaity--Americans have passed the law of homosexuality as legal one.
2.The End of the World--no more future generation due to sexual revolution in Europe that has now become global sexual revolution.
3. Marriages will become out of question and Incest and illegitimacy ,elopement ,cohabition without contracts will become common law.


7.what should have to do ?
1. Promulgation of islamic acts regarding women
2. Feudalisim should be obolished and private property rights of women have to entertain.
3. Female Child protection for their better employment and preservation of social order.
4.governmental should have to pass laws for the protection of women at home and on workplaces .


8.Every cloud has silver linning -So despite all deprivation a lot of good has been done .
1. Quiet women revolution is a good omen .
2.Democracy have become a process of emancipation from the shackles of wild tarditions .
3.Rural areas need mass appraoch and technological revolution wheras media has revolutionized the freedom of women



Social and Economic securities for women in Islam . .

Islam is the universal religion which defines individual rights as well as of mankind.It is a way of life which give us instructions regarding social life.Man and Woman both are wheels of society whoose coordination forms a sound society.Because both have assigned specific responsibilities and these defines their status.So women have given due status in Islam.It enriches women with the wealth of their fathers and dower of husbands.Fathers ,brothers and husband are their guardian or protector.Islam has allowed women to run their own business ,encouraged marriages with widows and elevated highest status of mother than that of father.All principles and laws have been defined but people have forgotten to practice these.Now women has become victim of males because they exercise powers in every institution.Their dominance can described
by Machavellian philosophy of "Might is Right".

The men consider women derogatory creature .Their status is generalized one when Adam tasted the fruit of "forbidden tree".Eve had induced Adam to taste it ---the creature which has been created from the ribs of Adam.Man thought women always induce towards wrong path.Past civilization never had given their right status.women lure and distarct men like Saif-ul-mulook was deserted and left vast Empire for ''Badi-ul-Jamal" ;the most beautiful female of the world.The love of Zuleikha which could not lure joseph(A.S) but he had to face disgrace and humilation.These events shaped the opinion and it has become fallacy women seduce and lure men.Hindus` civilzation is one of the world oldest one;where women are considered "intouchables".They had been burnt with the death of their husbands(satti custom).The Widows had to live all life in white clad.In christianity women are encouraged to acquire the status of Nuns.Pre-Islamic Arabia conditions is most pathetic where little female children were buried alive.With the advent of Islam all the discrimnation were diminished.Holy prophet(P.B.U.H) married youngers, olders , widowers, in order to define the responsibilities of husbands.His love for daughters Zainab(R.A),Fatima(R.A) is enevitable of his compassion towards women .Many social activist have pointed the deplorable status of women.Today men consider women tiny creatures of whom they are god.This situation is very pathetic indeed because it has sown the seeds of discriminaton which Islam has prohibited.Asiatic and African societies have immense population and highest growth rate but their old instutionalized system has hampered economic progress of women because they have become a tool of sexual regulation and replication.The Nobles hold lands where are populace is their property and women -the tool of their pleasure.whereas womenalso have to work in fields ;harvest crops and fetch water from wells as well as rear children too.

Family institution is organized by women that shape the culture of nations.This is formed by the contract of marriage in which girls are not allowed to choose their mates whreras Islam gives this right to them.Divorce is considered curse for women and men threatens them wit it, if they will not provide them money either by earninng or by lending .The custom of dowery has delayed marriages .In most families women are beaten by men habitually .In tribal belts of pakistan the condition of women is worse.The child girl in her 10s is married with old men of 70s or 80s in order to resolve disputes and to get rid from the debt.when two mates marries of their own choice then they were killed by tribunal (karokari).Many women have become industry of sex and markets are established for their sales in worldwide.Zia had passed Hadood Ordinance which gave free-fledge excess for rapes to men because punishment was limited for women only.The present government has repealed this wrong law .

Most of the girls of fief-holders are married with Quran-e-pak just to aviod their inherited property right.In most cases women are deprived from the dower which is necessary for rightful cohabition.The broken family structure today represents separated and single status women where husbands are reluctant not to give their dower as well as relatives do not want to accept them.Divorced and separated women rear children of their husbands.Widows are exterminated from her husband`s house and her share from his inheritance is deprived.Mostly females have been deprived from education ,skilled learnings and from inheritance.They are property of males in most of the societies and they do no want to give them equal status. They do no admit them human too.Women have to live in the vales ( houses) and covered themselves with veil.The so-called protection hinder their economic and social elevation.

According to our beloved Prophet(P.B.U.H) , Mother has the highest status in the society.If mother is angry then Allah is too .Thats is so she bears child and suffers from pains,also precursor of next generation.Wife and husband relations is based on coordination which necessitates love and compassion for both.Their connection is based on contract but Allah (swt) has disliked divorce which leads towards social chaos ultimately.And it is husband not wife who pay dower unlike in the western society where wife and her parents have to pay amount for it.Apart from dower ,female also gets due share in her father`s inheritance.Islam binds father and husbands to enrich women economically.Islam has given equal status to each gender .It is a global religion which fits in every age .Women were given securities when no civilzation in world knows what human rights are.The person who will upbring two females and educate them will destined to heaven.Mothers are not respected by male hiers and wives are salves in pre-Islamic socities.Islam has defined social status according to the responsibilities ;duties of mother are more then father so one who will serve mother will be in heaven.Upbringing of daughters by father and service of sons for mothers leads towards worldy and heavenly awards.Wives are honor of their men in Islam and men protect them and help them in socialization .

.According to Iqbal,
(wajood e zan c he Qainat me Rang .
Isey ke saz ce hey zindage ka soze daro)
women ,the ornamnet of the universe
The song of her presence dilute the pains of Life .



Half essay because i am not satisfied with rest of my outline and want suggestions .point out grammatical as well as thematic and organizational mistakes .I will be obliged.

Expansion of the proverb ;Nearer the church farther from God .

Love is timeless that is not dependent to the proximity of humans.It is love that binds humans worldwide.People in love are closer to Allah regardless of place.The church symbolists the closeness towards Allah.Most people who live in mosques have emptied heart.All worships proceeds from heart ,and without devotion these are of no worth.One should has ka`ba in heart of one`s own .Those who love the creation of Might are closer to Allah rather residing in the Holy places.


In past times ,Monks claimed for love of Might but in fact they had manipulated it for worldly interset.It is narrated in Holy Quran as well.Whereas Hazrat Luqman was neither prophet(P.B.U.H) nor Iman ,but the was true lover of Allah.Hazrat Owais Qarni (r.a) never saw our beloved prophet(P.BU.H) nor met with the Ashaba (R.A).He embraced Islam with the insight of heart .He loved with his mother and that sublime love made him closer to Allah and faith.

So hearts should be abode of Might and love towards mankind.It is real worship which close one`s towards Allah .Allah talah swt has said that one who will love his creation will love him and who have enmity with them ,will have for Him.

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Sis, Sadia. These are some mistakes I have coloured and highlighted. I will give suggestions in my next post in a while.

Regards,

* You should have used word God instead of Allah. Word God is used by all people, belonging to any religion; Hinduism, Christianity, Islam, Buddhism and so on. It could keep you safe.

*You could give some quotations, like, Moulana Jalal Din Rumi says, “Without love, all worship is a burden.”

* Your grammar has been improved well but you need to write more. You should bring unity in your sentences. They should be connected like beans of Rosary.

* You have given good examples but you didn't justify them thoroughly. You could give example of Satan, the great worshiper of God. God had kicked him out of heavens because he had worshiping lips but not loving heart.


* I would say you to write again on the very topic. This way improves one's written expressions immensely. Keep these suggestions in mind and write same expansion again.

* Overall quite well-done. These are suggestions from my side. Further, you are sensible to pick up good points.

Regards.

Love is timeless that is not dependent to the proximity of humans (INCORRECT). It is love that binds humans worldwide.People in love are closer to Allah regardless of place (PEOPLE IN LOVE WITH WHO?? USE GOD INSTEAD OF ALLAH). The church symbolists (SYMBOLISES) the closeness towards Allah(GOD).Most people who live in mosques have emptied heart.All worships proceeds from heart ,and without devotion these are of no worth.One should has ka`ba in heart of one`s own .Those who love the creation of Might are closer to Allah rather residing in the Holy places.


In past times ,Monks claimed for love of Might but in fact they had manipulated it for worldly interset.It is narrated in Holy Quran as well.( 'IT' WHAT). Whereas Hazrat Luqman was neither prophet(P.B.U.H) nor Iman ,but the was true lover of Allah.Hazrat Owais Qarni (r.a) never saw our beloved prophet(P.BU.H) nor met with the Ashaba (R.A).He embraced Islam with the insight of heart .He loved with his mother and that sublime love made him closer to Allah and faith.

So hearts should be abode of Might and love towards mankind.It is real worship which close one`s towards Allah .Allah talah swt has said that one who will love his (His) creation will love him(Him)and who have enmity with them ,will have for Him.


YOU DIDN'T GET WHAT THE PROVERB MEANS
IT SEEMS MORE LIKE AN ESSAY ON LOVE FOR ALLAH AND HIS CREATION THAN THE GIVEN TOPIC.
YOUR OPENING SENTENCES MAKE NO SENSE.
SENTENCES HIGHLIGHTED IN RED ARE INCORRECT
THIS IS AN ENGLISH EXPANSION NOT AN ISLAMIYAT EXAM.

1. A life without action is like a stagnant pool of water that gets dirtier and thicker as the time proceeds; whereas a life based upon action is like a flowing river that reaches the destination; mightier than itself.

mightier than itself isn't needed, doesn't make sense. even if u were to use this phrase then it need not be separated by a semicolon.

2. Cessation of action means destruction for atoms and stopping of activity is to die for cells.

too dramatic and cells dont die because of inactivity as long as a human being is alive and kicking


3. Every achievement, every advancement, every accomplishment has expended action, not contemplation.

expended action??

4. An action, without careful thought behind, mostly ends in smoke.

again very dramatic, and what do you mean by 'ends in smoke'
seems like a very literal urdu to english translation.

Hahahahaha.. What is wrong with my expression if it is dramatic?? If its grammatically correct then its fine.. Thats what you had said some posts before..
Mightier than itself is unnecessary.. I admit.. I was myself unwilling to use it but I used it, anyhow it shall be erased.
If you don't know the meaning of expend and end in smoke, it doesn't mean that they are wrong.. First consult a dictionary and then raise fingers over others. "too dramatic- very literal urdu to english translation".. Hunh..
When a cell is inactive, it means it is dead, because alive cells don't stop functioning.
Its not my fault if you are unable to understand literary expressions..
Grade 7 grammar won't do here..
Study some advanced grammars..

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2. Cessation of action means destruction for atoms and stopping of activity is to die for cells.

listen, cessation of action does not mean that cells will start to die.
and this is so not a 'literary expression'
this is just a wrong concept of bio!
p.s. being over dramatic is in no way 'literary'
injuries can cause cells to die!

3. Every achievement, every advancement, every accomplishment has expended action, not contemplation.

expend means to consume/use up.
here in this sentence expended action makes no sense and i dont need to consult a dictionary

4. An action, without careful thought behind, mostly ends in smoke.

this sentence i agree is grammatically correct!

Firstly, would you define the term 'Dramatic'? Isn't being dramatic a literary way of expression??? Drama is a genre of literature, Dramatic effect is a technique of literature.
Secondly, expended action means that every achievement, every advancement, every accomplishment has consumed action, not contemplation. expended is used as a verb here, not as an adjective.
How does it not make any sense? Would you explain??
Thirdly, do you want to say that cells die only because of injuries or they die when the person dies????
Miss Natasha, cells have a specific duration of life. For instance, Red Blood cells die after 120 days or 3 months. New cells are produced in bone marrows to replace the dead cells. And when a cell dies, all of its activities get ceased. Thus stopping of activity means death for a cell. Stopping is gerund here, not the fourth form of the verb 'stop'.
You not only need to consult a dictionary, you need to consult any book of biology as well..

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kindly read forum rules.It is not allowed to use red colour and typing in caps.
Be careful in future.

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