Bilal and Imtiaz,

Please highlight the grammatical mistakes too

Outstanding this time!beautifully woven and interestingly interconnected!

(Ghaltat mat samjhna, is ka wo mtlb ni hy) Dil khush kr dia aj to.....very nicely done this time... just perfect...now keep practising on this same mode....

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Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation.
But when love is one sided, holding off is no more an option.

These are your guidelines Bilal and Imtiaz, that I could make a "perfect" expansion. Thank u so much

I shall be uploading some more writings inshaAllah

Please guide me about introductory para writing too as I asked in the previous post.

@ Bilal..I couldn't understand what is the mistake in the highlighted sentence. Kindly indicate ..

Regards

Humbleness, generosity and kindness are the traits of wise personality. Tolerating and respecting others' views are essential in today's wold where firmly sticking to own ideology has become common. Excess of everything is bad. Extremism and rigidness costs heavily at the last moments of the game. More strict person has to bend more at the end, if he has not realized his extravagance.

A prudent person will never stick to and impose his ideology on others as he must be aware of the violence and rebellion may stimulated by his attitude. The authorities need much to keep this proverb in mind while taking decisions on any matter. Recent Arab Spring has witnessed a massacre and heavy bloodshed only because of the tyrant behaviour of the dictators. For instance, Hosni Mubarak has to bear a heavy bloodshed of innocent people before surrendering. If he had realized the ground realities, he was not supposed to stick to his seat at the expense of brutality.

Modest and down-to-earth manner does not cause humiliation of the individual anywhere. Instead, a bountiful man is greeted with greatness, honour and respect. The branches of a fruit tree always bent to the ground while the barren tree stands stiffly. So, helping person is always appreciated as the fruit tree is liked. Kindness supplies peace of mind and soul that is gradually vanishing from today's modern society. Allama Iqbal has rightly stated the people helping others as the good persons.
The secret of dignity, prestige and nobility is hidden in the submissive and kind behaviour. One must not close his mind to think about the others' point of view in pursuance of not bearing much as the consequence of rigidness. Implementation of the under discussion proverb in its true spirit is the only resort to attain prosperity not only in an individual's life but at national and international grounds too.

sure i will do my level best to help you out...
The sentence i have highlighted neither is appropriate in terms of syntax nor caaries any essence about the topic...

well this is just normal, the flair that you showed last time has gone once again, you do not stick to the topic and so it goes awry...The theme is just that Those who submit are blessed....but grammatical mistakes are very few even not really apparent, but overall you are getting this...

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Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation.
But when love is one sided, holding off is no more an option.

Actually I was not sure about the meanings of the topic..but I tried to attempt it as such expansions are giving me idea to improve writing skills.

I hope after more practice I will be able to show consistent good work.

In some places,you have deviated from the path and also committed some grammatical mistakes but overall good attempt.

well-done!!!!!

kindly indicate the areas where i deviated from the topic

Bravery, intelligence, honest, bold, leadership and several other traits define a personality. The charismatic, magnificent, influential or obedient nature in the childhood clearly describe the attitude he will show in his adulthood. John Milton has beautifully explained the phenomenon as,

Childhood shows the man,
as morning shows the day

Psychological researches have declared that human personality is developed in early ages of life. Some claimed that learning during the early five years defines the way child will act throughout his life. It is rightly said that mother's leap is the first academy of man. Also the company has deep influences on one's thoughts and perceptions.Healthy environment and optimistic peers help in shaping a positive individuality whereas the aggressive and pessimist friends lead to an ever troubling life.

History has witnessed several great men whose young life shadowed the greatness in later years of life. Our Holy Prophet (Peace be upon Him) possessed honest and truthfulness since his childhood that made him to get the title of Saadiq -wa-Ameen from his worst enemies. Quaid-e-Azam was an ideal leader. His attitude from the days of youth was of a leader. Once his mother asked him to stop studying late night and to take rest. His spontaneous reply depicted him as an extra-ordinary person as he said that if he took rest that time, how would he become a great man in his future?
Nepolean is known for his enthusiasm for warfare. He was fond of fighting in his childhood.

A Child has superiority over a grown man due to several reasons. He is more pure, more innocent, more energetic and more close to the nature. He is away from the complexity of life,tackles the matters with simplicity and remains free of depression.

A child is father of the man as childhood never dies. There is always a little child hidden in everyone who guides the man to act according to his learning. Therefore, the early years of a man should be supervised wisely to get a healthy person developed of it.