Originally Posted by ardent7

I don't think it can't get much simpler easier and relevant than that..I will take ur point.it is irrelevant what lemons are? I mentioned when life throws u adversities? I didnt mention any adversity... I mention the faults in man that brings adversity. Cruelness brings downfall or punishment and punishment is adversity not cruelity . in the same way pride is a sin and bad thing and resulting downfall as a result of pride would be poverty or inkemptness which are adversities not pride..so these are faults that make us suffer and we can turn our suffering caused by these faults into success through patience remorse forgiveness determination courage etc....its ABC I don't think the crux of essay can't get better than that..argument can quoted through examples from historic figures like u did.but still if u have better understanding than this u can correct me... I m not a veteran ....I would appreciate the help ...thanks

Originally Posted by dr faryal afzal

Dear this is a simple topic, u ve made it so complex,,,

Originally Posted by waqarabbasi

Technology makes a man stolid
Introduction; Technology revolutionized the life of man; it awarded life with abundance and ease; increasing wealth resulted in increased competition and led the world towards instability.
1. Abundance and ease offered by technology; progressive technology blesses agriculture with a variety of food; the possessions of daily use are easily found in a great quantity and vast variety; life is as easy as it had never been before; increased products result in favorably low prices and ensures availability to majority of people; dip in level of poverty; the more the abundance, the more the physical needs are satisfied.
2. Tamed fears of destitution and fatal diseases and the avarice
3. Prevailing commercialism promotes instability.
4. Augmented materialism deprives the man of spontaneity.
5. Leading Cause of Materialism ‘the satisfaction of vanity’
6. Nature is subdued, but the man has been enslaved.
7. Understanding human nature can bring more happiness than the understanding of science and nature.



Technology revolutionized the world; the bigger the machines were invented, the easier the work became, and it multiplied the physical comfort. Relief from arduous manual tasks provided men an opportunity to multiply his activities to enrich its civilization; the time to work on literature, art, peace, and harmony among nations, increased many folds. Ease did not remain limited to increased leisure but men were also provided with a variety of colorful dresses, luxurious furniture, plush cars, and abundant foods. The access became easy to the leisure, earlier provided to the high class only. It was not before the high commercialism and cut throat competition for material gains that the debate on banes of technology started. The higher the technology went in providing commodities and ease, the farther the men went off his virtues for attaining high status and comfort provided by technology. Improved living standard, promised by technology, was offered in return of money paid to producers, this increased the value of material wealth and also the competition for more and more material gains. Men became busy while being indifferent to the pains and pleasures of society; increased amount of work left no time for the enrichment of the civilization and consequently the society became unstable.

Originally Posted by Aamish Bhatti

Brother Waqar, I have gone through the outline and first paragraph of your essay. I think you should re-write the outline as it is not related to the topic. Safeer, what is your opinion?

Originally Posted by ardent7

Introduction (general analysis).

1 when life throws you lemons ?

1When you are over confident
2 cruel
3 merciless
4 ignorant
4 hopeless
5 broken
6 myopic
7 jealous
8 feeling contempt for people etc.

2 make lemonade how?

1 seek forgiveness to God
2 feel remorse

3 get your act together how?

1 through courage
2 endurance
3 determination
4 descipline
5 be humble
6 do good and have good.

3 when life throws you lemons make lemonade- its result.

1 from novice to veteren.

4 conclusion- the sum up

Have your say gentlement...sort out all faults in it so that I may be able to understand

Originally Posted by ardent7

Brother I m really confused too what lemons are but I checked out on internet they are adversities not opportunities... I m such a fool didn't thought to write such a simple essay as ABC ....but what can I say no use of crying over split milk heheeee it has to happen in such way