Women empowerment in Pakistan is nominally. Although Islam and the constitution of our country acknowledge the empowerment of woman, yet she can not get her socioeconomic, political and religious empowerments. Since ages and till today, she is in a miserable circumstances, exploited in rights and deemed as a source of fertility to give birth to babies. Moreover, it is a common misconception and misinterpretation by the orthodox Ulemas that to empower woman means to liberalize her like the woman of the western world, which is unacceptable in Islam. Such dilemma is adding fuel to the fire. In actual infact, the empowering women means to empower her in the due rights given by the law. These rights are such as to get education, freedom of marriage, job, expression and liberty etc., with certain limitations in accordance with the Islamic law and constitution. But unfortunately, today, the land of the pure people’s women, are killed in the name of hounor. She has no permission to get married, education, and to take any decision as per her own will. Thereby, to empower woman in Pakistan has become a very difficult task like a hard nut to crack. Nonetheless, it is the time that we should take constructive initiatives to empower our women. Because not only Islam, nor any religion and neither the constitution of Pakistan, gives permission to violate the women’s rights and her empowerments. Therefore, it is the duty of government, international community, civil society and every individual to empower the woman to bring about a positive change across the globe.


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Grammatical mistakes:
1) Women empowerment in Pakistan is nominally(nominal).
2) In actual in fact, the empowering women means(mean) to empower her in the due rights given by the law.
3) These rights are such as to get education(to get an education), freedom of marriage, job, expression and liberty etc.,(liberty, etc.,) with certain limitations in accordance with the Islamic law and (the) constitution.

4) Thereby, to empower woman(women) in Pakistan has become a very difficult task like a hard nut to crack.



Evaluation
1) But unfortunately, today, the land of the pure people’s women, are killed in the name of hounor. (Futile Sentence)

2) She has no permission to get married, education, and to take any decision as per her own will. (Maintain integrity)
married = Get = Ok
Education = what? = incoherence
decision = to take = ok

3) Because not only Islam, nor any religion and neither the constitution of Pakistan, gives permission to violate the women’s rights and her empowerments.
(Pellucidly awkward , partly discursive & prodigiously prolix Sentence)

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"The influence of east on west and vice-versa".
Your outline is good!
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Free thought and official propaganda
Introduction

1. Meaning of free thought

a. Free thought is not subjected to external compulsions.

b. Absence of legal penalties for holding or not holding any type of beliefs.


c. a free competition among beliefs.

2. Does global emphasis on the right of ‘free thought’ makes thought free in reality?

a. Global struggle for ensuring free thought and constitutional safeguards

3. Reality is antithesis to the struggle

a. Penalties for differing religious and political dogmas; developed countries of US,UK and even Japan practicing intolerance towards differing opinions.

b. the persecution of opinion; dissemination of views compatible with majority’s , and concealing the views of weaker party


c. Distortion of history and facts to make people pliable to the will of their masters.

d. education is used to instill the desired ideas and doctrines in a nation;

e. to prevent the phenomenon of rational doubt.


f. making of public opinion by propaganda
4. Persecution of free thought puts an end to the progress or freedom or intellectual initiative.

4. The conditions required for exercise of the free thought

a. free competition among beliefs

b. ’will to doubt’; scepticism towards our political and national beliefs would teach us the toleration of others’ ideas and beliefs.

c.development of scientific temper ; a readiness to adopt any correction to our beliefs; scientists do not build a monument of infallible dogma to stand for all time.

d. Education should be aimed at generation sound judgments for themselves.

e. Development of the habit of mind of weighing evidence.


6. Freedom of thought needs improvement of intelligence rather than of morals.
Conclusion

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"The influence of east on west and vice-versa".

There has been a rift between the Muslims and the West about their civilizations, cultures, traditions and religions on the basis of different ideologies. The western world is more developed, liberal and believes in the trinity regions. Whereas, Islam that is the religion of peace, believes in One God; it is the complete code of life. However, according to the illusion of the western world that the Islam is the religion of fundamentalists in which nearly all the Muslims are terrorists, extremists and Jihadi Militants irrespective of some people who are well conscious about the realities. Likewise, the traditional and so-called Muslims-e-Ummah, who has been detracted from Islam, is of the view that the western world, including the Super Power countries, are the worst enemies of deen-e-Islam. As per the thinking of conservatives, the institution of caliphate should be implemented across the world and it is only possible by war. Because the western world, is an obstacle that is on the way of supporting the caliphate institution. Although, it is the thinking of some religious orthodox in the east, yet the democratic governments are trying to eliminate these rifts on different forums. Hence, the Muslim States like Pakistan, Indonesia, Saudi Arabia, Albania and Bangladesh etc have always supported Islam diplomatically. For instance, while any blasphemy is taken place in any corner of the world, the Muslim states protest and condemn it straight away. However, some Jihadi militant groups such as Al-Qaida, Talibans, ISIS and anti-Islamic elements, are deteriorating the relations between the east and the west. Although the militant groups are striving hard by every means to destabilize mighty powers from their gross root levels so that they can carry out Islam and eliminate the adverse impacts on Islam like Caliphate of Ottoman Empire, they are not supported by the real Islamic scholars, orthodoxies, civil societies and states. Moreover, there is no denying the fact that the western world has always been besetting Islam, it has been trying to disintegrate the Ummah so that they can retain their power on the eastern countries to dissipate the integrity of Muslims in order to approach the natural resources of the east. Since the decline of USSR and waging War on Terror, the western powers have always been trying to uphold their one power dollar diplomacy on Islam. Nonetheless, the neo-colonization of mighty powers has triggered the issues and the influence of the east and on west and vice-verasa are becoming deteriorating, yet there is a ray of hope to eliminate the differences by the international forums.

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Introduction

External compulsions on thoughts and ideas undermine the concept of their freedom. Freedom of thought, being a certain human right, ensures the inapplicability of physical tortures and humiliation on holding or not holding any opinion; moreover it makes sure the availability of information on any matter without being manipulated. The world developed states incorporated this right in their constitutions; the USA, Japan and China are few to mention. Despite the constitutional safeguards, this right is still unprotected. The ideas disagreeing with the majority’s ideas are considered immoral and subject to penalty. Only those thoughts and ideas are incorporated in the academic syllabus which are in accordance with the interests and ideologies of a state. The political and religious dogmas are inculcated in the society in a fashion that prohibits the way of rational doubt. The history of USA presents communist cruel, harsh and dangerous for humanity, whereas Soviet’s history tells the reverse. The Muslim invaders have been shown as heroes in Pakistani history, but Indians write them cruel and intolerant. The education propaganda cut at the roots of rational thought and sense of judgment. The economic and political propaganda also prohibits the free formation of thoughts; the compulsions imposed upon prohibits the course of free thinking. For the progress of thought and ideas , the world must be provided with the scientific way of thinking; where one can easily correct one’s mistake without being offensive and cruel towards the others’ opinion.

1) There has been a rift between the Muslims and the West about their civilizations, cultures, traditions and religions on the basis of different ideologies.

Add one or two sentences before following:
= There has been a rift between the Muslims and the West about their civilizations, cultures, and religions on the basis of different ideologies.

2) Whereas, Islam that is the religion of peace, believes in One God; it is the complete code of life.

= Whereas, Islam believes in One God.

3) However, according to the illusion of the western world that the Islam is the religion of fundamentalists in which nearly all the Muslims are terrorists, extremists and Jihadi Militants irrespective of some people who are well conscious about the realities.

= A majority among Western world consider Islam as the religion of fundamentalists & extremists.


4) Likewise, the traditional and so-called Muslims-e-Ummah, who has been detracted from Islam, is of the view that the western world, including the Super Power countries, are the worst enemies of deen-e-Islam.
= However, Majority among Muslims are of the view that the western world are the worst enemies of Islam.

5) Because the western world, is an obstacle that is on the way of supporting the caliphate institution.
= No need of above sentence.

6) For instance, while any blasphemy is taken place in any corner of the world, the Muslim states protest and condemn it straight away. However, some Jihadi militant groups such as Al-Qaida, Talibans, ISIS and anti-Islamic elements, are deteriorating the relations between the east and the west.
= No need of above sentences.

7) Moreover, there is no denying the fact that the western world has always been besetting Islam, it has been trying to disintegrate the Ummah so that they can retain their power on the eastern countries to dissipate the integrity of Muslims in order to approach the natural resources of the east.
= Moreover, there is no denying the fact that the western world has always been besetting Islam.

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That's really perfect, so nice of you. Looking forward to have your judicious assessment in my forthcoming write-up.

Thank you so much