Not only...but also, (I think in this kind of structure, we can not use comma as per grammar rule)

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As a matter of fact, the drone attacks not only have killed terrorists but also hoards of innocent people have been killed(independent clause).

If "but also" is followed with independent clause, we have to put a comma.

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Or do you think that the Fellows of the Cave and the Inscription were of Our Signs wonderful?

Please seniors check my outline and give your precious suggestions
1.Introduction
1.1 misconceptions in west about islam
1.2 the reservations of muslims regarding west
1.3 gulf between islam and west is widening
2.Islamophobia of he west
2.1 Fear of "Jihadi Terrorism"
2.2 Every bearded man and veiled woman is branded as a terrorist
3. Causes of Islamophobia of the west
3.1 The extremism of Taliban and 9/11 attacks
3.2 Terrorism spread by ISIS in the name of Islam
3.3 Terrorist attacks around the globe usually carried out by Muslims eg Paris attacks
4. Muslim attitude towards the west
4.1 Mistrust and in extreme cases hatred towards the west
4.2 American involvement in Iraq,Syria and Afghanistan has strengthened these beliefs
5. Causes of Muslim attitude
5.1 Insult of Prophet Muhammed (S.A.W) by cartoonists in the name of freedom of speech
5.2 Rascist attitude shown by the West
5.3 Anti-Muslim rhetoric of politicians like Donald Trump
6. The consequences of mistrust between the Muslims and the West
6.1 Migrants from Syria paying the price
6.2 Defamation of Islam on a global sccale
6.3 Rascist attitude faced by Muslim community in the west
7. Solution
7.1 A forum should be made where Muslims can discuss there grievances
7.2 Western governments should redress the Muslim grievances
7.3 Positive meaning and message of Islam should be spread in the west
7.4 Muslim clerics should oppose terrorist organisations and educate muslims against joining them

The influence of East on West and vice-versa

1-Introduction

2-Prevailing Scenario

3-Islam according to west:
a) Muslims are fundamentalists
b) Islam came by sword
c) Islam is the religion of extremism
d) All Muslims are deemed terrorists
e) Muslim law is horrific one

4-Western world according to Islam:
a) Western modernization is unacceptable to Islam
b) Western world is the enemy of Islam
c) Super powers and dollar diplomacy
d) Western world exploiting Muslim countries
e) Clash of civilization
f) Incorporation of one power in the east
g) Western Blasphemy on religious sentiments

5-Consequences
a) Misconception between east & west
b) Triggering of conflicts
c) Trust deficit
d) Diminishing the religious values
e) Human violations
f) Religious & minority discrimination

6-Road map to redress misconception between east & west
a) Islam is the complete code of life
b) Islam teaches for retaining good relations with every one
c) Regional & International organizations to eliminate the misconception
d) Brotherhood; Human Rights & Civic sentiments
e) Indispensable role of mass-media to get rid of misconceptions about beliefs

7-Conclusion

Please compare the difference.

You should have written the name of your topic.

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Isn't topic about influence? You have pointed out perception (or misconception) of E & W with respect to one another...

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anul shaq

Brother your topic is "the influence of east on west" and you have written majority of your outline on west's perception about Islam, its consequences, and solutions. The topic asks about the influence of east on west, so we have half of the world comprising of the east. There are not only Muslims in the east. A lot of religions, cultures, traditions, nations, democracies, etc. are present in the east. You have to give their influence on the west. Their good influence, their negative one, then the solutions for the negative ones. This is what i think you should have done. The rest you know better you have already cleared essay twice.

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It is same thing.

i guess not... there's a gaping difference

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anul shaq

You are certainly right. I will discuss this thing in every paragraph though, I will contrast both of the said points. I attempted these outlines in 10 minutes and did not even recheck. So there are many points to be mentioned. I used to draw my outlines in one hour, the rest write-up takes maximum one and half hour. So consider my outlines as a first draft.