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Though I never proffered my remarks to you-- I guess, you find forthwith conflicting perspective in my recommendations to other fellows. Therefore, I try to avoid committing any act which could become a source discomfort for you.

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I misinterpreted Point A.1, it is fine in its original state.
I may be wrong, I bet you will score 60+ in the Essay--IA.
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A few minor things I've mentioned above. Apart from that, I think you could have discussed the idea in terms of other phenomena as well. For example, you could have argued that a bright individual student seeks for appreciation from teachers in terms of good grades ((shaied yeh parh examiner ko reham b ajaye)). And when society is unable to provide positive nourishment for mind, its energies can be diverted to Criminal activities. And more energetic individuals want a higher level of activity and stimulation, hence they must be provided adequate opportunities in the Army and sports. These are just a few raw ideas.


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I think the idea is the brains going toward appreciation then how good brains can get appreciation in crimes. although social neglect of people can contribute to crimes , the crimes cannot be made the part of the essay on migration;thora confusing ne ho jae ga. what you say?
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@mustansir and safeer! why you people are not sharing your outlines.i think this way we all can improve our ideas and correct mistakes. so, we all will not commit mistakes in Grand Finale.
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I think the idea is the brains going toward appreciation then how good brains can get appreciation in crimes. although social neglect of people can contribute to crimes , the crimes cannot be made the part of the essay on migration;thora confusing ne ho jae ga. what you say?
Well,
I'm taking the word "appreciation" in its literal sense.
The way you have perceived it is based on an assumption that only good things can be appreciated.

It is a clash of perspectives and that's where luck comes in. Only examiner can tell that what he thinks about appreciation.

So, yes it is be risky but I will take my chance.

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@mustansir and safeer! why you people are not sharing your outlines.i think this way we all can improve our ideas and correct mistakes. so, we all will not commit mistakes in Grand Finale.
I will make an outline on this topic soon.

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I do not think that examiner fails those who go against his ideas.he fails those who are unable to prove their arguments .

after practicing essay, I have come to a conclusion that examiner never fails those who write relevent, to the point , convincing and coherent material.

he gives marks to all the essays that have the above-mentioned characteristics.

and few people follow this pattern or right said are able to follow it.

in my opinion you have a grip on essay, you can easily go through.the fear of failing the essay is no more in my mind.
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@mustansir and safeer! why you people are not sharing your outlines.i think this way we all can improve our ideas and correct mistakes. so, we all will not commit mistakes in Grand Finale.
Yes, it can be hilarious or astonishing to read for some; I am also among a few those, who believe in the myth that "The Essay is written on the spot in the paper only". :-D
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I do not think that examiner fails those who go against his ideas.he fails those who are unable to prove their arguments .

after practicing essay, I have come to a conclusion that examiner never fails those who write relevent, to the point , convincing and coherent material.

he gives marks to all the essays that have the above-mentioned characteristics.

and few people follow this pattern or right said are able to follow it.

in my opinion you have a grip on essay, you can easily go through.the fear of failing the essay is no more in my mind.
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I think the same. That's why I said I would take my chance.

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