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Your attempt is commendable. As per my knowledge, there is no grammatical mistake. Sequence is quite well. And you have tried to write to the point. This is good. All points which you mentioned in 'consequences of the population explosion' are relevant. Overall a nice effort. Just keep it up. I am giving you 55/100 Please do check my outline and highlight the shortcomings. Besides, all members are requested to send their attempts. InshAllah, very soon we shall be dealing with another topic. Dear Aliahashmat, I want you to attempt this essay. We genuinely need you here in this group to be an inspiration for us. Quote:
Your attempt is commendable. As per my knowledge, there is no grammatical mistake. Sequence is quite well. And you have tried to write to the point. This is good. All points which you mentioned in 'consequences of the population explosion' are relevant. Overall a nice effort. I am giving you 55/100 Please do check my outline and highlight the shortcomings. Besides, all members are requested to send their attempts. InshAllah, very soon we shall be dealing with another topic. Quote:
Besides, all members who are taking part in this endeavor should give their useful suggestions so that we can achieve best out of our efforts. Why seniors and other prestigious members are not guiding us in this effort and encouraging us by taking part in it? Are we doing something which is but a waste of time having no appreciable outcome? |
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but you didn't reply when I told you my opinion? |
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In 'effects of discipline', I tried to explain how good discipline can be a source of prosperity for a nation that is why I confined myself to describe its effects on national level. And indeed, effects of discipline are always positive. In the very next heading I mentioned how the lack of discipline can lead a nation towards disaster. I may be wrong.. Thanx for your generous attempt to highlight flaws in my outline.
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isha saeed (Thursday, March 28, 2013) |
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every picture is not good, many people say good and many negate stay happy |
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shakeel ghori (Thursday, March 28, 2013) |
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We shall be happy, if you take part in our group by assessing our attempts and sending your own.
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isha saeed (Thursday, March 28, 2013) |
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Thank You |
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haroon malik (Monday, April 01, 2013) |
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good efforts
sir your introduction is brilliant, but outline is tipsy-and-curvy.if you put your outline accordingly, you will be credited... i hope you understand. And I'll upload my essay and outline sooner or later.........
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shakeel ghori (Thursday, March 28, 2013) |
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Sir I shall be highly obliged to you if you are not frustrated by my questions. Believe me , I am not challenging you , I am a beginner, I want to clear my ambiguities. Dear you mentioned that thesis statement should be written in beginning of the introduction. Does It mean that essay should be started with the thesis statement? I want to know that thesis statement could be written at the end of introduction? Moreover is it appropriate to define a topic in introduction? If not ,where it should be defined? Is it appropriate to define it in current scenario |
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isha saeed (Thursday, March 28, 2013) |
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You are welcome. We shall certainly benefit from your contributions here.
This is the topic for essay. Seniors and other members are requested to take part in this practice. Plight of women and moves for their “empowerment”. Last edited by mani g; Thursday, April 04, 2013 at 12:47 AM. |
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ALI HASSAN TARAR (Thursday, March 28, 2013) |
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