This is good, but you haven't added the energy resources. it would be better to include energy resources of Pakistan as it will help to make the essay more effective. Make it more coherent.
Best of Luck

write comparison with different forms of government instead of types of government.
and i think dictatorship and militant regime are same.
what you say?

i'm writing this outline . its my first ever outline . looking forward for feedback. thank you .

Introduction

essentials for democracy

really good.
valid points you raised.
thumbs up

your essay is really good
best of luck

some more points...

Horse trading
Lack of leadership
Rigging in the elections
Terrorism ( a big factor)
Hostile neighbors


6-Future of democracy in Pakistan.
a, Political awareness is increasing.
b, Institutions are getting independence and efficiency.
c, Media is performing( discharging) its duty.
d, We are progressing towards true democracy.


7-Suggestions/remedies.
a, Public relations be strengthened.
b, National integration and political consensus is inevitable.
c, Accountability of government be ensured.
d, There is a need of protecting fundamental human rights.

8-Conclusion.

Your attempt, views, points are appealing, but one thing I would like to add here is that keep in your mind that in the examination hall we usually have very short time, so we should outline those points which are very very important because sometimes we could not give due time to the important points due to the lengthy outline. Apart from these things, you did a wonderful job...

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"Our Lord, give us the good in this world and the good in the hereafter." (Al-Qur'an, 2:201).

Here goes my Outline...any criticism, suggestion is Welcome

Energy Crisis in Pakistan

1. Introduction

2. Existing Structure of the Power Sector
i. Installed and Generation Capacity
ii. Peak Demand and Consumption Pattern

3. Causes
i. Problem of Circular Debt
ii. Pricing Policy
iii. Transmission and Distribution Losses
iv. Theft in Electric power
v. Shift from Low Cost to High Cost Generation
vi. Depletion of existing gas resources.
vii. No money for new dams
viii. Growth in Consumers.
ix. Political wrangling
x. No Conservation of Energy
xi. Inefficiency of Power Plants in the Public Sector
xii. Inefficient Use of CNG
xiii. Corruption

4. Consequences
(a) On Economy
(i) Deteriorating Agriculture Sector
(ii) Closure of Industries
(iii) Unemployment
(iv) Poverty
(b) On society
(i) UPS and genitors Heavy on Pocket and health too
(ii) Academic activities hampered
(iii) Unrest among the people
(c) Political turmoil
(i) Dam politics

5. The way forward
i. In the short term,
ii. In the medium term,
iii. In the long term,
iv. Biogas Projects

6. Conclusion

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"Our Lord, give us the good in this world and the good in the hereafter." (Al-Qur'an, 2:201).

your essay is well organised.
Valid points and writing style is owesome.
kindly, ad some other sources of ultimate energy like, solar, wind etc.
stay happy.

Thanx a lot dear. I came to recognize many mistakes in my attempt.

Your overall attempt is reasonable. keep it up.

Thanks both of you for your valuable comments... In suggestion section I have only mentioned main heads and in the sub head I would discuss every source of energy and possible solution...

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"Our Lord, give us the good in this world and the good in the hereafter." (Al-Qur'an, 2:201).

1-Introduction.

2- Facts:- A published global survey that lists Pakistan as the third worst country in the world for women.

3- Problems faced by women of Pakistan
• Domestic violence.
• Dowry abuse.
• Acid throwing.
• Head and eye brow shaving
• Vani.
• Watta Satta.
• Marriage with Quran.
• Sexual harassment.

4- Factors behind the Poor status of women In Pakistan:-

 Economic Causes :-
• Women Economic dependence on man.
• Limited access to Cash and credit.
• Limited access to education and training for women.
• Limited openings to employment in formal and informal sector.

 Political Causes;-
• Lack of implementation of laws.
• Inadequate representation of women in Politics.
• Insensitive treatment by Police and Judiciary.

 Socio Cultural Factors:-
• Pakistan a Patriarchal society.
• Illiteracy.
• Poverty.
• Misrepresentation of Islamic teachings. (belief in the inherent superiority of males.)
• Heinous Cultural practices
 Effects of the Poor status of women in Pakistan :-
• Poor economic development of the country.
• Lack of trust on Government.
• Social unrest.
• Feeling of deprivation among women.

 Strategies to bring the change in the condition of women ;-

• Education.
• Role of government.
• Media.
• Role of religious leaders.
• International community.

 Conclusion

Introduction:-

In modern societies, man and woman both are evaluated and entertained by equal rights. They work together for the betterment of their societies. They play an eminent role in the development of the country. But unfortunately, women in Pakistan live in a world which is structured by strict religious, family and tribal customs. They are subjected to discrimination on a daily basis. They face various forms of violence in every aspect of life. The chief factor behind the brutality against women in Pakistan is the economic dependence of woman on man. Furthermore, there are some economic, political, socio cultural, religious factors which make the women subservient to men in Pakistan. Pakistan usually operates under rigid patriarchal system where women are compelled to work under the dominance of men. These factors not only affect the state of mind of woman but hinder the economic development of the country. Government machinery should focus on the education of women to enhance the status of women in Pakistan. Pakistan cannot become a prosperous country in the world if half portion of the population is not given their due share.

Sorry for the late submission of essay. I was not feeling well. Dear members check my essay and please pinpoint my mistakes. I will post my essay on democracy tomorrow.

This is my attempt. Members are requested to asses

Democracy; Democracy in Pakistan.



Outline

1-Introduction.
a,most effective form of government.
b,ensures peoples' freedom and welfare.

2-Other types of government. Instead of type u should write forms of govt this is appropriate word
a, Dictatorship/authoritarian government.
b, Monarchy.
c, Aristocracy.
d, Plutocracy.
e, Anarchy/militant regime.
You should mention theocracy because this is also a form of govt

3-Elements and advantages of democracy.
a, based on will of people.
b, ensures public participation in state's affairs.
c, requirement for Good governance.
d, Secures human fundamental rights.
e, promotes peace and order in society.
f, Makes working of institutions free, fair and efficient.

4-Democracy in Pakistan
a, flawed democracy.you should use word mixed democracy
b, Peoples' need are not being fulfilled.
c, Representatives are not accountable for their misconduct

5-Causes of failure of democracy.
a, Feudalism and family politics.
b, Illiteracy.
c, Corruption and nepotism.
d, Lack of accountability.
e, Ethnic and sectarian disturbances.
f, Institutional clashes.
g, Lack of political consensus.
h, Military interventions
I, External factors

6-Future of democracy in Pakistan.
a, Political awareness is increasing.
b, Institutions are getting independence and efficiency.
c, Media is performing its duty.
d, We are progressing towards true democracy.

7-Suggestions/remedies.
a, Public relations be strengthened.
b, National integration and political consensus is inevitable.
c, Accountability of government be ensured.
d, There is a need of protecting fundamental human rights.

8-Conclusion.

Introduction
Humans long journey from cave to the age of computer has enabled them to understand the difference between democracy and other forms of government. By now, they are convinced that most effective system of government is democratic. However, democracy must not be understood in the form where an overwhelming majority can compel the state authority to accept their demands howsoever immoral; even the legalization of same sex marriages. Rather, it is a negation of all tyrannical systems of ruling the masses. The concept of police state has disappeared in which government had only to protect the citizens from external aggression. Now state has to engage itself into all such activities as are necessary for the welfare of people. The democratic government is but the will of people. It strives to fulfill the aspirations and needs of people. As a matter of fact, the democracy in Pakistan is not in its true shape. It's flawed. A deep and impartial analysis of the circumstances proves it beyond doubt that we are lacking the true democratic principles. Peoples' needs are seldom being met. And the most important determinant of democracy which is accountability of rulers is also absent. There are many causes behind this sorry state of affairs. Feudalism, illiteracy, corruption, lack of accoutability, ethnic and sectarian disturbances, institutional instabilities, political bickering and frequent military interventions are the most conspicuous reasons which are impeding the effective working of democracy. However, we are moving towards a real democratic set-up. And the signs of this has begun to appear. People are getting awareness about politics and their fundamental rights. The institutions are becoming more effective in their functioning. Media is vocal. Judiciary is doing its duty. These changes, which are the result of a long and unflinching struggle show that we are progressing towards a true democratic order. If some worthy and sincere steps are taken, there is every possibility that we will be able to acquire a true democratic system of government.[/QUOTE]
Good attempt. I give you 60 marks. Keep it up

Status of Women in Pakistan by Shakeel bhai



Outline..


1-Introduction
a,, living a miserable life.
b,, gender-based discrimination is high.
c,, comparison with other countries' woman.
d,, woman empowerment.

2-Woman's status in Pakistan.
a,, low education rate.i think u should use word literacy rate. This is my suggestion
b,, marginalized group.
c,, killed for honor.
d,, injustices against woman.
e,, less protected.
f,, stereotypes against woman.
g,, woman harassment
h,, role of woman in development.

3-Women in Islam I think this should not be included. this is my opinion. Seniors will guide you in a better way.
a,, Islam encourages woman's education.
b,, provides them fundamental rights.
c,, economic and social security.
d,, rejects all kinds of discrimination against woman.
e,,women before Islam.

4-Causes of women persecution in Pakistan.
a,, stereotypes against woman and man-chauvinism.
b,, Loopholes in the procedural aspects of law.
c,, Illiteracy.
d,, women economic and social dependence on men.
e,, feudalism and political interventions.
f,, Misinterpretation of Islamic shariah

5-Remedies for reforming the women conditions.instead of reforming you could use word improving because reforming seems to be a misfit word
a,, Improving the education of woman.
b,, making them more independent.
c,, legislating laws on woman security.
d,, stern actions against those who make violence against woman.
e,, clear interpretation of sharia.
f,, removing stereotypes by educating people correctly.
g,, awareness campaign.
h,, encouraging women contribution in national services.

6-Conclusion


Introduction
The status of woman in Pakistan is low and she is living a miserable life. The incidents of violence against women in Pakistan are the matter of routine. The killing of woman for honor, acid throwing, keeping them uneducated and denying their fundamental rights are the common practices in our society. The gender-based discrimination is on high. It is undeniable fact that the women are being persecuted in many areas of country on account of their gender. Though the process of providing fundamental rights to woman and women empowerment is an on going process in other countries also, yet they have progressed a lot on this front. We are lagging behind in this regard. The woman is not encouraged to take part in progressive activities, rather they are persecuted and subjugated. The only way to get rid of such problems is woman empowerment and enacting and implementing more pragmatic and pro-women laws to ensure their security and prosperity. Hopefully, we are moving forward in this regard, yet the progress is very slow, and the evidence of this fact are the violence which are taking place against woman. They are multifarious. There is a dire need of taking all social realities into account and every kind of discrimination which is hampering the progress of country in general and of women in particular should urgently be addressed. Indeed, onus of doing so falls on the shoulder of those who have authority and responsibility of making things better. If really dedicated, sincere, and progressive steps are taken; we will be able to have a country where people will have opportunities and rights on the basis of their abilities and competence, not gender.
Good introduction

Nice attempt.

Originally posted by Ahmad faisal

Here goes my Outline...any criticism, suggestion is Welcome

Energy Crisis in Pakistan

1. Introduction

2. Existing Structure of the Power Sector
i. Installed and Generation Capacity
ii. Peak Demand and Consumption Pattern

3. Causes
i. Problem of Circular Debt
ii. Pricing Policy
iii. Transmission and Distribution Losses
iv. Theft in Electric power
v. Shift from Low Cost to High Cost Generation
vi. Depletion of existing gas resources.
vii. No money for new dams
viii. Growth in Consumers.
ix. Political wrangling
x. No Conservation of Energy
xi. Inefficiency of Power Plants in the Public Sector
xii. Inefficient Use of CNG
xiii. Corruption

4. Consequences
(a) On Economy
(i) Deteriorating Agriculture Sector
(ii) Closure of Industries
(iii) Unemployment
(iv) Poverty
(b) On society
(i) UPS and genitors Heavy on Pocket and health too
(ii) Academic activities hampered
(iii) Unrest among the people
(c) Political turmoil
(i) Dam politics

5. The way forward
i. In the short term,
ii. In the medium term,
iii. In the long term,
iv. Biogas Projects

6. Conclusion

Ahmad you have done good job. your outline is very comprehensive you have covered all important point. keep it up.

While reading your attempt i found some spelling mistakes.This could be due to typing but please before posting here you should revise it once. It would help to overcome your deficiencies. Plus you should not include women in islam because this maybe considered as irrelevant. SEniors will guide u in a good way. Otherwise it is a nice attempt.