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We are just relying on outlines and introduction Brother.
how a outline of 150-200 words can be a alternative to 2200-2500 words. what are plans for writing a full essay.
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1. Health care courses means "Clinical Assistant" Yes nursing is no exception.

2. FDI and Brain are interrelated but there are so many other dimensions to present these two points..so it does not make any difference.

Yes, FDI and Brain have diverse dimension, so that's why mention it clearly and fully in right context.....


3. All the developed countries have strong defensive power. Why? because they excelled in Technical education. Why we do not have the technology of drones? Why we still look towards China and America to import new jet fighters and whatnot. India is much more better than us. we do not focus on research but to import WMD. So, basically we have really weak defense capabilities. lack of technical education further aggravated the situation.

Jet Fighter, Drones are related highly engineering technology. It is not a little technical education. It is an academic education like in PAF, Army Engineering which are on high rank and related scientific technology which is only possible after doing phd to make and work for these things and so on. (In my opinion it is irrelevant point)

4. Yes outline should be modified...right you are. (I agree

5. Thanks for your suggestions.



My point No.3 is the clarification of your doubt.
I have pointed out what I have assumed. Thanks.
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Need for serious planning in Technical Education

1. Introduction

2. Scope of Technical Education
(a) Specialized technical education includes Training of Engineers and technicians in
i. Industary ii. Construction iii.Transportation
iv.Communication v. Agriculture and Forestry vi. Trade and commerce
(b) General technical education provides knowledge and skills for study and use of :
i. Machines ii. Mechanism iii. Equipment
iv. Automatic control devices

3. Importance of technical education.
i. Crucial for Economic development
ii. Rapid industrialization
iii. Compete with other countries
iv. Better utilization of natural resources
v. Ensured jobs
vi. prevention of brain drain
vii. Reduction of Imports
viii. Efficient professionals
ix. Production of arms and ammunitions( Defence measures)
x. Capture international market

4. Need for planning in technical education
Following reasons make planning in technical education crucial
i. Dearth of efficient professionals
ii. Unemployment
iii. poor defense system of country
iv. Human capital flight
v. Need of Foreign experts
vi. underutilization of natural resources
vii. Rampant imports of Machinery and equipments due to lack of technology
viii. Old technology in agriculture and industry

5.Suggestionsfor implementaion of planning

6. Conclusion

Introduction
Admittedly, technology is proved as a main source of development of a country. Without utilizing new technology, introduced and adopted by developed countries, a developing country cannot reach upto the level of them .Japan is a country which within a short period became technically expert and recognized as one of the top countries in modern technology. South korea, USA, Germany, China, Canada, Russia, India and England also considered high tech countries as they acquainted with importance of technical education.
we found Technologies in every aspect of life, not only in our daily life but also in the research centre, in defensive measures of a country, biological aspects, agriculture, industries, trade and commerce. Technology is very easy to adopt but it is a hell of a difficult task to create the technology. pakistan as a developing country has been very good in adopting the technology from other countries but still they are unable to produce or to create technology in all fields, because for developing the technology it requires very high skilled teams having a very high level of relevant knowledge. Despite, being rich in natural resources we are unable to vanish poverty and provide reasonable jobs. There is Dearth of efficient professionals and skilled workers. we still need Foreign experts and rely on imports. Lack of Modern technology is a great obstacle in economic development.For this purpose serious planning for technical education is crucial.
Effective and good quality technical education must be offered to all the individuals so that they excel in their professional life.
It is a happy sign that the government is fully alive to this problem. Since independence many technical and vocational institutions have been established throughout the country but a great deal remains yet to be done. Government should allocate sufficient amount to technical education and also should establish accessible technical institutes.
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Need for serious planning in Technical Education

1. Introduction

2. Scope of Technical Education
(a) Specialized technical education includes Training of Engineers and technicians in
i. Industary ii. Construction iii.Transportation
iv.Communication v. Agriculture and Forestry vi. Trade and commerce
(b) General technical education provides knowledge and skills for study and use of :
i. Machines ii. Mechanism iii. Equipment
iv. Automatic control devices

3. Importance of technical education.
i. Crucial for Economic development
ii. Rapid industrialization
iii. Compete with other countries
iv. Better utilization of natural resources
v. Ensured jobs
vi. prevention of brain drain
vii. Reduction of Imports
viii. Efficient professionals
ix. Production of arms and ammunitions( Defence measures)
x. Capture international market

4. Need for planning in technical education
Following reasons make planning in technical education crucial
i. Dearth of efficient professionals
ii. Unemployment
iii. poor defense system of country
iv. Human capital flight
v. Need of Foreign experts
vi. underutilization of natural resources
vii. Rampant imports of Machinery and equipments due to lack of technology
viii. Old technology in agriculture and industry

5.Suggestionsfor implementaion of planning

6. Conclusion

Introduction
Admittedly, technology is proved as a main source of development of a country. Without utilizing new technology, introduced and adopted by developed countries, a developing country cannot reach upto the level of them .Japan is a country which within a short period became technically expert and recognized as one of the top countries in modern technology. South korea, USA, Germany, China, Canada, Russia, India and England also considered high tech countries as they acquainted with importance of technical education.
we found Technologies in every aspect of life, not only in our daily life but also in the research centre, in defensive measures of a country, biological aspects, agriculture, industries, trade and commerce. Technology is very easy to adopt but it is a hell of a difficult task to create the technology. pakistan as a developing country has been very good in adopting the technology from other countries but still they are unable to produce or to create technology in all fields, because for developing the technology it requires very high skilled teams having a very high level of relevant knowledge. Despite, being rich in natural resources we are unable to vanish poverty and provide reasonable jobs. There is Dearth of efficient professionals and skilled workers. we still need Foreign experts and rely on imports. Lack of Modern technology is a great obstacle in economic development.For this purpose serious planning for technical education is crucial.
Effective and good quality technical education must be offered to all the individuals so that they excel in their professional life.
It is a happy sign that the government is fully alive to this problem. Since independence many technical and vocational institutions have been established throughout the country but a great deal remains yet to be done. Government should allocate sufficient amount to technical education and also should establish accessible technical institutes.
Sidra you have done a good job. your outline, introduction are appealing. Contrarily, you still lack stream of organized thoughts. Although I did not highlight your mistakes, you should enhance your reading power so that you get to know how to make structure of sentences and make it coherent. Overall a readable piece of work.
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@faisal bro plz check my attempt also i m also part of ur thread.
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I am starting this thread for the preparation of essay writing. This subject is usually considered as an uphill task for the css aspirant. And it requires a diligent and steadfast effort to get oneself prepare for this paper. All genuinely interested members are respectfully urged to take part in this effort. What we shall have to do as a part of our effort here will be to make outlines, share useful information about general essays, help those who have problems with this subject, assist beginners, and above all to make ourselves eloquent, persuasive and elegant essayist..

We shall surely start other subjects as well, if we get productive results in this one..
I think it will be more usefull if seniors profer some topics for essays and then the discussion is started rather asking everyone to start the topic of their own will which might not be an important one.
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Role of Media in Current Scenario.
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I am sending my attempt. All respected members are requested to pinpoint my mistakes and help me to improve myself. I am going somewhere and will be absent for few days.

Role of Media in Current Scenario..


Outline

1- Introduction..
a,, Important source for development.
b,, can play a positive role.
c,, considered a fourth pillar of state.
d,, Present scenario and media.

2-Importance of media in present scenario..
a. Vehicle of communication
b. Brings awareness
c. Informs rapidly
d. Educates the masses
e. Source of entertainment
f. Forms public opinion
g. Mobilizes public action groups
h. Divulges corruption
i. Reveals crimes and injustice
j. Infuses political accountability
k. Monitors administrative and institutional activities
m. Raises voice for poor
n. Strengthens democratic structure.
o. Brings social solidarity
p. Debates national issues
q. Arouses patriotism
r. Produces solutions of problem
s. Highlights the needs required for development.

3-Negative functions which media can likely perform.
a. Can create moral vacuum;
d. Damages and harms the national image;
d. Propagates false values;
e. Often hypes up the non-issues;
f. Irresponsible behavior;
g. Creates confusion..

4-Causes of negative functions
a. Vested interests.
b. Political motives
c .No counter-check mechanism
d. Poor literacy
e. Competition between different news channels
f. Lack of accountability
g. Insecurity of journalists.

5-Suggestions
a. Proper code of conduct
b. Media be freed from political constraints
c. More stress be paid upon national development policies(such as uplift of education)
d. Broadcasting of only genuine issues
e. Ethical and religious values be upheld while broadcasting
f. State should ensure the security of journalists

6-Conclusion..


In the present day world the importance of media can on way be neglected. It has become the most crucial need of the day. Media is the most effective source of communication of information. For this reason it is playing a very vital role in the development of countries. It is, however, true that media can also play a negative role which can be injurious for the peace and prosperity of a nation. But it depends upon the use of this tool as the positive and negative use of anything depends upon the intentions of user. At the moment putting aside the negative functions, if the discussion is confined to the positive roles of media only, it will be apparent that these are innumerable. On account of its importance media is often regarded as the fourth pillar of state. In the present day world, getting information about anything has become a matter of rapidity and simplicity. The world is regarded as global village because media has connected all the countries and diverse cultures. Deep examination shows that media has become a most important part of our life owing to its multifarious advantages. As has been mentioned that It also possesses a tendency to effect the society adversely if used negatively, state and society should take utmost care to make it sure that only benefits from this vital tool be acquired by using it properly and rationally.
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Need for serious planning in Technical Education

1. Introduction

2. Scope of Technical Education
(a) Specialized technical education includes Training of Engineers and technicians in(
i. Industary (Industrial ii. Construction iii.Transportation
iv.Communication v. Agriculture and Forestry vi. Trade and commerce
(b) General technical education provides knowledge and skills for study and use of :
i. Machines ii. Mechanism iii. Equipment
iv. Automatic control devices

3. Importance of technical education.
i. Crucial for Economic development
ii. Rapid industrialization
iii. Compete with other countries
iv. Better utilization of natural resources
v. Ensured jobs
vi. prevention of brain drain
vii. Reduction of Imports (Enhancing exports / Balance between import & export
viii. Efficient professionals
ix. Production of arms and ammunitions( Defence measures)
x. Capture international market

4. Need for planning in technical education
Following reasons make planning in technical education crucial
i. Dearth of efficient professionals
ii. Unemployment
iii. poor defense system of country ( I think it must be committed
iv. Human capital flight
v. Need of Foreign experts
vi. underutilization of natural resources
vii. Rampant imports of Machinery and equipments due to lack of technology
viii. Old technology in agriculture and industry

5.Suggestionsfor implementaion of planning

6. Conclusion

Introduction
Admittedly, technology is proved as a main source of development of a country. Without utilizing new technology, introduced and adopted by developed countries, a developing country cannot reach upto the level of them .Japan is a country which within a short period became technically expert and recognized as one of the top countries in modern technology. South korea, USA, Germany, China, Canada, Russia, India and England (are) also considered high tech countries as they acquainted with importance of technical education.
we found Technologies in every aspect of life, not only in our daily life but also in the research centre, in defensive measures of a country, biological aspects, agriculture, industries, trade and commerce. Technology is very easy to adopt but it is a hell of a difficult task to create the technology. pakistan as a developing country has been very good in adopting the technology from other countries but still they (She is) are unable to produce or to create technology in all fields, because for developing the technology it requires very high skilled teams having a very high level of relevant knowledge. Despite, being rich in natural resources we are unable to vanish poverty and provide reasonable jobs. There is Dearth of efficient professionals and skilled workers. we still need Foreign experts and rely on imports. Lack of Modern technology is a great obstacle in economic development.For this purpose serious planning for technical education is crucial.
Effective and good quality technical education must be offered to all the individuals so that they excel in their professional life.
It is a happy sign that the government is fully alive (active to this problem. Since independence many technical and vocational institutions have been established throughout the country but a great deal remains yet to be done. Government should allocate sufficient amount to technical education and also should establish accessible technical institutes.
Your outlines are nearly perfect and according to the point, but you lack in your English introduction. You have mentioned nearly each and every thing. But you need to work on English, as Faisal said that you need to read as much as you can and besides this, there is the need of hour to write as much as you can. You are doing an outstanding job. Your flow of thoughts are really good, but there is little lackness in your coherence and little grammatical mistakes. You are making little mistakes not blunders, so by doing this actively and attempting your essays in the upcoming topics, I am damn sure you will highly be able to attempt your essay or any thing astonishingly. Best of Luck.
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I am sending my attempt. All respected members are requested to pinpoint my mistakes and help me to improve myself. I am going somewhere and will be absent for few days.

Role of Media in Current Scenario..


Outline

1- Introduction..
a,, Important source for development.
b,, can play a positive role.
c,, considered a fourth pillar of state.
d,, Present scenario and media.

2-Importance of media in present scenario..
a. Vehicle of communication
b. Brings awareness
c. Informs rapidly
d. Educates the masses
e. Source of entertainment
f. Forms public opinion
g. Mobilizes public action groups
h. Divulges corruption
i. Reveals crimes and injustice
j. Infuses political accountability
k. Monitors administrative and institutional activities
m. Raises voice for poor
n. Strengthens democratic structure.
o. Brings social solidarity
p. Debates national issues
q. Arouses patriotism
r. Produces solutions of problem
s. Highlights the needs required for development.

3-Negative functions which media can likely perform.
a. Can create moral vacuum;
d. Damages and harms the national image;
d. Propagates false values;
e. Often hypes up the non-issues;
f. Irresponsible behavior;
g. Creates confusion..

4-Causes of negative functions
a. Vested interests.
b. Political motives
c .No counter-check mechanism
d. Poor literacy
e. Competition between different news channels
f. Lack of accountability
g. Insecurity of journalists.

5-Suggestions
a. Proper code of conduct
b. Media be freed from political constraints
c. More stress be paid upon national development policies(such as uplift of education)
d. Broadcasting of only genuine issues
e. Ethical and religious values be upheld while broadcasting
f. State should ensure the security of journalists

6-Conclusion..


In the present day world the importance of media can on way be neglected. (I think this sentence should be changed, it is a starting sentence must be outstanding. It has become the most crucial need of the day. Media is the most effective source of communication of information. For this reason it is playing a very vital role in the development of countries. It is, however, true that media can also play a negative role which can be injurious for the peace and prosperity of a nation. But it depends upon the use of this tool as the positive and negative use of anything depends upon the intentions of user. At the moment putting aside the negative functions, if the discussion is confined to the positive roles of media only, it will be apparent that these are innumerable. On account of its importance media is often regarded as the fourth pillar of state. In the present day (of) world, getting information about anything has become a matter of rapidity and simplicity. The world is regarded as global village because media has connected all the countries and diverse cultures. Deep examination shows that media has become a (the) most important part of our life owing to its multifarious advantages. As has been mentioned that It also possesses a tendency to (affect) effect the society adversely if used negatively, state and society should take utmost care to make it sure that only benefits from this vital tool be acquired by using it properly and rationally.

Your outlines are written nearly to the point and organized astonishingly. However, your introduction is not up to the mark. I have pointed out some of your mistakes from your introduction. Overall it is a good attempt, but to be honest I am not satisfied, try to attempt your introduction wonderfully as much as you can. Thanks..
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