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Energy Crisis in Pakistan
1 Introduction
2 Existing structure of the power sector
(a) Installed and Generation Capacity
(b) Peak Demand and Consumption Pattern

3. Causes of Energy Crisis
(a) Theft in Electric power
(b) Low recoveries
(c) Shift from Low Cost Generation to High Cost Generation
(d) Flood caused Energy shortages.
(e) Depletion of existing gas resources.
(f) Political differences
(g) Hitch in the way of provinces
(h) Inefficient Use of CNG
(i) Corruption

4. Consequences of Energy Crisis
(a) Constraints on the economic growth
(b) Industrial growth hampered
(c) Unemployment
(d) Poverty
(e) Social Issues
(f) Load shedding restricts academic activities

5. The way forward

7. CONCLUSION


Pakistan has been facing an acute shortage of electricity since 2006-07. The present energy crisis started with a gradual widening in the demand and supply gap of electricity. Since then this gap has grown and has assumed proportions. This widening demand supply gap has resulted in regular load shedding of eight to ten hours in urban areas and eighteen to twenty hours in rural areas. Rapid growth in demand, high system losses, and inadequate generation capacity are among the major reasons for this huge gap. Seasonal reduction in the availability of hydropower, reduction in the indigenous gas resources and too much reliance on imported fuel oil for power generation are primarily responsible for the current crisis. The unavailability of this fuel oil given the mounting circular debt problem has further accentuated the energy crisis. The persistent shortage of electricity in the country has adversely affected the national economy. Industrial production has been severely hit; and also triggered social unrest which sometimes turns violent thus, creating law and order problems in many urban centres in the country.
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Energy Crisis in Pakistan
1 Introduction
2 Existing structure of the power sector
(a) Installed and Generation Capacity
(b) Peak Demand and Consumption Pattern

3. Causes of Energy Crisis
(a) Theft in Electric power
(b) Low recoveries
(c) Shift from Low Cost Generation to High Cost Generation
(d) Flood caused Energy shortages.(causes) just because all of your headings are in present so its better to keep the flow)
(e) Depletion of existing gas resources.
(f) Political differences (Political Fluctuation or Instability, what do you think?
(g) Hitch in the way of provinces ( I didn't understand it
(h) Inefficient Use of CNG
(i) Corruption

4. Consequences of Energy Crisis
(a) Constraints on the economic growth
(b) Industrial growth hampered
(c) Unemployment
(d) Poverty
(e) Social Issues
(f) Load shedding restricts academic activities

5. The way forward

7. CONCLUSION


Pakistan has been facing an acute shortage of electricity since 2006-07. The present energy crisis started with a gradual widening in the demand and supply gap of electricity. Since then this gap has grown and has assumed proportions. This widening demand supply gap has resulted in regular load shedding of eight to ten hours in urban areas and eighteen to twenty hours in rural areas. Rapid growth in demand, high system losses, and inadequate generation capacity are among the major reasons for this huge gap. Seasonal reduction in the availability of hydropower, reduction in the indigenous gas resources and too much reliance on imported fuel oil for power generation are primarily responsible for the current crisis. The unavailability of this fuel oil (coma needed)given the mounting circular debt problem has further accentuated the energy crisis. The persistent shortage of electricity in the country has adversely affected the national economy. Industrial production has been severely hit; and also triggered social unrest which sometimes turns violent thus, creating law and order problems in many urban centres in the country.
Nice attempt keep it up In few places i think there is need of coma just to enable reader to take break and understand properly.
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Energy Crisis in Pakistan



1-Introduction

2-Current Scenario of Energy Crisis
Demand supply gap

Energy Generation Sources in Pakisatn
Hydal, Thermal, Nuclear

3-Reasons of Energy Crisis
Corruption in the energy sector by previous govts.
Insufficient management
Gasoline Mafia
Circular Debt Issue
Less water than what is required
Other crucial projects failure
Energy wastage
Theft of Energy Power
Ever growing Population

4-Suggestions
I-Long Term policy
Utilization of Nuclear Energy
Crystal clear foreign policy towards USA & IRAN
TPI & TAPI Projects
Thar Coal Projects
New Dams

II-Short term Policy
To reduce commercial hours for the time being
Boosting to use of energy Savers
Categorize commercial and house usage energy to generate power
Solar and wind energy
Catching power theft
To punish corrupt master minds from top to bottom
Media's role


5-Conclusion


Energy is a sign of life. Our country is trying to run but it is unable to walk on its own feet due to energy crisis, because energy plays a vital role to keep the wheel of economy moving on in astonishing speed. Besides, nearly each and every sector i.e industrial, business and commercial sectors are dependent on energy. In addition to this, education, offices, hospitals in simple words every people is highly dependent on electricity. Without energy no one can survive effectively and astonishingly. However, in the current scenario, due to corruption and malpractice our energy sector has nearly been doomed, people are becoming psychological patients because they can not manage to work properly in their offices, on the other hand, students are unable to do their studies properly and they are studying without power in their school in such an awful weather. As a matter of fact, demand and supply gap has highly been increased since last decade, that's why energy crisis has really been a hydra headed monster. Therefore, it is the need of our to kill hydra headed monster otherwise it will kill or eat us awfully.
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ENERGY CRISIS IN PAKISTAN
1.INTRODUCTION
2.ENERGY CRISIS IN PAKISTAN
3.FLAWS OF CRISIS (the term 'flaws' is not appropriate in the context of causes.)
¤fluctation of oil and power prices
¤poor management
¤dearth of energy plants
¤illegal use of electricity
¤inadequate oil and power production and distribution
¤wastage of power
¤lack of proper planning
¤lack of modern technical methods
¤corruption
¤ignorance of politicians
4.CONSEQUENCES OF ENERGY CRISIS
¤victimatization of industrial sector
¤agricultre sector
¤economic loss
¤unemployement
¤poverty
¤disturbance of domestic life
¤transport problems
5.ENERGY RESOURCES IN PAKISTAN
¤thar coal
¤solar energy
¤hydropower i-e kalabagh dam
¤nuclear energy
¤tidal energy
¤thermal energy
¤wind energy
¤biogas fuel
6.RECOMENDATIONS/HOW TO GET RID OFF CRISIS
¤utilization of renewable resources
¤ use of modern technical method of utilization of thar coal
¤proper planing and management
¤installement of power and solar plants
¤political consensus
¤WAPDA and KESC should take serious steps
7.CONCLUSION
Energy is [the] most important vehicle in the progress of economy of any country. Energy crisis is the shortfall of power, oil and water resources. Pakistan has been facing energy crisis since independence but still face energy crisis (this is unnecessry to mention) which [has] become [the cause of] hindrance in the economy and development of country. Today Pakistan is facing an acute energy crisis[,] specially [of] power and oil. Pakistan is [a country] rich [in] natural resources country; but [due to] lack of proper usage and utilization methods [has] become poor country. As per estimation Pakistan is third largest coal reserve country(You can also write it as: According to estimates, Pakistan's coal reserves are third largest in the world). Solar and wind energy are more in coastal areas of Baluchistan and Sindh. Nuclear energy is also resource (available) to attain electricity. Many flaws are behind energy crisis which are dearth of plants, power theft, inadequate electricity supply which cause severe load-shedding and victim[ize] of agricultre and industrial sectors and price hike in oil price.Energy crisis lead [a society towards] poverty, unemployement and distrub domestic life. To overcome these crisis WAPDA ,KESC and Govt must take [initiative to build] political consensus, exploration and utilization of natural resources to meet the demands of nation would become attaining the economic and social development.
Good attempt. You need to work still harder to improve your written. I have tried to pinpoint some of your conspicuous mistakes. I hope my fragile attempt will be beneficial for you. I am of the belief that if you keep your endeavour on, you will improve your skills to a remarkable extent. Just keep it up.
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I was absent for few days due to my exams. I was getting busy in my papers and was nearly unable to take part in discussion. Now insh'allah I will be active in this productive discussion for the upcoming attempts......, All active and new members are highly requested to check out my attempt. Thanks.
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Energy crisis in Pakistan.

1-Introduction
a. Meaning of energy
b. Its relationship with progress of a country

2-Energy crisis in Pakistan (present situation)
a. Acute shortage of energy
b. Low generation of electricity
c. Shortage of gas
d. Hike in oil prices
c. wide gape between supply and demand

3-Reasons of energy crisis
a. Lack of political will
b. Poor management of resources
c. Over-reliance upon renewable energy
d. Shortage of gases and oils
e. Economic hurdles
f. Circular debt
g. Rapid urbanization
h. Power theft
i. Distribution and transmission loses
j. Increase in demand
k. Lack of planning and research
l. Less work on exploration of new hidden energy reserves
m. Lack of accountability

4-Consequences of energy crises
a. Low and sluggish economic growth
b. Poor standards of living
c. Industrial stagnation
d. Transportation problems
e. Trade deficit
d. Inflation
e. Unrest and turmoil.
f. Increase in poverty and unemployment
g. Psychological collapse

5-Solutions/suggestions
a. Adequate management of resources
b. Recovery of circular debt
c. Installation of new power plants
d. Repairing of transmission and distribution units
e. More reliance on renewable resources of energy
f. Construction of new dams
g. Appropriate utilization of Thar coal
h. Exploration of new energy reserves
i. Crackdown on power theft
j. Political consensus
k. Check and balance in industries

6-Conclusion

Introduction

Energy is an engine of social and economic development of (for) a country. No country can get success without it. It plays a pivotal role for industrial and many other processes. Hence, it goes without saying that all those nations are developed which have more energy resources and a technology to convert these resources into useful form. Sadly, in Pakistan we are suffering from worse crisis of energy. It has made our lives miserable and impeded the economic growth of country. This unfortunate reality notwithstanding, the energy crisis is completely a curable ailment. We do have all resources to deal with this ongoing challenge which has put the development of (the) country on back burner. But what is lacking is a rational, result-oriented and realistic policy which can enable those at the helm of affairs to manage the existing resources in the best possible manner. Someone in this regard has rightly said that (It is well said that 'Pakistan is not a poor country but poorly managed country'. Admittedly, all of this is not a result of mindless decision-making at the top, but a number of other genuine factors are also responsible for this sorry state of affairs. Lack of technology, corruption, unsystematic urbanization, political instability, lack of coordination among institutions are few of those causes which have pushed us in this current unrest (circumstances). There is a dire need of realizing that the true prosperity and progress of country lies in having adequate energy. If the resources are used properly, problem of circular debt solved, new plants installed, corruption is dealt with iron hand, and political consensus is built up to cure the energy problem; we will possibly be able to pull ourselves out of this current mess and move towards a progressive, prosperous and peaceful atmosphere.
Outlines are well organized but don't you think you have mentioned these lengthily? I mean it will be little difficult to mention a lot of these points in given time what is three hours, apart from that, you have done outstanding job. Your introduction is also good and comprehensive, in your introduction you have mentioned nearly each and every thing . I appreciate your attempt, as it is an astonishing effort and, indeed, a getting through attempt. Keep it up....

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Energy Crisis in Pakistan
1 Introduction
2 Existing structure of the power sector
(a) Installed and Generation Capacity
(b) Peak Demand and Consumption Pattern

3. Causes of Energy Crisis
(a) Theft in Electric power
(b) Low recoveries
(c) Shift from Low Cost Generation to High Cost Generation
(d) Flood caused Energy shortages.
(e) Depletion of existing gas resources.
(f) Political differences (Can we also call it: lack of political consensus on the issue?)
(g) Hitch in the way of provinces
(h) Inefficient Use of CNG
(i) Corruption

4. Consequences of Energy Crisis
(a) Constraints on the economic growth
(b) Industrial growth hampered (Obstacles in the economic growth)
(c) Unemployment
(d) Poverty
(e) Social Issues
(f) Load shedding restricts academic activities

5. The way forward

7. CONCLUSION


Pakistan has been facing an acute shortage of electricity since 2006-07. The present energy crisis started with a gradual widening in the demand and supply gap of electricity. Since then this gap has grown and has assumed proportions. This widening demand [-] supply gap has resulted in regular load shedding of eight to ten hours in urban areas and eighteen to twenty hours in rural areas. Rapid growth in demand, high system losses, and inadequate generation capacity are among the major reasons for this huge gap. Seasonal reduction in the availability of hydropower, reduction in the indigenous gas resources and too much reliance on imported fuel oil for power generation are primarily responsible for the current crisis. The unavailability of this fuel oil given the mounting circular debt problem has further accentuated the energy crisis. The persistent shortage of electricity in the country has adversely affected the national economy. Industrial production has been severely hit; and also triggered social unrest which sometimes turns violent thus, creating law and order problems in many urban centres in the country.
Nice attempt. You are doing a well job. However, one thing is lacking in your attempt: you have mainly put your focus on the laadshedding of electricity. In reality, energy crisis is a larger problem than just laodsheding of electricity.
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ENERGY CRISIS IN PAKISTAN
1.INTRODUCTION
2.ENERGY CRISIS IN PAKISTAN
3.FLAWS OF CRISIS
¤fluctation of oil and power prices
¤poor management
¤dearth of energy plants
¤illegal use of electricity
¤inadequate oil and power production and distribution
¤wastage of power
¤lack of proper planning
¤lack of modern technical methods (for example?
¤corruption
¤ignorance of politicians
4.CONSEQUENCES OF ENERGY CRISIS
¤victimatization of industrial sector
¤agricultre sector
¤economic loss
¤unemployement
¤poverty
¤disturbance of domestic life
¤transport problems
5.ENERGY RESOURCES IN PAKISTAN
¤thar coal
¤solar energy
¤hydropower i-e kalabagh dam
¤nuclear energy
¤tidal energy (tidal?
¤thermal energy
¤wind energy
¤biogas fuel
6.RECOMENDATIONS/HOW TO GET RID OFF CRISIS
¤utilization of renewable resources
¤ use of modern technical method of utilization of thar coal
¤proper planing and management
¤installement of power and solar plants
¤political consensus
¤WAPDA and KESC should take serious steps (It means your focus is on only Wapda and KESC, what about Balouchistan, KPK, and so on..... I mean mention this outline comprehensively means every concerns should take serious efforts....
7.CONCLUSION
Energy is most important vehicle in the progress of economy of any country. Energy crisis is the shortfall of power, oil and water resources. Pakistan has been facing energy crisis since independence but still face(s) energy crisis which become(s) hindrance in the economy and development of country. Today Pakistan is facing an acute energy crisis specially power and oil. Pakistan is rich (in) natural resources country; but lack of proper usage and utilization methods become poor country (please rewrite it simply, Pakistan is a rich country in her natural resources but lacks in management in order to utilize her resources by pragmatic strategies. As per estimation(,) Pakistan is third largest coal reserve country. Apart from this/besides,moreover(after that you need to write an adverb so that your coherence can be smooth Solar and wind energy are more in coastal areas of Baluchistan and Sindh. Nuclear energy is also resource to attain electricity. Many flaws are behind energy crisis which are dearth of plants, power theft, inadequate electricity supply which cause severe load-shedding and victim of agricultre and (don't use conjection(and again and again, instead use comma(') industrial sector and price hike in oil price.Energy crisis lead poverty, unemployement and distrub domestic life. To overcome these crisis WAPDA ,KESC and Govt must take political consensus, exploration and utilization of natural resources to meet the demands of nation would become attaining the economic and social development.
Overall a nice attempt, but you need to work on your English, you are still making little mistakes, I have pointed out some of your mistakes, don't repeat them again. However, you are doing a good job, carry on your attempting, I am dawn sure, you will be mistakeless very soon in your composition insha'allah.

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Energy Crisis in Pakistan
1 Introduction
2 Existing structure of the power sector
(a) Installed and Generation Capacity
(b) Peak Demand and Consumption Pattern

3. Causes of Energy Crisis
(a) Theft in Electric power (it is just a minor cause, I think you need not to mention minor cause firstly, mention any major cause, its my opinion you can vary?
(b) Low recoveries
(c) Shift from Low Cost Generation to High Cost Generation
(d) Flood caused Energy shortages.
(e) Depletion of existing gas resources.
(f) Political differences
(g) Hitch in the way of provinces
(h) Inefficient Use of CNG
(i) Corruption

4. Consequences of Energy Crisis
(a) Constraints on the economic growth
(b) Industrial growth hampered
(c) Unemployment
(d) Poverty
(e) Social Issues
(f) Load shedding restricts academic activities

5. The way forward

7. CONCLUSION


Pakistan has been facing an acute shortage of electricity since 2006-07 (means you are limited in your essay, present it broadly i.e. since inception not 2006 onwards.... The present energy crisis started with a gradual widening in the demand and supply gap of electricity. Since then this gap has grown and has assumed proportions. This widening demand supply gap has resulted in regular load shedding of eight to ten hours in urban areas and eighteen to twenty hours in rural areas. Rapid growth in demand, high system losses, and inadequate generation capacity are among the major reasons for this huge gap. Seasonal reduction in the availability of hydropower, reduction in the indigenous gas resources and too much reliance on imported fuel oil for power generation are primarily responsible for the current crisis. The unavailability of this fuel oil given the mounting circular debt problem has further accentuated the energy crisis. The persistent shortage of electricity in the country has adversely affected the national economy. Industrial production has been severely hit; and also triggered social unrest which sometimes turns violent thus, creating law and order problems in many urban centres in the country.
What a flow of your English!,,,,, really outstanding. I like your vehicle of communication. However, in your this attempt your outlines are not up to the mark, as shakeel ghori said that you put focus on loadsheding. To be honest I am not satisfied with your attempt as it is not a getting through attempt, may be you disagree but as far as I have assumed it is not a good attempt.

Please check out my attempt fully and point out my mistakes as much as you can, I will highly be thankful to you.
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You are welcomed, and can attempt your essay, all members will check out your attempts. There is no hard and fast rule to join, just post your attempt and check out others' attempts is the way of our discussion. Thanks..
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