Sir. Chintoo-2010 Provided an outline pattern. Following that pattern I practiced a little bit and wrote this outline. Every senior Junior and specially sir Chintoo-2010 are invited to check this outline.



“Independence from parents is essential, if Pakistani youth wants to be able to stand on their own feet”
Outline
Introduction: Pakistani society is a conservative society. On account of its having high inertia, Pakistani society resists the change, good or bad, like many societies in the world. One of the old and prevailing trends is to keep the children under guardianship of parents. This seriously effects there innovational capabilities but also inculcates in them a sense of getting help someway. This amounts to overall degradation of national development. To overcome this we must inspire our youth to handle their problems with their own skills and efforts. Also parents must let their children to take discretionary decisions by themselves.
1- What is spoon feeding
2- Spoon feeding a universal trend
3- Draw backs of spoon feeding
i- No or little young age expertise
ii- Burden on family in terms of expenses
iii- Innovative capabilities are malnourished
iv- All of these amount to a national loss in terms of potential
4- Factors supporting this trend
i- Harsh social and economical conditions
ii- Security preoccupation
iii- Lack of supporting and regulating institutions
iv- Prevailing power of influence through media
5- Factors encouraging spoon feeding
i- Centuries old system
ii- All the factors that discourage teen separation actually encourage spoon feeding.
6- How to overcome this trend
i- Educational infrastructure
ii- Institution and enterprise cooperation
iii- Promotion of a general uplift in social attitudes through media programs
Conclusion
In order to observe progress, power and prosperity a nation must have a vibrant and active youth with its own independent discretion. Youth is to decide the future of a nation. A youth that uses support of guardians until its 30’s cannot be innovative. This not only burdens a family in terms of expenses but also harms the latent potential of a student. Thus youth must be set to a defined degree of freedom and discretion.

i am not expert and not good in english, but i found following points missing in your essay.
“Independence from parents is essential, if Pakistani youth wants to be able to stand on their own feet”

this is your topic, whose 2 main parts
1 independence from parents,
2 need of independence.

but your whole outline is on spoon feeding, why spoon feeding etc

your essay lack following points

what is independence?
why independence is essential?
how independence can be achived? ( this is some how covered in overcome point but this still need more points )

spoon feeding is not a universal trend.

how economic conditions support spoon feeding? i think social and economic conditions encourage motivate for work and self independentce.

regards

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