Out Line...Give your valued opinion seniors.
Great Nations win without fighting.
Probably no nation is rich enough to have both war and civilization, make your choice we cannot afford both.
(Albert Ellis)


Great nations cannot fight to cause sour wounds on surface of mother earth as:

Greatness lies in peace.
Prosperity lies in peace.
Peaceful nations leading the globe.
Peaceful nations a demand not a deed.

Greatness cannot be achieved by fighting.
Fights...humans betrothing humans.
To befriend an enemy is to finish an enemy.
Victories of force....short lived.
Winning without fighting is long lasting.



Great Nations that won without fight...A glance at history
Arabs...establishment of Muslim rule and changed dimensions.
Scandinavian Nations..... Germany, Finland etc.
Establishment of Pakistan.

Only Peace can make progress.
China..... a sleeping giant.
Malaysia...Robust economy
Srilanka, Finland, Switzerland.


Fights can cause downfall of nations;
Fall and decline of great nations: Paul Kennedy
America....fighting webs entangled and engulfed its economy.
India wasting its potential.


Peace is constructed not fought for.
why do nations fight?
when suppressed and oppressed (Egypt, Syria,)
when justice fails to deliver (Tunisia, Kashmir).
when minorities are injured (Myanmar).

Establishment of peaceful nations: dire need of globe

Green planet getting red...
Love humanity indiscriminate of caste and creed.
Let,s not wage wars in name of Peace
Let true Democracy deliver
Address the problems of humanity
Let us establish the great nations to heal the wounds of mother earth.
If a nation wants an everlasting winning, it has to win without fighting as great nations win without fighting.

Come close, remove your sandals from your feet as the place we are standing is holy earth.

That's what i call a wonderfully attempted essay. . . you have made an awesome outline. . adding to the subject i would like to say that you should have discussed the current situation of Pakistan and India too. .. though it's a meager issue, but it might have put weight-age to the substance. . . anyways best of luck. . .

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Great Nations Win Without Fighting- A different approach

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Violence is the last refuge of the incompetent

1-Introduction

2-Who are incompetents

3-A Dictator,who is incompetent(has no legal status) to rule……..resort to violence.

4-A Democratic govt,who has the support of people……does not resort to violence.

5-Examples from present scenario;
*Taliban and the govt of pakistan
*On small scale…..conflict b/t two individuals
*In a family;children,who are incompetent,resort to weeping,crying,and even violence

6-All the collonial wars that were fought by incompetent public against their colonial powers.
*Example of 13 states of USA against Britian.
*Example of 1857 independence war

7-Great leaders of the world,when were incompetent…..resort to violence.
*Example of Nelson Mandella____when he was incompetent.he resorted to violence.But when found himself competent,he became the champion of peace,tranquality,and equality.
*Example of Qauid-e-Azam,a great muslim leader.

8-Why incompetent resort to it.
*Social causes
*Economic causes
*ethnic causes
*Religios causes
*Failed interests Groups

9-Recommendations….How to controle the incompetents so that they may not resort to violence.

10-Conclusion

Privatizing higher education—generating knowledge or making more money.

1-Introduction

2-What is higher education
*primary,secondary,higher secondary,post secondary education.the post secondary(tertiary) education is called higher education.

3-What is privatization

4-privatizing higher education

5-Advantages of privatizing higher education
*generating knowledge and etc.

6-Disadvantages of privatizing higher education
*making more money for the opulent and etc.

7-Generating more knowledge or making more money for the opulent…….a detailed analysis
*Both are true*stance of plato,Aristotle and other philosophers…money corrupt the character of a man.so they favour nationalized system.*

8-Suggestions…..
*make rules and regulations by the govt to have controle over private sector…to aviod the bad impacts of”money making” motive of private sector.

9-Conclusion

My outline for: "Great Nations win without fighting".
1. Great nations at a glance.
2.Fight as an aggression.
3.Fight for Self-defence.
4.Some great nations.(Germany,England,Japan,Srilanka)
5.Switzerland a multi-racial country,but still happy.
6.Negotiations or Fight?
7.A democracy and diplomacy.
8.War on terror,a pakistan's war or US?
9.Drone a human rights violation.
10.What we have gained from fight and what we have lost?
11.Conclusion.

My essay was very concise, about 1700-1800 words. I jotted down a poem of authors like Shakespeare, Langston Hughes, Rumi, Oscar Wilde, Allama Iqbal (translated to English) and John Keats in each heading. Each of the heading was also compounded to signify the importance literature in preserving the vibrance of culture.
Wondering would it fare well or fare me well :-(.


Introduction
Literature as a cultural artifact
On Wars
Hope
Nature and Beauty
Romanticism
Feminism
Current Status of Literature
Conclusion

I attempted "Women Sportsperson as New Ambassador of Soft Image of Pakistan"
Outline:
1- Introduction
2- Importance of soft image of any country in the modern world
3- Prevailing image of Pakistan in the world
4- Causes of unsatisfactory image of Pakistan
a- False interpretation of Islamic laws regarding women
b- Feudalism
c- Illiteracy
d- Discouragement to women to participate in sports
5- Islam encourage the participation of women in every field of life
6- Islam allows women to participate in sports as Hazrat Aysha made race with Hazrat Muhammad (PBUH)
7- Women sportsperson are a good tool to develop soft image of Pakistan
a- Women sportsperson will remove misconception about Islam in western world
b- Women sportsperson will remove misconception about Pakistan
c- Women sportsperson will show the modernization in the Pakistani society
8- Soft image is very important for the development of the country
a- World is going to globalization so soft image attracts countries to come to invest
b- World organisations will come to Pakistan to enhance women status in Pakistan
c- Foreign investment will increase
d- Tour industry will boost up
e- Pakistan will serve as a source of Islamic preaching
10- Conclusion

Please evaluate my essay as i thought that this essay would be attempted by least number of candidate and argument in the favor of this topic is the policy of Pakistan and civil services.

Privatizing higher education-Generating knowledge or earning money for opulent
My attempted essay 2014.

outline:
1.Introduction
2.Trend of Privatizing higher education
a.International scale
b.Regional Scale
c.National Scale
3.Arguments in favour of privatizing higher Education
a.lack of Quota system of admissions in contrast to public sector
b.fair and merit based admissions
c.standard and modern infrastructure
d.Merit based appointed faculty,dedicated and sincere in teaching
e.modern and updated syllabus alongwith periodic review and revision
f.fair examination and assessment
g.merit based results,positions,prizes,scholarships.
h.Research and development
i.lack of campus violence
j.holistic develpoment-education+co-curricular activities
k.facilities of Information technology and Multi-media
l.quality education through generating competition.
4. Arguments against privatizing higher education-earning money for opulent
a. Operate on profit motive
b.Costly education-poor masses access difficult
c.commercialization of education
d.Heavy investment-only opulent operate higher education institutes
e.erosion of traditional values of spiritual relation of father and son b/w
teacher and student
5. Conclusion.
My conclusion is relative and conditional.If public sector higher education institutes are not improved then privatizing higher education should be encouraged as it generates knowledge.But if public sector higher education institutes are improved then privatizing higher education should be discouraged as it becomes source for earning more money for the opulent.

dear plz honestly and impartially evaluate my essay it is my third and last attempt.
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well...like all aspirants i also choose this topic,but attempted it with a very non conventional manner....
i first discussed the human socialization which gave birth to the nations then proceeded to explain the collective power motive of a nation,then explained how through different means nations satisfies this motive,i-e through fighting,economic might, knowledge etc...i argue in favor of this topic and cited different examples beginning from that of SULAH E HUDABIA after which Islam and Muslim nation got flourished, great mughals who became rulers just afters when they adopt the path of tolerance and religious harmony and all the nations like Japanese whom while fighting were just mediocre states but rose to great heights when they choose other paths..finally i gave the cited the example failure of USA at every war front it being fighting recently...i praise pak government for opting negotiations instead of war....please analyze my essay..point out mistakes and suggest points for improvement...

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