Originally Posted by isha saeed

you are right but,
these points are common and if all aspirants write same how checker find best one?
fpsc require some difference.
stay happy all.
may LORD bless all aspirants.

Originally Posted by M SAMI

ISSUE:

"educate educate educate let the roots be cured and tree be flourish"
sir sayed ahmed khan

schools and colleges for all ensure prosperity and these are the fundamental blocks of any country.

extent of the issue:

1.why there should be schools and colleges for boys and girls:
a. social stability
b. end the chains of feuds
c. empower the masses
d. independent electoral process
e. political balance
f. industrialization would grow
g. economic prosperity
h. alleviate poverty
i. breed the seed of tolerance
j. negate the concept of extremism
k. population control
l. gender equality
m. enhance the living standards
n. catalyst for peace and prosperity

2. difference between developing and developed countries:
a.the only difference is number and functionality of schools for all

3. factors that make the difference
a. colonial history
b. economic instability
c. low budget for education

4.state of schools and colleges for males and females in pakistan:
a.deplorable conditions
b.inadequate infrastructure
c.dysfunctional schools
d.term ghost schools
e.difference between rural and urban

furthermore, i wrote 5 causes 5 effects and 5 remedials in support of statement

conclusion:
undoubtedly,21st century has witnessed the importance of schools and colleges for all.these are the only barriers of change....



please comment on this.
as some friends of mine had taken this as co education and like that...

Originally Posted by SADIA SHAFIQ

Some schools /colleges for girls/women represents like cooking ,stitching and fashion designing and all schools represents like computer ,technological, medical and business education .The mean theme is ; women expertise in all branches of human knowledge is required or not ?It is not about co-education . It is wrong interpretation of this topic.

Originally Posted by dany k

First i thought of going for "not economy but politics is a key to success" but then thiught otherwise and opted "meanings and purposes of education". Here is the outline open to criticism:

1. Introduction
2. Meaning
3. Islamic view
4. glorious past of muslims
5. west in the dark age
6. perceived purpose of education in pakistan
7. real purposes of education
8. steps to revive education in pak
9. conclusion

Basically, i wrote the real purpose is character building.....muslims in past pursued edu for real purpose....west followed....in pak edu is taken as a means for securing jobs...materialistis...not the real spirit....then i explained the purposes of education (i don't remember much--awareness, character,..)....then i went on to say that there should be competent teachers like those of past to encourage edu to achieve real objectives and suggested some other reforms....in the end i concluded saying that edu obtained to educate one self can raise one to heights!!!

i also think that i should have written '7' before '6'.

please comment and do tell if i was able to comprehend the topic correctly.

Originally Posted by SADIA SHAFIQ

what was the stance of your friend or thesis statement .Kindly tell.

Originally Posted by Gulam e Hiader e Karar

Well looking at the outline it appears to be irrelevant to the topic as far as my limited knowledge is concerned......To me its more like the low value attached to women education rather general education as depicted in your outline.......But other forum members have taken it as the co-education which also seems to be the interpretation of this topic.....I am also not sure which is the best interpretation... Anyways I hope and wish, you get through it...... best of luck.......





@ Sadia, My first understanding was same as that of yours, but this topic has been taken from a website which clearly emphasize purely on co-education, so do you still think that the topic has same interpretation?.... Moreover, Can it also imply as low value attached to women education?....

Regards

Originally Posted by Gulam e Hiader e Karar

I think connecting this essay to women education is also right.
Allah karey we should pass..!!!InshaALLAH..!!!

Originally Posted by Gulam e Hiader e Karar

I think connecting this essay to women education is also right.
Allah karey we should pass..!!!InshaALLAH..!!!

Originally Posted by Gulam e Hiader e Karar

Did u asked anyone ?? because it seems like attavhing low value to women education..

Originally Posted by sarosh346

Dear Sahrosh, This topic has been taken from a website (http://www.historypapers.org/essay-c...men-women.html)
which clearly state that it is co-education rather low valuue attached to women education......

I DON'T KNOW WHICH IS MORE APPROPRIATE INTERPRETATION........

Regards