saraa good effort keep it up......... nice article but try to create flow in your presentation and explanation... over all its very good work,,,

[QUOTE=Arslan Shaukat;459235]Dear Sara!

Nearly 35000 people have been killed by terrorism uptill now. Not 3500.

Thanks for that but there are 35000 I am sure not 3500
Yes it is 35000 as it as shown in the aritcle...

Thanks I have noticed my mistakes. I will be aware in the future for these mistakes. I really thankful for your such a nice comments and pleas keep in touch with me and comment whatever you feel and critisize as much as you can I would be thankful to you.

Today I have written on Media it is very interesting I hope it would be helpful for you for essay paper and Current Affairs.....Thanks..

Hype Media and its consequences
Breaking News! Breaking News! Breaking News! A jobless man with holding his degrees putting himself on fire, young schoolgirl kidnapped, rapped, and killed. An awful acid attack on a woman’s face, bomb blasting explosion and killing of innocent people, burning tyres on roads with black clouds on the sky by barbarous people who ready to kill or be killed, protesting. Pre-planned talk shows on pity issues and laughing after that. This is neither a trailers of an action movie nor an excerpt from a novel. However, these are the Pakistan’s circumstances, which is use to be aired by the fourth pillar of state, off course, the Media, whose main objective is to educate and improve the level of intellect and work for the prosperity for the nation. Unfortunately, some times by its irresponsible attitude is playing its role antagonistically. News has become item of rushing Blood Pressure.

Owing to the ugly picture of our country, which is used to be aired by our the 4th pillar of state. Resultantly, Our nation is considered in the world ‘the place of terrorist and a barbarous jungle where is no rule’. It is only owing to the result of our Media, if had our Media done his role ethically and with sincerity since her freedom what is shown in the article 19 of the constitution of Islamic Republic of Pakistan in 1973, undoubtedly, in this time Pakistan would not have been lost her pelf and prestige in the contemporary world.
It would not be false to say that Media is a genie in the bottle, whenever Aladdin in other words anti-national actors who use to order him.The genie comes out and does magically whatever the order is given either against for nation or not. So, it wouldn’t also be false to say that our media has not been doing its sufficient role since its former General Musharaf’s era. No doubt, in some perspective media has been working well. But, in the said perspective, which are pity issues, in these issues Media has not nearly been successful as much as it had to be done.

Media is the powerful weapon of the contemporary world it has the capability to convert day into night and night into day, a hero into villain and a villain into hero. In simple words, Media has the capabilities to bring out revolutionary change in our nation, but it has to do its work on right direction, it has to air the news according to a limit and in this regard a policy must have to be made by the concerned departments. Moreover, PEMRA has to work a lot in order to the loopholes need to be plugged the effective polices which must have to be on the basis of our national interest. Lest, if any person found guilty, an instance can be taken form the recent case of Malik Riaz and the corrupt anchors’ pre planned talk show, such activities must have to be punished by the authority concerned. To the sum up we have genie but without right master which is Aladdin. May Almighty Allah we wish for Aladdin to meet with genie. (Ameen)….

Wow........Nice expressions and well written. Really your expression are wonderful. God Bless you Sara.

Great effort dear...

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You began with amazing thoughts it is very good. Now you have used general vocab. Sara your expressions are really good. Keep it up we are sure you would get good marks in your written exam. It is really helpful for us. But still there are some mistakes in your sentences. But you are going well.
Good Luck Sara.

Date:July 29,2012
Overpopulation, Causes and Remedies

"The hungry world cannot be fed until and unless the growth of its resources and the growth of its population come into balance. Each man and woman—and each nation—must make decisions of conscience and policy in the face of this great problem."

Pakistan is facing a lot of the diverse problem in the current scenario. Among the problems, one is overpopulation. It is ever-growing population that has been affecting the country in many spheres. In other words, it would not be false to say that it is the problem, which gives the birth to other grave problems, such as food crisis, terrorism, extremism, poverty, and other like in socio-economic and political spheres. Although, It is predicated that if in this way Pakistan does not prevent this alarming problem then in the 2050 the third most populated nation would have been Pakistan. So, It is crystal clear, that it is the alarming problem, which must has to be tackled in the priority option.

However, there are a lot of diverse causes of this alarming problem. But, the most causes are increasing rate of birth, decreasing rate of death, social influence, illiteracy, instability of government and government’s concurred departments which have been nearly failed to cope this problem such as in health sector, and population welfare family planing also the NGO’s inefficient role.

As a matter of fact, since the inception of Pakistan every possible strategy has been applying to cope this problem, but owing the hurdles, which are given above, this problem has not been solved like other western countries. However, for the solution of this problem, prevailing government has to work very effectively. The PPP government has little time to tackle this problem. But, with the Great Spirit it can be solved earlier. So, there are some steps, which have to be taken by the apparent government in order to tackle this problem. Firstly, an effective policy has to be made and in this policy every possible action should be devised. Though, the prority should be given to the education, family planing Tex connection and sex education should be given to the people in order to aware the masses of this alarming issue. Moroever, the concerned NGO’s have to be work for the same cause bilaterally.

Thanks for your comment on my previous articles and kindly keep in touch with me and comment as much as u can critically. Thanks...
Regards Sara

i must say that your grip over what you write is quite good,MashaAllah.....you are improving with every article

Please note the difference:

when you are explaining a problem/issue or whatever that exists in past & still present in current time,use present perfect continuous tense. Present continuous tense is to explain something of recent occurring that is still happening at the moment of speaking. &

past perfect tense is used when you are describing 2 events,one is in distant past & other is in recent past. So for the event in distant past,use past perfect & for the one in recent,use past simple tense. For simple past incidents use simple past.

In suggestions,you can add that
distribution of contraceptives(access to them) & educating about their proper use is necessary.
Need to minimize the role of mullahs who mislead innocent/illiterate people.
Need to convince males/husbands,as tackling only women is not serving the mission well.



Regards

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[QUOTE=pearlyS;459868]i must say that your grip over what you write is quite good,MashaAllah.....you are improving with every article

First of all I would like to thankful to you for your pretty nice response.....

Please note the difference:

when you are explaining a problem/issue or whatever that exists in past & still present in current time,use present perfect continuous tense. Present continuous tense is to explain something of recent occurring that is still happening at the moment of speaking. &

past perfect tense is used when you are describing 2 events,one is in distant past & other is in recent past. So for the event in distant past,use past perfect & for the one in recent,use past simple tense. For simple past incidents use simple past.

Yes, I have pointed out my some mistakes from your comment. Please would you check it exclusively and point out the mistakes........And If you correct them it would be easy for me in order to not repeat the same mistake again.......Thanks..

Well done sara. You are really improving. pearlyS has rightly suggested you. Keep it up...

Yes. There are some mistakes in your sentence structure. But you it is better than that of your previous article. Try to write naturally. Go with your ideas what you are thinking. But it is an improved gesture. As pearlyS said your way of presentation is wonderful.

Good Luck.