present perfect tense is used to connect past-happening to your present to highlight impact of that happening....for example
mai nay khana kha chuka hu...i have taken my meal
mai nay khana khaya...i took/ate my meal


this is all i could point....tried to rectify as much as i could,seniors & learned people of this forum can guide you better than this or me as well


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pearlyS's ...................You are guiding her well.

Sara, one thing I want to add with the comments of pearlyS's that try to write with outlines. and keep it up.......Wish u good luck...Your articles are really beneficial for current affairs. Good.

I am really thankful to you Miss pearlyS's. InshALLAH now in the upcoming articles, I wont repeat the pointed out these mistakes. You have pointed out my mistakes very exclusively. And really, Now, I am able to justify my mistakes that where I have been lacking in my writing skills. InshALLAH, tomorrow I will try my best not to repeat again these mistakes again. Keep in touch with me dear forum members. and Especially I am thankful to pearlyS....

Bundle of Thanks..............

I humbly request to the forum members not to focus on ms. Sara's grammatical errors....Let her express her seminal views...Strictly speaking,the columns or articles which we daily read,written by erudiate people,are suffused with numerous errors...To say the least, this is the responsibility of editor to correct the sequence or structure of the sentence..Infact,after writing some scholarly articles,she will be able to deliver the best..taataa...

Date: July 30,2012.

Poverty and huddles before the government of Pakistan.

A hungry boy looking to a five-star hotel for a piece of bred, a poor girl pracing school dress of her same age by working in a bungalow, a father picnicking pocket for feeding his family, a beggar looking his God in a meal, a little boy dirtying his hands with grease in a garage, a poor talented student owing to fee submission, giving up from his studies and hanging himself with a fan, this is neither a trailers of an action movie nor an excerpt from a novel but it is what realities which have been seen since the inception of Pakistan owing to the poverty.

It is nearly difficult to point out all the cause of the poverty of Pakistan. But, there are some major causes, among them; the government’s policy is the first one. As a matter of fact, since the inception of our country, She has not been nearly tackling the poverty potentially owing to instability of governments. However, some instances can be taken from the past that whenever any sort of government either democratic or dictatorship come into power, they have not been looking to the former polices of the governments that why the previous governments’ policies had not been succeeded in order to crush the poverty.

Corruption is another hurdle before our country in order to crush the poverty. There are two sort of corruption. 1st is, doing corruption in order to get illegal work done. The second one is, doing corruption in order to get legal word done. However, the corruption has been collapsed our socio-economic and political means. In Pakistan, it has become quite clear that justice can be get by corruption and furthermore, in the institution of our country, there are a lot of causes which have been found, such as the recent case of Malik Riaz scandle, Steel Mill, Benazir Income Support Program, and other that have been mentioned by the social media.

Pakistan is an agriculture country and in rural areas most of the people are farmers by profession. And whenever a farmer’s children get young. He has to divide his land into small pieces in order to provide equal pieces to his children. After division of lands it becomes quite difficult for them to get production in that small lands. Consequently, the use to live in the bellow line of poverty.

Illiteracy is another cause of the poverty of Pakistan. In our country there are a lot of people who does not think about to send their children to the schools owing to the poverty. Instead they use to send their children to the working place and in this way, our illiteracy rate is going to increase day by day.

On the other hand, since a decade Pakistan’s law and order situation has not been controlled, resultantly, the educational institutions, business places and government offices have to be closed owing to the uncertain activities of the terrorists and extremists.

Besides, owing to the imbalance in import and export Pakistan’s economy becomes disturb. As a matter of fact, it can been seen in the Pakistan’s annual report about the import and export. In these reports. It is quite crystal clear that Pakistan’s import is greater than export. So, as a result our revenue system is going to be decreased. In addition to this, owing to imbalance of import and export our industries have been in losing a lot. Because, they do not export their raw material to the other countries.

Energy crises have become a Kashmir problem for Pakistan, our political actors use to announce that the said problem would have been solved on the certain dates which used to be proclaimed by them. But unfortunately, this problem has been going to increase day by day. Our Current Prime Minister, When he was the minister of the energy sector, had made a lot of problems in order to tackle this problem but since then it has not been solving till his journey to be a Prime Minister. However, this problem affects our economy, education and psycho of the masses. It can be seen in the current days, people have been out of order and have become psycho patient. Owing to this problem in this Ramazan, they use to come out from their home and crush whatever they see before them in order to protest and strickes. Some instance can be taken from the recent strikes of Karachi, Faislabad, pehsawar and in other cities. In these sorts of activities, government and private properties have been burning and crushing very sadly. Consequently, it affects our economy and the result is the poverty.

Moreover, another cause of poverty is fluctuated foreign investment. It has been seen that whenever a foreign comes to Pakistan. He use to invest millions of dollars and when the index goes up then he withdraws and goes to his country. This index bomb explosion fell down on the poor people.

Owing to the energy crises and corruption and inefficiency of governments our industries have been privatization. In this way, a foreign company comes and get the authority in order to run a certain industry and they use to make their own interest polices. For instance, If a company get the gas plants then the prices increase by the certain company. As a result, this is the grave cause of poverty.

To the sum up, the major causes, which have been discussed above, are the main hurdles before the present government in order to crush the poverty. Therefore, the current government has to be active in this regard, and has to be taken considerable action in order to get this problem solved as soon as possible by devising an effective policy under the efficient policy makers. Undoubtedly, after getting in touch with the current circumstances of Pakistan it can not be true to say that Pakistan has controlled the poverty yet. I agree but remember there is a bright morning after every dark night and will rise like a bright morning.


Dear forum Members today I have posted on poverty.... hope it would be beneficial and interesting for you.....and yes I am specially thankful to pearlyS as she checked my grammar mistakes and I again request to her if some mistakes are done by me please Miss pearlyS check it out and as well point it out like earlier....Thanks...

Yes Mr. Nazi Orakzai's also you can get my articles checked by you, as you have just texted me on my mobile that you had got 64 Marks in essay. And please share your experience and strategy about essay paper. Thanks..

excellent work...... Its an improvement. Your introduction is excellent, It seems that your feelings are very nice. But, there are some mistakes of spelling may be these are typo mistakes.................there less mistakes now. Nevertheless, your expressions are very good. keep it up Sara.........You are improving..........

Allah Bless you...

You have written in style of essay. Today, we can say it is a improvemnet. And yes Shahreenaa I agree with you, her expressions are pretty nice. Your introduction is nice but you have written only causes try to write remedies. that how to tackle the problems....


It is a improved write up..
well written...
nice imagination and ideas


Suggestions
Try to write fully like an essay
and if possible, sketch down the synopsis.
I appreciate you efforts...........

Carry on.............
Good Luck..........

Ms. Sara, commendable job..
However,the area where you lack is the organization and,more importantly,the extensive and unwanted use of the connectors,which is simply beyond comprehension...As for instance,the connector 'owing to' has been used more than 15 times....Writing the similar connector over and again would prove detrimental to your seminal work..so,its better to avoid repeatation...moreover,nice work in toto...tc.

sara good work nice article

here i would suggest you some points, those declining beauty of your article.

(It is nearly difficult to point out all the cause of the poverty of Pakistan), this line of your article showing that it is not difficult. i think you wanted to write that point out all the cause of the poverty of Pakistan are difficult and really its quite difficult.

(Besides, owing to the imbalance in import and export Pakistan’s economy becomes disturb) this isn't effective even a wrong sentence
owing the imbalance import and export Pakistan's economy dashed on the ground or other effective words you have to use instead of disturb because it is wrong to use here. or9 owing to the imbalance in import and export) avoid it

(Energy crises have become a Kashmir problem for Pakistan) like a kahmir problem. and crisis has not have...


avoid such types of mistakes over all your article is the best one keep it up with improving your skills best of luck

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