Yep my dear.. I know you were sarcastic and ironical in your comments, but we should respect each other's opinion..

Yep..
Lakum deenukum valiya deen..

it is my first ever effort for expansion...... sincere advice is warmly welcomed

"Each man is architect of his own destiny"

People are often found blaming their bad luck and destiny for the sufferings they go through in life. I strongly feel that each man is architect of his own destiny. M. Ali Clay, the legendary boxer, once said, "A fight is won far from the ring, lot before the match, out there on the roads and in the gym". Your victory and your failure, both are outcome of the fact that how much were you prepared for it. Destiny is a word mostly people associate with either their failure or their success, as a matter of fact mostly to their failure. From all the destinies, the destiny of of Oedipus Rex is the one that is globally discussed. He was long ago predicted to e killer, a cursed king who would kill his father and marry with his own mother, and he done so. People argue, he was destined to do it, it was his destiny to do so, gods were responsible for the crime he committed. But here rises the question, when he had already known the prediction about his future, he should had avoided the fight with the man of his father's age and should definitely had avoided marriage with a woman of his mother's age, but he did not. Therefore, he did architect the destiny of his in a tragic way. He chose to be a tragic hero and preferred his hamartia over good judgement. God helps those who help themselves if you want a successful destiny, prepare a plan to architect it in that way. Otherwise we all have Hamartias for our tragic falls and tragic destinies.

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Khuda Rakhay Salamat lazzat e Zauq e Tajassus ko,
Milay Manzil to katra ker guzar jaon ga Manzil say..

ok this one.....?

"To rob Peter to pay Paul"

Injustice is the main cause of social instability. When a person is being robbed of what is rightfully his, he gets ignited to go to any length. It is evident from the history of human being that the powerful people use to rob what little the poor class have. They rob one person to accommodate another, mostly a person of their favour. Sometimes the gravity of this injustice is so severe that it stretches to robbing of a whole society or a nation. For instance, the matter of Israel can be taken. The land of Israel is basically the motherland of Palestinian people. But the Western powers, specially the United States of America helped the Jew settlers to occupy the mother-land of Palestinian Muslims. With the passage of time the occupant settlers are further driving the native Palestinian Muslims away from their motherland. The process is strongly supported by the super power i.e. United States of America. In other words the Process of robbing Peter and paying Paul is still continuous in its fullest. But might has right, the weak Muslim majority is is still victimized by the strong Jews' minority. After having occupied Jerusalem they are now having an eye over Gaza. Unfortunately the whole world is again ready to rob Palestinians to pay Israelis.

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Khuda Rakhay Salamat lazzat e Zauq e Tajassus ko,
Milay Manzil to katra ker guzar jaon ga Manzil say..

Prince of Duhmp!
You should start with an optimistic and positive idea and not with a pessimistic idea as you have done.While writing an expansion,try to give more examples from history and daily life.
It is a good attempt but you need consistent practice to improve your skill.

Best of luck!!!!

okay dear thanks for valuable suggestions regarding optimistic approach and positive ideas.... what about my language skill...... are there any language mistakes..?

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Khuda Rakhay Salamat lazzat e Zauq e Tajassus ko,
Milay Manzil to katra ker guzar jaon ga Manzil say..

. Good one but not up to the mark.
. You Grammar is good; a few mistakes are highlighted.
. Never use 'I' in expansion or Essay. It is a Blunder.
. When you have said He killed his father and married his mother, what is idea behind MOTHER'S age and FATHER'S age?
.You could beautify it more.
. Practise.

Regards,

Write a comprehensive note (250 - 300) on any ONE of the following:2000



(a) Society is produced by our wants and government by our wickedness (Thomas Pain).

(b) We learn from history that we do not learn from history. (Hegel)

(c) Liberty doesn’t work as well in practice as it does in speeches. (Will Rogers)

(d) Politics is strife of interests masquerading as a contest of principles. (Ambrose Pierce)
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(a) Society is produced by our wants and government by our wickedness (Thomas Pain).


Aristotle has defined man a'' social animal'' .Individuals have formed societies for coordination and common interests.Whereas social pressure keeps masses away from Vices and immoral attitudes .But to eradicate crimes government are constituted.Ironically the group which has been created for the larger benefit of mankind preserved their own benefits .Their opportunistic attitudes accelerate crimes ,corruption and chaos in society .So each society evolved with some good changes which people demands whereas institutional collapse destroyed society .

The powerful faction had always devised policies to grab their advantages .The monarchy ;the system in which wealth ,powers and literature of life were in the hands of nobles .They were free from law but when untouchables--the derogated portion of society-- committed crimes .They were given strict punishments. Education was confined to elitist faction in order to restrain social change.So monarchy died its own death like that of aristocracy ;form of oligarchy .Indian civilization is the oldest one which portrayed how much Brahmans had monopolized religion and created discrimination where burnings ,shooting ,beating of slave class was common . They had divided society into four faction having different rules for each. The ''untouchables were given heinous punishments if they dared to pass by Prevailed faction . So India society has been evolved into world largest democracy .Because people change the framework of society which suits best to them .

Change is inevitable and the only constant is change .Monarchy was the crude form of government which refined in present system ;the democratic process which created class system who will rule over the world .In past caste system was created to discriminate between rich and poor . So system have been changed but function of governance has remained same.



In fact ,many rulers voiced to hide their own vices . They have changed the systems and used religion as a tool.Present democratic system also has defects .Because it is based on accumulation of wealth ,not on equalization.It has created system of banking which organized IMF ,WTO and other organizations .Society preserved its interest and government its personal issues .The larger faction always supersedes ruling elite when they garb their opportunities .

d) Politics is strife of interests masquerading as a contest of principles. (Ambrose Pierce)

Every society has divided into groups having their own agenda and interests . One can win them by championing the principles . The principles which are self- designed by society -the system of democracy which replaced communism- are necessary medium for winning their agendas. Many leaders have shaped new principles to champion their cause . But politics is the medium to get the inherent schemes of minds and hearts.

Politics is not confined to political institution. It is in every institution. In family institution power, wealth and land are the major interest . These things have caused rift within the families; but Who knows the tactics of propaganda, mass-contact and have creative mind , he will be able to win the cause of his interest . It is by portraying the facts according to the rule of law.

Communism ,socialism and dictatorship and democracy are the principles to win the support of people. But democracy first by culture then by polity have become acknowledged principle which made one faction to lose and another to win . Nothing is right and wrong in systems or in principles ,it is people who make them popular by contest .

Wars, conflicts and civil disobedience movements are generally a conflict between government and masses. Sometimes Rulers has won whereas masses get support and take a lead on other occasion . And Non-Alignment movement ,Nelson Mandela's struggle ,Nehru cause for free flow of information have their own national interests. Their refined diplomacy and true cause have made them brave leader and hero in the eyes of people .

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"Wa tu izzu man-ta shaa, wa tu zillu man-ta shaa"

seniors need your kind guidance ....


Knowledge is appreciated everywhere regardless of people, place, culture or tradition. Even in the court of Changaiz Khan and Halaku khan, knowledge was respected. Contrary, Ignorance is always discouraged everywhere. People do not like to tell others that they are unaware of any particular thing. However, there are the times when knowledge becomes a problem as staying in touch with the information may result in panic. The current situation of restlessness in Karachi is a truly represents “knowledge is worry”. The more you are aware of current political and social situation of different cities in Pakistan the most depressed person you are. However, if you do not tune into any TV channel, do not read newspaper and pay heed to such news on social media; you may feel yourself in the bliss. But indeed, this bliss is the bliss of ignorance and you may be living in a fool’s paradise.

Therefore, even if the knowledge may panic you, it may depress you but this is what the truth is. This is how things are in real. On the other hand, even if the ignorance or unawareness may appear to you as heaven or bliss but it is not a reality, this is not how things are in real. You may escape for a while from truth but what you have to accept at the end is nothing else but truth or knowledge. Hence, search for the knowledge as ultimately you have to reach to knowledge; no matter what course you choose to get it.

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If the above post has any grammatical, punctuation or any other mistake in English please mention it.

You have rightly explained the first part (Society) of the quotation but second part (Government) needs some improvement. You may refer to the following link for some input:

http://voices.yahoo.com/society-prod...410.html?cat=9

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Best end of life is not knowledge but action.
Don't limit yourself to what you think people are expecting!

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If the above post has any grammatical, punctuation or any other mistake in English please mention it.