A Great effort indeed..
Very few grammatical mistakes, as far as I could find out.
Coherent thought..
I don't know the word count.. Make sure that it ranges between 250-300.
8/10 from me.. Keep it up..

Its end of my essay. Please point out my mistakes. I am waiting

Good.. There were some mistakes. I have pointed them out and have made corrections as well..

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"So my birth was the first of all my misfortunes". (Jean Jacques Rosseou)

Fortune favors the brave:

‘God helps those who help themselves’, says another proverb, echoing a similar meaning as that of the given proverb. Indeed those who dare to attempt at something, fortune favors them in one way or another. Nothing can help a person who is timid and sluggish to achieve something. If one is a coward and is less confident about oneself, one could not get going in any phase and pass of life. One’s courage and confidence takes one towards one’s goal and one achieves success. Fortune cannot favor one who lacks courage and self-assurance; for such a person is not worthy of any favor.

Cowardice, lack of confidence and timidity take one to nowhere. Verily, circumstances assist one who tries and tries hard. It has been said truly, ‘Man is the architect of his own fortune’. Thus one who is brave, crafts his destiny in the way he wants, and the one, who is timid, meddles with himself and his fortune; and ultimately comes out of it with bare hands. A stock of examples can be given from history of such brave men who worked diligently; made fortune help them; and paved their way to their destiny or goal. Hazrat Muhammad (P.B.U.H), Quaid-e-Azam, Napoleon, Hitler, Einstein, Newton and many more, are the examples of those men who struggled, worked industriously, compelled fortune to favor them, and fought their way to success.

Hence, those who make courage and confidence their armor and struggle hard to achieve their goals, fortune gets compelled to favor them; whereas those who debilitate their efforts because of timidity and cowardice and a lack of courage, get no favor of fortune and stand empty handed throughout their lives.


Word Count: 280

Criticism will be valued greatly.. Feel free to criticize..

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"So my birth was the first of all my misfortunes". (Jean Jacques Rosseou)

Political will power and implementation of policies (is ki koi acchi heading bataen means in words ko kese likho?
Making policies has?or have? never been the plight of our government(s?. It is the lack of implementation which keeps the wheel of problems moving. Today our government not only needs to take initiatives and hard decisions, it also needs to give a boost to the dying economy by practical political will power.


Corruption and malpractice
However, corruption, misuse of funds, malpractices of all departments must be eradicated at all costs. Besides, the energy consumption and wastage must be avoided and eradicated at all costs.


Trust Deficit
Last but not least, the public trust and support is of utmost importance. No policy can (be? ye aega[/COLOR] succeed if it does not enjoy the public support. [COLOR="rgb(255, 192, 203)"]the? [/COLOR]Media can play an effective role in creating awareness and trust that it is actually a global problem which can only be solved with the?help and conscious effort by every citizen.

Conclusion
Conclusively, Pakistan is facing severe overpopulation problem of the history (conclusion ka koi 1st scentece bate jo effective ho?[/COLOR]. As a matter of fact, no country is free from this problem because it is present nearly in every country but the winners are those who overcome it. Therefore, to curb this problem requires transparent effort at every level and the future policies should be practical oriented . Although Pakistan is [COLOR="rgb(221, 160, 221)"]currently [/COLOR]facing overpopulation problem but it does not mean that it is going towards its end. Nations face multifarious problems but together they work for towards the solution. The sooner we realize the gravity of the situation, the sooner we will emerge out of this problem. The same is the need of hour. The? government as well as every citizen of Pakistan[COLOR="rgb(221, 160, 221)"](i?[/COLOR] has to play its own specific role to bring about a positive change. Though the task is difficult and time consuming but not impossible. Commitment, trust and hope are the tools to overcome [COLOR="rgb(221, 160, 221)"]the[/COLOR] problems.

@ Da Skeptic & other members

Thank you for correcting my mistakes. I am dull in article using. I have doubt in some scentences. I have pointed out my mistakes. Might be these are mistakes in pink color please correct them.

Thanks.....I am waiting

Well, i would like it to be like that...i have corrected some of your mistakes. you need to work on your punctuations,articles, structure of your sentences and a little bit focus on grammar. Additionally, i have just corrected your major mistakes and there is still room for more.

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"Our Lord, give us the good in this world and the good in the hereafter." (Al-Qur'an, 2:201).

Now you may check it out. If you found any mistake in it please correct it out.

Political will power and pragmetic implementation of policies (I think this heading is better. If you make it little different and good. You may share it.
Making policies has never been the plight of our government. It is the lack of implementation which keeps the wheel of problems moving. Today our government not only needs to take initiatives and hard decisions, but it also needs to give a boost to the dying economy by pragmatic strategies.

Trust Deficit
Last but not least, the public trust and support is of utmost importance. No policy can succeed if it does not enjoy public support. Media can plays an effective role in creating awareness and trust that it is actually a global problem which can only be solved with help and conscious effort by every citizen.


Conclusion
Conclusively, Pakistan is facing severe overpopulation problem in these days. As a matter of fact, no country is free from this problem because it is present nearly in every country but the winners are those who overcome it. Therefore, to curb this problem requires transparent effort at every level and the future policies should be practical oriented. Although Pakistan is currently facing overpopulation problem but it does not mean that it is going towards its end. Nations face multifarious problems but together they work for towards the solution. The sooner we realize the gravity of the situation, the sooner we will emerge out of this problem. The same is the need of hour. The government as well as every citizen of Pakistan has to play its own specific role to bring about a positive change. Though the task is difficult and time consuming but not impossible. Commitment, trust and hope are the tools to overcome the problems. Well said by Quaid-e-Azam: "....abc..." or As it is said by Quiad....or just quotation likhu? koi linking word batae so that I can present my quote in last (is it good way?

Waiting ........

Konsa sentence sahee he? Ap apni language me kese likhenge please share with me... Make it a flouvery and beautiful scentence

Though the task is difficult and time consuming but not impossible. Commitment, trust and hope are the tools to overcome the problems.

Though the task is difficult and time consuming but not impossible. Commitment, trust and hope is the tools to overcome the problems.

Though the task is difficult and time consuming but not impossible. Commitment, trust and hopes are the tools to overcome the problems.

[QUOTE=aishamemona;519588]Now you may check it out. If you found any mistake in it please correct it out.

Making policies has never been the plight of our government. It is the lack of implementation which keeps the wheel of problems moving. Today our government not only needs to take initiatives and hard decisions but also boost to the dying economy by pragmatic strategies.


Last but not least, the public trust and support is of utmost importance. No policy can succeed if it does not enjoy public support. Media can play an effective role in creating awareness and trust that it is actually a global problem which can only be solved with the help and conscious efforts of every citizen.


Conclusively, Pakistan is facing severe overpopulation problem in these days. As a matter of fact, no country is free from this problem, because it is present nearly in every country. But the winners are those who overcome it. Therefore, In order to curb this problem there is a need for transparent effort at every level. Similarly, the future policies should be practical oriented. Although Pakistan is currently facing overpopulation problem, but it does not mean that it is going towards its end. Nations face multifarious problems but they overcome that by concerted effort. In fact, The sooner we realize the gravity of the situation, the sooner we will emerge out of this problem. The government as well as every citizen of Pakistan has to play their role so as to bring about a positive change. Though the task is difficult and time consuming, but not impossible.
Commitment, trust and hope is the tools of every malady.

"Once it was necessary that the people should multiply and be fruitful if the race was to survive. But now to preserve the race it is necessary that people hold back the power of propagation."

--Helen Keller

This is the way you may quote. i have one again pointed out you grammatical, punctuation, and articles mistakes.

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"Our Lord, give us the good in this world and the good in the hereafter." (Al-Qur'an, 2:201).