Crockery makes much noise when strike with each other during washing and its placement in racks. This happen because they are empty moreover, user does not pay much attention to handle or use them carefully as he does not have any fear for loss of any material. Like empty vessel ignorant, cash starved and poor man also creates disturbance in society and in his own personal life. Poor peoples are deprived of basic necessities of life such as food, shelter, education and cloth. It is a natural phenomenon that if the needs of soul and body are not meet or both are empty from their needs, personal and social life of a person would be disturbed. He is arrogant toward his fellow man at work place and shows quarrel some behaviour and generally impatience in his attitude. Family life also disturbed as his wife and children demands access to worldly goods however, its financial limitations does not allow him to fulfill their needs. Most of the protests in third world countries end in chaos and in rebellious activities. People loose sense of responsibility and moral ethics during which they damage public property and harm national interest, while protest in developed countries are peaceful and show of elegancy. Difference between the behaviours is due to education. Their heart, mind and soul are empty from the virtue of education, moral values and sense of responsibility. It is rightly said by Malcom forbes “The purpose of education is to replace an empty mind with an open one”. Education is the only tool which builds peaceful and decent society, so in order to make our society peaceful education in civic sense is necessary, while fulfilling basic necessities of poor is also require for making their personal and family life happy.

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Sweets are the uses of Adversity

Up and downs are part of life, sometime people face unexpected situation which shaken their life. It may be any tragic or happy incident. It is instinct nature and psychology of man that if any one enjoys reputed position in society in terms of wealth and power people closely attached with him. Show their support, pleasure and assistance to that strong man. However, when tide turns against him and fate coin of strong man turns to opposite side, who face adversity and lost his power, wealth, business, family and influence. Victim person practically experience the show of fair whether friends. It seems that everything went against him and he faces difficulties in getting food, shelter and clothes. Here real test of personality of victim person start. He has two options either live himself on the mercy of situation and destroy his future or to face the difficulties with courage. An ambitious man ultimately chooses latter option. He strives hard to overcome his miseries and show enthusiasm to get rid from difficulties. It is common observation that more the iron burn in fire more it get stronger, same is the case with a person who overcomes the miseries with his strong will power and courage. Now he has develops him as a stronger and mature person. He has confidence in himself to excel in life. He behaves like experience and trained person. All these qualities ultimately makes him successful and happy person. He really enjoys these two verses of surah Alm Nashra of Holy Quran “There would be ease after difficulty. Indeed there would be ease after difficulty.

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Dear, To the best of my knowledge i have pinpointed some of your mistakes. But most important thing is that your message, in the paragraph, is not fulfilling the requirement of Title...you are getting off the track in many ways. Its my opinion and other may disagree.

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"Our Lord, give us the good in this world and the good in the hereafter." (Al-Qur'an, 2:201).

Cash starve poor man creates disturbance in society as well as in his personal life like empty vessel.

Fulfilling basic necessities of poor is also require to make their life happy.

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its better now.

Fulfillment of basic necessities of the poor people is crucial, because it would make their life happy.

Note: Empty vessel make much noice

As far as my knowledge is concerned, the basic meaning of the Title is that the people who are worthy, knowledgeable, famous or alike do not show off. On the contrary, the people who are just nothing talk too much about their trivial achievements...
Other members, if it is not so correct me.

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"Our Lord, give us the good in this world and the good in the hereafter." (Al-Qur'an, 2:201).

Man probes into space but not into himself

Man has reached on moon, trying to reach other planets, he is getting busy to search out the other planets but have forgotten himself. Man has discovered many things but has not discovered himself. He is getting busy in materialist world, but he is going far from himself. He thinks about other galaxies, he thinks where the Plato planet is gone, but he doesn't think that where he is gone. He wants to probe out every thing that is in the space. He is going far far away from himself. Man is going further with materialistic world. Many sufis, mystics, and wise mans tried to find out the God, they used to go into temples, mosques, to sadhos but the God was not present. As God can not be seen in these things because it needs a spiritual will, sincerity with oneself. As Hazrat Shah Abdul Latif Bhittai said "Allah can be seen into ones heart". When a man with sincerity, spirituality and honesty looks into his heart, he can find out Allah in his inner core of heart.


In this current era, man has forgotten himself, he is alone from himself. He is just trying to search out new things. He has created airplanes, shuttles, rocket and many other things. Although he is failed to make himself satisfied. Moreover, he is asking himself what he is!, why he is!, what he has to be!, he has just forgotten his reality, he is alone from the spirituality, is getting busy in materialistic world. He wants to more and more reality about the universe, wants to reach to the sun,he wants to make his heaven at moon, but he is alone from himself. While he thinks about supernatural powers, divinity, then he comes to know that these are the things which get him relaxed. Furthermore, when he jumps into his heart and gets to know that what I am, what I have to be, then this world becomes beautiful for him. He sees every thing with spiritual eyes, but when man does not look into his inner core of heart then he becomes disturb, disheart and not satisfied with himself, because he is getting busy with materialist world, probe into space but does not probe into himself.

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Please check it out and give me marks. So that I can be able to improve more and more.

Thanking in advance......

Hmmm... ahmed Bhai you seems to be very tough checker, Please check my another expansion "sweets are the uses of adversity".

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Empty Vessel makes much noise.

When complemented about his scientific achievements, Issac Newton humbly told his admirers that he was just like a child picking up pebbles in the ocean of knowledge. While humility is the hallmark of a great man, a hollow man is often characterised by boastful manners.

A truly learned man is always conscious of the vast area of human endeavour of which he is ignorant. He knows what he does not know. A shallow person with a smattering of knowledge about a handful of subjects is completely oblivious of his ignorance of most subjects. He shows off whatever little he knows to attract attention. It does not matter so long as he is in the company of ignorant people. But he thoroughly exposes his ignorance in the presence of knowledgeable people.

Desire to show off one's superiority is observed mostly among people who are acutely conscious of their inferiority or worthlessness. They try hard to conceal their lack of substance by putting up a brave front while knowledgeable candidates facing an interview board are precise and to the point in their replies to questions, shallow candidates beat about the bush to conceal their ignorance.

They consider they smart enough to browbeat the veteran and experienced members on the interview board. In ideological disputes in a political party, the most seasoned politicians will keep their counsel whereas the novice will move heaven and hell to prove their point. The veteran leader intervenes decisively and settles the issue with his weighty opinion. Achievement oriented people take as their role models the greatest achievers in the world.

Thus an accomplished batsman like Sachin Tendulkar would like to equal the record batting average of over 99 in test cricket of Don Bradman of Australia. As he has not reached anywhere near this average so far, his achievements have not gone to his head.

Not only individuals, communities and nations too loose their balance and indulge in tall talk. With half of India's population still ignorant of the 3 r's at the turn of the Twentieth Century, many Indians boast of their great civilization and dream of once again putting on the mantle of the World-Guru.

The erstwhile rulers of the Soviet Union bragged about destroying capitalism and bringing about universal communism at a time when their economy was nearing collapse. U.S.S.R. has since disintegrated and Russia is fighting for her survival.

Wonder and mystery of world and phenomena of life induce awe in the minds of profound thinkers. It is impossible to unravel all the mysteries of nature. Man has only begun to understand a few aspects of this mystery. The enormity of the task of under¬standing nature strikes him dumb.

All his formulations of law of nature or of society are tentative attempts without any finality. Only semi-educated people can claim to have discovered the whole truth about nature or society. No ideology alone can solve the problems of mankind. If somebody claims so, he will be considered an ignoramus in the world of today. Wisemen will venture a few tentative generalisations. Only shallow people will be loud in their protestations, it is truly observed that an empty vessel makes much noise.

An eminent example of disproportionate noise compared to factual knowledge is provided by the big ruckus raised in connection with article 370 of Indian Constitution relating to the State of Jammu and Kashmir. Most people who cry hoarse over deletion of article 370 have never read this provision of the constitution. Their emotional outbursts are triggered by their momentary impulses. Knowledge of constitutional provision made by the founding fathers of Indian Constitution would surely have a salutory effect on them.

Brevity is the soul of wit', said William Shakespeare. A Wiseman weighs his words carefully before making use of them. He never wastes a word. He is able to express the profoundest of thoughts in fewest possible words. Francis Bacon is famous for his pithy and epigrammatic sentences. He is the most quotable of all English essayists. Similarly Alexander Pope excels as a poet in capturing great ideas in memorable phrases like "Fools rush in where Angels fear to tread" or "A little knowledge is a dangerous thing". Bacon and Pope occupy high position in English literature whereas many of their more verbose, pompous and longwinded contemporaries are completely forgotten.

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Miss aisha, before i check your draft, you should re-check it yourself and see if there is any problem. Because after cursory look I found many errors.

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"Our Lord, give us the good in this world and the good in the hereafter." (Al-Qur'an, 2:201).

your this paragraph seems relevant and not the rest of the draft. Before writing you need to understand the meaning of proverb etc without which everything is just futile.

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"Our Lord, give us the good in this world and the good in the hereafter." (Al-Qur'an, 2:201).