Originally Posted by ProgressiveError

Oh there were highlighted mistakes These were hard to see in a glance

The more you are aware of current political and social situation of different cities in Pakistan the most??? depressed person you are.

the more depresses person you are. How is it?

Hence, search for the knowledge as ultimately you have to reach to ?? knowledge; no matter what course you choose to get it.

ultimately you have to come across knowledge. and hows this?

Originally Posted by zuhaib ahmed

Originally Posted by zuhaib ahmed

We never know the worth of water till the well is dry




One never realizes and feels importance of valuable things until these are lost. Life and world are changeable, they snatch things and make us aware about them. Flowers know value of spring in autumn, fish know value of water in dried land and men know importance of life in hospital ward. Freedom, time and dears (dear ones) are invaluable but one ignores and makes them valueless and comes out from dormant condition when these are flown.

A nation where freedom is not realized well, is taken lightly and not protected, soon that nation is conquered by external force. That very nation knows its importance, craves and yearns for freedom. People of that nation shed blood tears when they lose their beloveds (beloved ones/loved ones) in slavery life (slavery would suffice). They become slaves of unknown kings who keep whips in their hands for (the) helpless and slaves. Then, people know importance of Independence. As Boris Yeltsin says, "We don't appreciate what we have until it's gone."

Time is very precious but its preciousness is ever avoided. Many people take time lightly and regret in old age saying with sighs "if" and "would that". Time's worth is known when it is run out of hands. Time is the fastest thing, he who wastes it, gets nothing but repentance in (the) end. As Benjamin Franklin says; "One today is worth than two tomorrows". Those nations or people who do not give value to time they feel its importance in destructions (it can be pluralized. Chaos may be used here) and crises.

Current critical circumstances of Pakistan are because of negligence of (the importance of) time. People avoided it, and ignored its very importance. They did not justify themselves, and couldn't go parallel with time and time left them back. Now, time has left Pakistanis in sufferings which are insufferable (I couldn't understand it dear.). People of Pakistan should know (the) worth of time and other essential things of life; otherwise they will have only repentance in the end.

Seniors, Please check it. Bilal, I have corrected sorted out mistakes. Please check further.

Originally Posted by Muhammad T S Awan

Unfortunately, undersigned is neither a teacher of English nor a master in the language (A good teacher of this thread may be well aware of mistakes ). Nevertheless, some points have been made bold for information e.g. English is the official language of our country (not nation). It is the official language, not an official language.... Grammar anyhow... ironical ( you use this word very often ) ... etc etc

B.t.w Do not take it as an offense

Originally Posted by Da Skeptic

Mistakes and errors highlighted and corrections made, to the best of my knowledge.. Very good attempt.. You have expanded the idea really well..

Originally Posted by shahrozali

If Winter comes,can Spring be far behind.

Listen it
http://englishtest.mobi/forum_mp3/203469.mp3

http://forum.wordreference.com/showthread.php?t=1365855

Listen the use of when ever.You have wrongly used it .your first sentence should not be too large .

Whenever a man is naturally or artifecially(wrong spelling,second word is inappropriate )is gifted with the new and joyful moments he keeps his previous sorrowful and bitter moments far behind(it is an adjective ,either your sentence structure is broken or is inappropriate to use it here ).A man is hunted of(word is not right here ) various griefs and troubles,and when those crying sorrows or pains go away,his face as well as his feelings reborn(What does it means )(so long sentence .what you want to say ?[/U]It is (why is ? with words ?)(verb ??????)well-elaborated words(which word ?) that forget what you suffered,possessed or utilized,and start to sanction(sanction is used in legal terms ) in a newly way what you enjoy,own or apply on daily routine.[/COLOR]


Do you know dear what you have written there ? suffered ,possessed with utilized --you have used three different irrelevant actions is same sentence


History is replete of such instances in which new objects were warmly welcomed and old ones were placed far behind.Before advent of Islam,Arabs used to practise their prayers bowing down towards self-creation idols.Hazrat Muhammed`s teaching and preaching brought out the and real rational religion for human beings.As the result,They recognized their idolatory worthless and baseless,and accepted the new and believable religion.

Man,Before Modern Technology,used to exercise letters to ask to know one`s health,problems,etc.Furthermore,if one wished to contact someone he/she had to go there on foot or through transport.But new Technology alleviated such troubles by providing human beings Mobile phone,computer,etc through which he/she is able to message,email and be connected. As the result,New Technology has been willingly approved and old ones remained far behind.

Conclusively,to greet what is in present is better than to forget what was in past.It is foolish to memorize troubles,pains and unwillingly done objects rather than to enjoy prevalent favourable or unfavourable moments.When the new and natural objects come other ones can automatically be far behind.Hence,Human beings must to approach upcoming or present conditions willingly,and ought not to emphasize to seek going ones.

Originally Posted by SADIA SHAFIQ

"The winds are always on the side of ablest navigator "

Comprehension 2002



Life is sea, driver (Is it not better if you use seafarer or sailor?) is man and hurricane ,storms are fate.Man can change the direction of storms by driving courageously and carefully . It is not denying fact one who has mastery over his willpower and determination to fight until end got success. It implies circumstances play pivotal role in shaping the dynamic of fate; the part of man's life,which is in the hand of man .Because each of us has given certain privileges ,if utilize carefully then one make his own fate . Otherwise circumstances make subject to these people. Those who succeeds are ablest navigator and change the direction of winds to their side .

"Few individuals significantly alter the course of history. Fewer still modify the map of the world. Hardly anyone can be credited with creating a nation-state. Mohammad Ali Jinnah did all three. "

(Professor Stanley Wolper)

Quiad 's example is most suited here. Pakistan creation was impossible ,if he would not born for Muslims and never devoted his life for this cause. He had to face many difficulties ,was criticized by his contemporaries .But with falling health and communal violence and English-Hindus friendship have never discouraged him . Within a few years he achieved what he aspired for against heavy odds.

In fact,one with good qualification are tested best . These have to face more misfortunes in comparison with others. In their way, they have not knelt their knees down against the time of misfortune. So create their own fortune with endless work and determination . All successful people are not born with gold spoons in their mouth .All daring ,determined and brave men are able to change the course of history .History wrote their names in good books of nation because they have defined the path of success by untiring efforts .

Originally Posted by shahrozali

If Winter comes,can Spring be far behind.


Whenever a man is naturally or artifecially is gifted with the new and joyful moments he keeps his previous sorrowful and bitter moments far behind.A man is hunted of various griefs and troubles,and when those crying sorrows or pains go away,his face as well as his feelings reborn.It is well-elaborated words that forget what you suffered,possessed or utilized,and start to sanction in a newly way what you enjoy,own or apply on daily routine.

History is replete of such instances in which new objects were warmly welcomed and old ones were placed far behind.Before advent of Islam,Arabs used to practise their prayers bowing down towards self-creation idols.Hazrat Muhammed`s teaching and preaching brought out the and real rational religion for human beings.As the result,They recognized their idolatory worthless and baseless,and accepted the new and believable religion.

Man,Before Modern Technology,used to exercise letters to ask to know one`s health,problems,etc.Furthermore,if one wished to contact someone he/she had to go there on foot or through transport.But new Technology alleviated such troubles by providing human beings Mobile phone,computer,etc through which he/she is able to message,email and be connected. As the result,New Technology has been willingly approved and old ones remained far behind.

Conclusively,to greet what is in present is better than to forget what was in past.It is foolish to memorize troubles,pains and unwillingly done objects rather than to enjoy prevalent favourable or unfavourable moments.When the new and natural objects come other ones can automatically be far behind.Hence,Human beings must to approach upcoming or present conditions willingly,and ought not to emphasize to seek going ones.