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Now I know what you meant by this heading, but you have to convey your idea simply and clearly so that the examiner doesn't get confuse with a point. I really didn't get the meaning of this point initially. And you can't explain your point later to the examiner, you have to catch his attention in the introduction and outline part. Rewrite your outline. |
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Faiza Rajput (Thursday, December 10, 2015) |
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Now I know what you meant by this heading, but you have to convey your idea simply and clearly so that the examiner doesn't get confuse with a point. I really didn't get the meaning of this point initially. And you can't explain your point later to the examiner, you have to catch his attention in the introduction and outline part. Rewrite your outline.[/QUOTE]
I got your point. By night, I will upload my new outline IN SHAH ALLAH. |
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thank you so very much ambivalent, may you get good grades in your papers. come soon to join us.
again thanks a lot for reviewing my essay |
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1) Disapproved but defended to death the right to say[/B] Outline points should not be grammatically confusing, like this one is 1.1) French philosopher Voltaire publications and his Right to say till death 1.2) Italian Philosopher, Galileo Galile opinion on heliocentrism, and Right to say to his death 1.3) Holy Prophet (P.B.U.H) challenged the wrath of Quraish for the glory of Islam till Hajjatul Wida 1.4) Martin Luther King, best known for African-American Civil rights movement defended till death 1.5) Nelson Mandella South African anti-apartheid revolutionary stood for right to say till death I guess this one is clear as compare to previous one however, I am still trying to improve ambiguous presentation. Thank you again for correction and Join us soon. 1) Historical Context of eminent personalities who disapproved, but defended to death by exercising Freedom of Speech 1.1) French philosopher Voltaire publications and his Right to say till death 1.2) Italian Philosopher, Galileo Galile opinion on heliocentrism, and Right to say to his death 1.3) Holy Prophet (P.B.U.H) challenged the wrath of Quraish for the glory of Islam till Hajjatul Wida 1.4) Martin Luther King, best known for African-American Civil rights movement defended till death 1.5) Nelson Mandella South African anti-apartheid revolutionary stood for right to say till death 1.6) French Monarch King Louis XVI famous speech before execution “ I trust my death will be the happiness of you people, but I grieve for France that you might suffer the anger of the lord “ Last edited by Amna; Thursday, December 10, 2015 at 07:13 PM. Reason: merged/chain posts |
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I have done few alteration as well as incorporation, in accordance to your suggestions please take a look so that i could proceed to Introduction and dissect it further. Thank you 3) Why is it necessary to Protect Freedom of Speech under the age of technological advancement? 3.2) Unchecked freedom of speech erodes the social fabric of society. 3.3) Lack of awareness lead to Fascism 3.4) Misrepresentation of nation among international communities 3.5) Fabricated narratives enable professional mal-contents to serve their vested interests 3.6) Protection of freedom of speech is necessary because unauthentic Information could lead to violence. |
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write the heading like this, 'protection of free speech is essential in an era of communications' , point 3.2 supports or oppose free speech? it is a misfit among other points . after addition of these points your outline will give a complete outlook now. good work |
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I DISAPPROVE OF WHAT YOU SAY, BUT I WILL DEFEND TILL DEATH YOUR RIGHT TO SAY IT.
Introduction: Any relevant qoute, (A) I would protect your right to say because 1- I believe in Freedom of speech. 2- My constitution grants you this right in article 19. 3- I cannot deny the same right to you that I seek for myself. 4- My own liberty to say will be seized by others if I will seize yours. 5- I want to see a tolerant society. 6- I have seen the wonders of diversity of opinion. 7- My knowledge is not absolute, so my disapproval is also not ultimate. 8- Your opinion will give me a new perspective to ponder. 9- you might be wrong about a particular matter but right about other matters. (B) How I will protect your freedom of speech: 1- I will be more tolerant and less judgmental. 2- I will not abuse this right to hurt your feelings. 2- I will instill awareness among my people. 3- I will even die protecting your right to say, and I will die as a hero. Conclusion. Sent from my SM-N900 using Tapatalk
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musmanhussain (Thursday, December 10, 2015) |
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@Ambivalent
Dear,I have a internet issue right now,within few days IA share with all you my write-up.All of you are working very well.If this flow of practice is continue till exam.Then INSHA ALLAH,we are quailify the css exam. @Waqarabbasi Excellent introduction.
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waqarabbasi (Friday, December 11, 2015) |
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Thank you very much for correction. " Misrepresentation of nations among international communities" I guess it is very vague sentence I ever used which should have been " Poor mechanism of surveillance on Freedom of speech depict negative image of a country " Anyway, thank you again for your guidance as it will be extremely worthy for us during exams. |
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