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Quote should be in the continuation of into paragraph or at the end of into paragraph in continuation
It should be written right on top of the page from where you begin your essay. If you want to add a quote in a paragraph as part of an argument, then it should be in continuous form.

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Actually under the heading of dual standards of west, I am trying to portrait present scenario of freedom of expression in the world.
Now I know what you meant by this heading, but you have to convey your idea simply and clearly so that the examiner doesn't get confuse with a point. I really didn't get the meaning of this point initially. And you can't explain your point later to the examiner, you have to catch his attention in the introduction and outline part. Rewrite your outline.
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Now I know what you meant by this heading, but you have to convey your idea simply and clearly so that the examiner doesn't get confuse with a point. I really didn't get the meaning of this point initially. And you can't explain your point later to the examiner, you have to catch his attention in the introduction and outline part. Rewrite your outline.[/QUOTE]


I got your point. By night, I will upload my new outline IN SHAH ALLAH.
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thank you so very much ambivalent, may you get good grades in your papers. come soon to join us.
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I may not approve of what you say but I defend till death your right to say

Introduction

Imposing restrictions on free speech means a halt to the intellectual and material progress of the nations. Free competition of ideas distinguishes the successful nations from undemocratic and failed nations. The defense of free speech is the basic requirement of success in a world of varied thoughts. The free speech is as important a right as the freedom of territory; people without freedom of speech are mindless slaves like sheep on altar of sacrifice. Free speech, being the basic right of individual, ensures the inapplicability of physical tortures and humiliations on holding or not holding a certain thought. Freedom of speech provides world a systematic course of living peacefully with differing opinions. It opens the horizon of disagreeing in an agreeable way; it promotes an atmosphere of free competition of ideas where one is free to choose right from the wrong. The free speech should be defended to prevent humanity form being a victim of majority’s propaganda against minority. Agreeing with differing thoughts is not compulsory but providing the freedom of speech despite differences is essential for the survival of coexistence.


A. Why defense of free speech is the inherent right of humans?

1. The freedom of speech ensures the basic right of human equality irrespective of what ideas one holds.
2. Defense of free speech provides a chance to the ideas of minority to compete with others’.
3. It ends the perpetration of physical tortures and humiliation on holding or not holding any views.

B. Nations protect this right with the constitutional safeguards; the right is protected by the constitution of democratic states, USA, Pakistan, and China. The United Nations regards it a basic right of humanity as the right to live in peace.

C. How defenders protect free speech from external compulsions


1. Fight with religious and social pressures imposed by society
2. A strong disregard for external physical torture and humiliation for having differing views.
3. Defense against manipulation of facts and reality by dominating groups

D. The achievements free speech brought for humanity

1. An abundance of ideas, literature and art.
2. The powerful media and aware nations of the world.
3. The improved capacity of individuals and nations to make the right from the wrong
4. It broke the shackles of despotism and brought an era of accountability and transparency.
5. It provides an equal opportunity to the ideas of any social or economic class to be presented and defended.
6. A demand for accountability of the wrongs done to humanity by any nation or individual.

E. the defense of free speech demands constant vigilance

F. The course towards free speech is still thorny.


1. Differing opinions are treated by majority with humiliations and torture
2. Right to information still suffers from hiding tactics of governments.
3. Media persons suffer for opening the political and economic corruptions of powerful
4. Powerful group more successfully interpret its ideas whereas weak section does not have the resources.

G. How the free speech should be defended?

1. A Collective action of nations to end hostilities on the basis of differing opinions.
2.The State should defend the right of media of bringing corruption and social issues in the limelight.
3. Free competition of ideas can end the hostility of religious and social differences.

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Beautifully constructed.

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Bonaparte!a very good outline, you have advocated your points well. but you have not discussed why free speech is protected, what good it has for us? this is the most important point , what is so important in it that it should be portected so vehemently, incorporate it in your essay. now please write this essay and post it. we will discuss it in detail, an outline does not show all the aspects of your views and style.
Thank you for correction. I will work on it and then post it Inshallah.

1) Disapproved but defended to death the right to say[/B] Outline points should not be grammatically confusing, like this one is

1.1) French philosopher Voltaire publications and his Right to say till death
1.2) Italian Philosopher, Galileo Galile opinion on heliocentrism, and Right to say to his death
1.3) Holy Prophet (P.B.U.H) challenged the wrath of Quraish for the glory of Islam till Hajjatul Wida
1.4) Martin Luther King, best known for African-American Civil rights movement defended till death
1.5) Nelson Mandella South African anti-apartheid revolutionary stood for right to say till death

I guess this one is clear as compare to previous one however, I am still trying to improve ambiguous presentation. Thank you again for correction and Join us soon.


1) Historical Context of eminent personalities who disapproved, but defended to death by exercising Freedom of Speech


1.1) French philosopher Voltaire publications and his Right to say till death
1.2) Italian Philosopher, Galileo Galile opinion on heliocentrism, and Right to say to his death
1.3) Holy Prophet (P.B.U.H) challenged the wrath of Quraish for the glory of Islam till Hajjatul Wida
1.4) Martin Luther King, best known for African-American Civil rights movement defended till death
1.5) Nelson Mandella South African anti-apartheid revolutionary stood for right to say till death
1.6) French Monarch King Louis XVI famous speech before execution “ I trust my death will be the happiness of you people, but I grieve for France that you might suffer the anger of the lord “

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Bonaparte!a very good outline, you have advocated your points well. but you have not discussed why free speech is protected, what good it has for us? this is the most important point , what is so important in it that it should be portected so vehemently, incorporate it in your essay. now please write this essay and post it. we will discuss it in detail, an outline does not show all the aspects of your views and style.

I have done few alteration as well as incorporation, in accordance to your suggestions please take a look so that i could proceed to Introduction and dissect it further. Thank you


3) Why is it necessary to Protect Freedom of Speech under the age of technological advancement?


3.2) Unchecked freedom of speech erodes the social fabric of society.
3.3) Lack of awareness lead to Fascism
3.4) Misrepresentation of nation among international communities
3.5) Fabricated narratives enable professional mal-contents to serve their
vested interests
3.6) Protection of freedom of speech is necessary because unauthentic
Information could lead to violence.
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I have done few alteration as well as incorporation, in accordance to your suggestions please take a look so that i could proceed to Introduction and dissect it further. Thank you


3) Why is it necessary to Protect Freedom of Speech under the age of technological advancement?


3.2) Unchecked freedom of speech erodes the social fabric of society.
3.3) Lack of awareness lead to Fascism
3.4) Misrepresentation of nation among international communities
3.5) Fabricated narratives enable professional mal-contents to serve their
vested interests
3.6) Protection of freedom of speech is necessary because unauthentic
Information could lead to violence.
its good but what do you mean by misrepresentation of nations among international communities?

write the heading like this, 'protection of free speech is essential in an era of communications' , point 3.2 supports or oppose free speech? it is a misfit among other points . after addition of these points your outline will give a complete outlook now.
good work
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I DISAPPROVE OF WHAT YOU SAY, BUT I WILL DEFEND TILL DEATH YOUR RIGHT TO SAY IT.

Introduction:

Any relevant qoute,

(A) I would protect your right to say because

1- I believe in Freedom of speech.

2- My constitution grants you this right in article 19.

3- I cannot deny the same right to you that I seek for myself.

4- My own liberty to say will be seized by others if I will seize yours.

5- I want to see a tolerant society.

6- I have seen the wonders of diversity of opinion.

7- My knowledge is not absolute, so my disapproval is also not ultimate.

8- Your opinion will give me a new perspective to ponder.

9- you might be wrong about a particular matter but right about other matters.

(B) How I will protect your freedom of speech:

1- I will be more tolerant and less judgmental.

2- I will not abuse this right to hurt your feelings.

2- I will instill awareness among my people.

3- I will even die protecting your right to say, and I will die as a hero.

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Dear,I have a internet issue right now,within few days IA share with all you my write-up.All of you are working very well.If this flow of practice is continue till exam.Then INSHA ALLAH,we are quailify the css exam.
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its good but what do you mean by misrepresentation of nations among international communities?

write the heading like this, 'protection of free speech is essential in an era of communications' , point 3.2 supports or oppose free speech? it is a misfit among other points . after addition of these points your outline will give a complete outlook now.
good work

Thank you very much for correction.

" Misrepresentation of nations among international communities"

I guess it is very vague sentence I ever used which should have been " Poor mechanism of surveillance on Freedom of speech depict negative image of a country "

Anyway, thank you again for your guidance as it will be extremely worthy for us during exams.
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I DISAPPROVE OF WHAT YOU SAY, BUT I WILL DEFEND TILL DEATH YOUR RIGHT TO SAY IT.

Introduction:

Any relevant qoute,

(A) I would protect your right to say because

1- I believe in Freedom of speech.

2- My constitution grants you this right in article 19.

3- I cannot deny the same right to you that I seek for myself.

4- My own liberty to say will be seized by others if I will seize yours.

5- I want to see a tolerant society.

6- I have seen the wonders of diversity of opinion.

7- My knowledge is not absolute, so my disapproval is also not ultimate.

8- Your opinion will give me a new perspective to ponder.

9- you might be wrong about a particular matter but right about other matters.

(B) How I will protect your freedom of speech:

1- I will be more tolerant and less judgmental.

2- I will not abuse this right to hurt your feelings.

2- I will instill awareness among my people.

3- I will even die protecting your right to say, and I will die as a hero.

Conclusion.

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an excellent outline Safeer, Its first time I see an outline which deserves 'hats off ', you have done justice with it, a checker will surely reward this type of outline 50 plus or 60 plus marks . upload your introduction, and please review my outline .
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