ok fine brother . and if i write 'pakistan unstable and weak politics are the primary cause of fragile economy' in place of 'why pakistan is still not successful'..will it work fine ?

My friend,
No, in my opinion it won't work.

Your whole outline is stating only examples.

K yahan yeh ho gya, wahan wo ho gya.

This is general knowledge, not argumentation.

Use your general knowledge in the main body not outline.

Think in terms of ABSTRACT IDEAS.

Once you will train yourself thinking in terms of ideas and not examples, I'm sure that you'll make it.

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One must be a wise reader to quote wisely and well; said Bronson Alcott

1. let bygones be by gones
2. time and tide wait for no man
3. a rabbit runs faster but tortise wins the race
4. democracy or dictatorship to maintain peace -who cut up the didoes
5. limitless freedom of expression- give me a break
6. power corrupts man but absolute power corrupts absolutely

Long sentences are always discouraged and loathed by checkers. I have personally faced the same petty mistakes; therefore, I suggested my experience to you.

Moreover, my opinion, no matter how earnest, is substituted from ample consultancy. It will be a better practice to include one rather two or three points in outline sentences. I feel no harm in writing long sentences if one wants to write it for any other purpose than opting for CSS.

Keeping in view the abnormal trend of marks of Essay in CE-2014, cautious people should exquisitely endeavour to patently eschew eccentrics.

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Or do you think that the Fellows of the Cave and the Inscription were of Our Signs wonderful?

1. stop to use force not use force to stop
2. if you want to shine like sun first you have to burn like it
3. islam in secularism and extremism

and last. Bad is better than worst

thank you for your advice; i have gotten your point.


Time management is the key to success
introduction

Fortune brings success for those who value the time. Time is the most powerful warrior, subdue it and it will bring you happiness and progress. Time is never repeated, so the success depends upon extracting the best from every moment. Time is not such type of commodity that can be captured; it is a ceaselessly flowing treasure which benefits if life is planned according to it. The accomplished heroes of the world planned their goals, settled the time frames to achieve them. They went step by step for each milestone and in the end, destiny welcomed them. The people who manage their time and allocate it properly to all the events in their routine are always contented and happy. The history of the life of successful people testifies that every day of their life was planned and calculated. Stress, failure and hopelessness are the essential characteristics of those who instead of managing their life according to time try to make it according to their life. Time, when planned and managed, brings opportunities; in the reverse case, it passes swiftly leaving losers behind mourning their fate.

Rule of Law
1) Introduction
2) What is rule of law ?
a) everyone is equal before law
3) Rule of law and human progress
b) Rule of law –a difference between developed and underdeveloped countries
4) Dangers involved in neglecting this notion
a) Lawlessness
b) Extremism
c) Poverty
5) current state of rule of law in different countries
a) Europe
B) usa
c) Pakistan
6) Religions emhasise on rule of law
7) Recommendation for further improvement
a) Role of education of media
b) Role of state institutions
8) Conclusion

Yey Saray k Saray essay khilonay HAIN..aaj kal essay muktalif andaaz may atay hain

FYI, These all are from recent past papers.

And I saw how EASILY you managed to tackle these khilonaa essays.



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Any animadversion on my essay?