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zealot..brother..i dont have business with anybody here......i just want to know how much ( in percentage ) does the outlines have impact on the examiner...i just want to know...and nothing else...
Sorry bro bit frustated...yes outline matters lot. this 15to 30min effort justify either one can be an officer otherwise it destroys hard work of years of many talented candidates there are many talented doctors or students having great grasp on current affairs and english composition ..examiner i personally think mark pass or fail having a cursory view of merely an outline.you asked about marks i dont know how much marks .but outline is structure of essay..be careful outline generates from common sense.and one who made convincing coherrent and clear outline will go with bang otherwise bite the dust..any senior can guide u further.thats what i know..dont forget to justify your outline with facts qoutes and arguements in main body of essay
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FPSC's statement and my elaboration of it are same.Synonyms and precis are always meant to clarify the things not to alter.Read again!
But your point of policy making criteria is definitely away from FPSC's standard.
Please explain it again.Sorry I didn't understand it
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Research based knowledge doesn't mean that one has to write facts,figures and theories.Research refers to the use of solid arguments with references and examples to prove your stance right
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Mam,what you have forgotten is a fact that I personally liked your essay much better than that of mine.Its not mine stance but of my teacher.Reread my posts carefully.
Secondly, i know what is the meaning of an essay and research based journals.
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[B]If FPSC had to find merely policy makers then the essay topics could never include categories of literature or general ones.Just dare to put international political theories in essay of "Life should follow literature" I bet things would seem more clear then[/B
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Mam, only my point of contention is ,how you can explain me the remaining topics in view of literature,like gender equality and place of Urdu or foreign aid(at least it doesn't fit into that category)
P.S.I just wanted to clear my misconception and I expect logical explanation as well.
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So one must not deviate from the demand of essay just to show off knowledge or to get the label of pragmatism
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Come on mam, who has said you that I'm pragmatist.
Neversaynever, that is his own opinion,similarly of mine like your essay is awesome.
Don't mix someones word with my opinion.
I'm here to learn from my mistake neither I personally want to make a battleground with you nor its a part of rational thinking.
Rest I wish you best of luck!
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I would suggest you compare your approach with successful candidates of css 2015.and then you will critically analyze your essay
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Please explain it again.Sorry I didn't understand it
I didn't use exact words of FPSC statement about Essay but I elaborated it in my own words.For instance check out meaning of 'articulation'.

good english writing skill,impressive expression of ideas,argumentative approach and the ability to justify his point of view.

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Mam,what you have forgotten is a fact that I personally liked your essay much better than that of mine.Its not mine stance but of my teacher.Reread my posts carefully.
Secondly, i know what is the meaning of an essay and research based journals.
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That paragraph is written separately to denote it as a general reply.By the way your teacher is not here but his/her words are and you are the representative.So I disagreed to the notion of 'policy maker vs philosopher'.It cast satirical impression.I just tried to clear a misconception.

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Mam, only my point of contention is ,how you can explain me the remaining topics in view of literature,like gender equality and place of Urdu or foreign aid(at least it doesn't fit into that category)
P.S.I just wanted to clear my misconception and I expect logical explanation as well.
Neither I boast that examiner is in search of a literary person nor I devalue the long list of topics other than literature.My point( that needs to be understood clearly )is that FPSC doesn't confine itself to specific category of essays and priority is not given to theoretical/policy making approach specifically.

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Come on mam, who has said you that I'm pragmatist.
Neversaynever, that is his own opinion,similarly of mine like your essay is awesome.
Don't mix someones word with my opinion.
That was a general statement not specifically addressed to you.

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I'm here to learn from my mistake neither I personally want to make a battleground with you nor its a part of rational thinking.
Rest I wish you best of luck!
Same here.I shared my outline with the aspirants as someone was asking for it.I never want to demoralize anyone because in the end it is Allah who decides fate.May be I disagree to your approach in essay but I am not the examiner to declare something harsh.

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Default Does foreign aid help to bring economic stability

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  • many countries in budgetry constraints required to be depend on economic aid.wether a country rich in resources or poor in investments or moderate in trade .there are various areas where required a focus in different spheres of countries economic growth to find out does foreign aid help to bring economic stability? so what are those spheres which can justify either foreign aid helped or not
  • does foreign aid helped to bring economic stability?
  • at political level?
  • the status of policy making?
  • in enhancing GDP
  • in agricultural
  • in industrial sector
    Its impacts
  • in status of fdi
  • in trade
  • in investments
  • in debt control
  • tax
  • in return
  • Fiscal deficit
    The impacts of policy making at social level?
    1 poverty status
    2 unemployment ratio
    3 standard of living
    Conclusion
    Thus from a to z analying then comparing each and every sphere of policy making while comparing it with past present and then future (worldwide).foreign aid can help timely but without long term plans.stability at economic level is day dream
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I think this type of essay require as much comparisons contrast and stats (of past present future ) as possible with world wide analysis and ofcourse student of economics will be dab hand at it and will do justice to topic......i m not student of economics though ..lets see what anyone says
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I didn't use exact words of FPSC statement about Essay but I elaborated it in my own words.For instance check out meaning of 'articul.
Mam,I agree with you, but why thrifty at true description?For example,How can you describe technical treatment and research based knowledge of an essay etc?
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There is contradiction in terms everywhere.only fpsc will justify means.meanwhile in order to get critical analysis compare your approach with successful candidates of css 2015.i know how does it feel when some one studied so hard.even word hard is small for the kinds of efforts candidates do to pass...
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  • intro
  • many countries in budgetry constraints required to be depend on economic aid.wether a country rich in resources or poor in investments or moderate in trade .there are various areas where required a focus in different spheres of countries economic growth to find out does foreign aid help to bring economic stability? so what are those spheres which can justify either foreign aid helped or not
  • does foreign aid helped to bring economic stability?
  • at political level?
  • the status of policy making?
  • in enhancing GDP
  • in agricultural
  • in industrial sector
    Its impacts
  • in status of fdi
  • in trade
  • in investments
  • in debt control
  • tax
  • in return
  • Fiscal deficit
    The impacts of policy making at social level?
    1 poverty status
    2 unemployment ratio
    3 standard of living
    Conclusion
    Thus from a to z analying then comparing each and every sphere of policy making while comparing it with past present and then future (worldwide).foreign aid can help timely but without long term plans.stability at economic level is day dream
if you have relevant material for your outlines then it would be the most comprehensive essay on this forum. However let me tell you one thing your outlines sometimes seems irrelevant to the the topic and may not be reflecting what you write in your essay.
foreign aid is usually given to further the foreign policy objectives and thus its an instrument of manoeuvring the other state. Ye Allah k naam par nahi Dia jata hence my thesis statement was: The role of foreign aid to stabilise, or destabilize the economy is largely dependent upon the intentions of the donor and character of the recipient state.
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