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Yeh i perceived sister.along with gender equality it is complicated. Any what about frality thy name is woman
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  • fraility remains part and parcel of woman personality.it was started from eve committment of grave transgression and along with Adams subsequent expulsion to earth.the classical the medieval the renaissance the neo classical the romantic and now modern era.frailites in woman had been different hence portrayed different so why frailities thy name is woman
  • thy had fraility to decieve through attraction and being decieved through attraction
  • thy had fraility to flatter to get favour or being favoured by flattery
  • thy had fraility to reject through acceptance and accept being rejected
  • thy had frality of being manifold hence ambiguos
  • Thy had fraility to run with hare and hunt with hounds(hypocricy)
  • thy had fraility of being coquetish through pomp and show
  • thy had fraility to love through hate or hate through love
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    All these frailities can be traced in any woman
It was one of the three essays that I shortlisted in paper but being a woman how could I write a whole essay on such a hurting topic

~It would be great if you had mentioned that this line was written by Shakespeare.
~ Your reference of Eve is very convincing in the beginning.
~You have pointed out universal frailties and the examiner would consider it for sure.
~It would be better if you explain both types of frailties,
Physical frailty
Psychological frailty
You mainly focused on psychological aspect.

~You should use quotes and solid references to support your stance.

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I connected positive consequences of being our own best friend at National level to these (Japan,China,Canada etc) different nations, their sincere & united role, love & loyalty for their country, leading to sparking & gigantic progress of their country(practical outcome of being our own best friend as a nation).
We “as a true individual” to we “as a true nation”.
It seems that you have justified it well.All the best!
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Sister will it give passing marks? Is approach ok? What are physical problems? I perceive that it must be in mental problem? Anyway what are other problems?

And i percieve that frailities means only weakness required to mention.mentioning otherwise doesnt look ok to me
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Sister will it give passing marks? Is approach ok? What are physical problems? I perceive that it must be in mental problem? Anyway what are other problems?

And i percieve that frailities means only weakness required to mention.mentioning otherwise doesnt look ok to me
Why not!If you justify it well.I didn't mean psychological problems.I just meant psychological aspect of woman's frailty and that's what you have elaborated in your outline.For instance,woman can be lured easily because she is soft hearted.
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Thanks sister.how much marks you got previous attempts? Whst was difference in your approach now that was not in your previous atempts? In essay only
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Sorry not psychological but physical.what are those physical problem?and i percieve that frailities means only weakness required to mention.mentioning otherwise doesnt look ok to me
Physical frailty is that she is physically weaker than man.She is delicate and her role in society is different than man.Now it depends which societies you want to discuss.
You can even discuss that in various cultures,woman is considered too weak to survive on her own.She is ruled by man.
You can even explain it in islamic perspective.It is due to her frailty that Islam has endowed man with her responsibility.
Islam doesn't appreciate a woman ruler in the state.

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Thanks sister.how much marks you got previous attempts? Whst was difference in your approach now that was not in your previous atempts? In essay only
2011- 45 marks
2012- 54 marks

There isn't any difference in my approach as far as I guess.I always try to be original and creative so it has become part of my writing skill.Personally I believe my previous essay attempt was better than this one because this time I couldn't manage time well.
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I think sister it may be troublesome to qoute physical perspectives i think that yes woman is weak but her role in physical aspects in different she can do what man cant do.i think psychological aspects looks credible because it describes universal frailities of every woman.which are inborn.but defining physical attribute by stating them a fraility would invite criticism.for example tess of the drbervilles.you can disagree with me

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Physical frailty is that she is physically weaker than man.She is delicate and her role in society is different than man.Now it depends which societies you want to discuss.
You can even discuss that in various cultures,woman is considered too weak to survive on her own.She is ruled by man.
You can even explain it in islamic perspective.It is due to her frailty that Islam has endowed man with her responsibility.
Islam doesn't appreciate a woman ruler in the state.



2011- 45 marks
2012- 54 marks

There isn't any difference in my approach as far as I guess.I always try to be original and creative so it has become part of my writing skill.Personally I believe my previous essay attempt was better than this one because this time I couldn't manage time well.
Simply brilliant..sister kindly post the essay which you attempted i will make my outline of these
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I think sister it may be troublesome to qoute physical perspectives i think that yes woman is weak but her role in physical aspects in different she can do what man cant do.i think psychological aspects looks credible because it describes universal frailities of every woman.which are inborn.but defining physical attribute by stating them a fraility would invite criticism.for example tess of the drbervilles.you can disagree with me


Simply brilliant..sister kindly post the essay which you attempted i will make my outline of these
I didn't mean that you should write many pages on physical frailty.It would be enough to write even a paragraph on it.It just shows that your approach is broad.I know that elongation of physical aspect and her comparison with man would make this essay 'gender discrimination '.In a nutshell you have dealt with it in right direction.

In 2011 I attempted "Truth has become a rare commodity despite the freedom enjoyed by media".

In 2012 ,"The suffering soul in the scientific age"
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  • if a building is high wide and handsome then why it falls down whenever the catastrophe come.a man feels secure and comfortable in luxury but why moderation is better than too much excess because a moderate man is too comfortable but former is having taste of scientific age and robotic but later is wise powered by common sense strengthen by morality.so why in scientific age there is suffering
  • suffering soul in scientific age
  • mental suffering made the mind robotic
  • death of creativity due to
  • obessession
  • habituation
  • because of indulgence
  • and hence intoxication
  • moral sufferings
  • pomp and show in dog and pony show
  • pride
  • anger
  • frustation
  • hate
  • physical suffering
  • eye sight weekness due to scientific gadgets
  • heart attacks
  • cancer
  • asthama
  • and others
  • religious suffering
  • no spiritual awakening because of no belief on God
  • due to un guided
  • mis guided teachings of religion
  • secular trends
  • its impacts
  • fixed
  • passive
  • purposeless life
  • breeds
  • rapes
  • murders
  • suiside
  • abductions
  • thefts
  • burglery
  • khatam shud
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  • intro
  • if a building is high wide and handsome then why it falls down whenever the catastrophe come.a man feels secure and comfortable in luxury but why moderation is better than too much excess because a moderate man is too comfortable but former is having taste of scientific age and robotic but later is wise powered by common sense strengthen by morality.so why in scientific age there is suffering
  • suffering soul in scientific age
  • mental suffering made the mind robotic
  • death of creativity due to
  • obessession
  • habituation
  • because of indulgence
  • and hence intoxication
  • moral sufferings
  • pomp and show in dog and pony show
  • pride
  • anger
  • frustation
  • hate
  • physical suffering
  • eye sight weekness due to scientific gadgets
  • heart attacks
  • cancer
  • asthama
  • and others
  • religious suffering
  • no spiritual awakening because of no belief on God
  • due to un guided
  • mis guided teachings of religion
  • secular trends
  • its impacts
  • fixed
  • passive
  • purposeless life
  • breeds
  • rapes
  • murders
  • suiside
  • abductions
  • thefts
  • burglery
  • khatam shud
  • eee
  • comment
You can see my outline here,

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/408086-post44.html

Zuhaib Ahmad also made an outline of this essay.Though he didn't take exam yet he made it for practice.Indeed it was great effort! Search it in Feb/march 2012 posts or if Zuhaib could provide link.
Where are you Zuhaib?No participation these days?Have you taken your first attempt?
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But sister i made my outline on my own.but i will see his outline too

Sister it is same almost.had you done m.a in english?

Sister i m making a thread for help to pass eng lit private from uos.i failed thrice.i need some info regarding my approach
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