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Farah Zafar, I know its not a relevant thread to ask. But expression and correct English being a pre requisite of essay, I would like to get my article, in todays Dawn, checked by you.please do so.link is given

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Farah Zafar, I know its not a relevant thread to ask. But expression and correct English being a pre requisite of essay, I would like to get my article, in todays Dawn, checked by you.please do so.link is given

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Well written !

Why are they ruthlessly killing people indifferently?

You have used two adverbs unnecessarily.It seems awkward.It should be,"Why are they killing people ruthlessly?"


I was astonished to hear the AG’s reply when the court asked him to inform
as to how the provincial government has planned curbing violence in the city.

It should be had as it is indirect speech and sentence is in past tense.
I think to should be omitted.

The need of the hour is to carry out a collective effort on the part..........

is should be added.
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Well written !

Why are they ruthlessly killing people indifferently?

You have used two adverbs unnecessarily.It seems awkward.It should be,"Why are they killing people ruthlessly?"


I was astonished to hear the AG’s reply when the court asked him to inform
as to how the provincial government has planned curbing violence in the city.

It should be had as it is indirect speech and sentence is in past tense.
I think to should be omitted.

The need of the hour is to carry out a collective effort on the part..........

is should be added.
Thanks for your time and correction dear, a few mistakes were mine and few were typing errors of the editor, I guess. so is this expression fine enough to pass essay, u passed two times so you are in a better position to advise
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FARAH as i m in Faisalabad and dont find any experienced teacher to get my writings checked from. So, what do you suggest me to do? I m very much worried as only due to the unavailability of a teacher is compelling me to delay my attempt which i dont want to do.
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I have answered this question in above post

Besides,one must read a lot to enhance vocabulary as well as it broadens one's vision.Variety of written styles show you the way to improve your own expression.
Way to Go sis your efforts are highly commendable Also,I want to ask that Is there any one particular writer,whose style we could follow ?? :S
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Thanks for your time and correction dear, a few mistakes were mine and few were typing errors of the editor, I guess. so is this expression fine enough to pass essay, u passed two times so you are in a better position to advise
That was fine expression.Keep in mind a few points,
  • Don't ask questions in essay.
  • Your approach should be objective.
  • Emotional sentences must be avoided.
  • There should not be repetition of words or sentences like as 'burning,burning,burning'

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FARAH as i m in Faisalabad and dont find any experienced teacher to get my writings checked from. So, what do you suggest me to do? I m very much worried as only due to the unavailability of a teacher is compelling me to delay my attempt which i dont want to do.
Kips is there.Why don't you join it?

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Way to Go sis your efforts are highly commendable Also,I want to ask that Is there any one particular writer,whose style we could follow ?? :S
One must not follow anyone.Style should be one's own.Read others but don't copy them.Originality ensures one's success.
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dear farrah ,i have initiated a thread "please evaluate my essay" in essay section. today i have written an intro for css long essays ,kindly spare some time for me and go through it. Also give your precious comments in the end. I shall be thankful to you.
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I remeber in , 2011 attempt you had started a corrections thread with eager,kashif....

That was very helpful for me due to participation.....only on that practice basis my all corrections gone right...my paper cleared.....and i hope this thread will also help to all members....great job
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Introduction of an Essay



It is said,

First impression is the last impression.

~*Introduction is just like the cork of bottle ,once the examiner opens it, the sudden wave of smell tells him what’s inside; pleasant or unpleasant !

~*As I have told earlier, essay is basically communication between you and examiner so the very first words must be striking enough to impress the latter.

~*My experience says that one should start essay with a quote or poetic verses.

~*It must be relevant.

~*Quotes and poetic verses make the examiner realize that,

-->The candidate has vast knowledge.
-->He is aware of well known literary figures,poets and philosophers.
-->His writing must have worth as the 'wrapper' is quite attractive(intro is just like wrapper/packing/covering)
-->He has good communication skill as beginning of his arguments is striking.



To be continued.......
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