that will be really good if such a beneficial step is being taken by you.We all are with you dear!!

My dear friends and fellows we are doing a good job. As many active members are busy somewhere, but this process should not be halted. New members are highly appreciated to participate as this is all about preparation. Our new topic is comparatively easy one:

"Energy Crisis in Pakistan"

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It is humbly requested to all active members like Sidra naveed, Mahjabeen, Djs Faisal and rests to please analyze my attempt and let me know my shortcomings. Thanking in Advance



Meaning and Purpose of Education

1) Education: Defined
2) Meaning with the different Contexts
a)Early School of thoughts
b)Western Philospers

3) Purposes
A)Individual Purpose
a) Being Human
b) leadership qualities
c)Versatalie Personality backup with Excellent Confidence
d)prompt actions
e)freedom ofspeech
f) choosy between right and wrong
g) easily adaptive in uncertain queasy situations


4) Economic Purposes
a) Nation stability andProsperity
b) Improved Infrastructure
c)Innovations in Industrial sector
b) Better future



5) Social Purposes
a) Responsible Citizen
b) Right giver
c) Good preacher
d) Outstanding team leader
e) Solution for society pinned hopes

6)Conclusion:


It is once rightly said that, “Give me an educated mother, I shall promise you the birth of a civilized, educated nation”. It is quite obvious to depicts the importance of education, which is indeed, vital for nation prosperity. In addition, educated person is a versatile man, who is full of confident, quite able to raise voice to demand rights for himself and others, is capable to take actions promptly , never loses hope in daunting situations,and meanwhile act being human which is utmost to flock. It is a common adage that “Man is a social animal who cannot abstains from society and thats solely education which splits him apart from wild animal. Apparently, Being an educated one, he puts all of others efforts in a main streamline, avoid conflicts, maintains a reasonably high standard of discipline, ascertains the delivery of equal rights and most importantly to procure the society predefined desirable goals at the same time.

Sorry dears, I had gone somewhere and been caught in a personal problem that is why could not remain active here. Now hopefully, I am free and eager to participate in our group activities. I am cordially thankful to few of the respected members to keep this endeavour continue. And those who have newly joined us are welcome. However, it is discouraging to note that few active members are no more interested in this activity. I respectfully urge all the active members to do their best here, for it 0goes without saying that ours are the best intentions to flourish our skills.

Regards

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A nice attempt. However, your outline is not complementing your introduction. In your introuduction, neither you mentioned the early school of thoughts, nor the views of western philosphers in regard to eduction. Overall a good effort. I have tried to point some of your mistakes. Just keep it up.

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I am sending my attempt. All respected members are highly requested to assess my attempt and point out mistakes. I will be very thankful to the sincere and effective recommendations.

Energy crisis in Pakistan.

1-Introduction
a. Meaning of energy
b. Its relationship with progress of a country

2-Energy crisis in Pakistan (present situation)
a. Acute shortage of energy
b. Low generation of electricity
c. Shortage of gas
d. Hike in oil prices
c. wide gape between supply and demand

3-Reasons of energy crisis
a. Lack of political will
b. Poor management of resources
c. Over-reliance upon renewable energy
d. Shortage of gases and oils
e. Economic hurdles
f. Circular debt
g. Rapid urbanization
h. Power theft
i. Distribution and transmission loses
j. Increase in demand
k. Lack of planning and research
l. Less work on exploration of new hidden energy reserves
m. Lack of accountability

4-Consequences of energy crises
a. Low and sluggish economic growth
b. Poor standards of living
c. Industrial stagnation
d. Transportation problems
e. Trade deficit
d. Inflation
e. Unrest and turmoil.
f. Increase in poverty and unemployment
g. Psychological collapse

5-Solutions/suggestions
a. Adequate management of resources
b. Recovery of circular debt
c. Installation of new power plants
d. Repairing of transmission and distribution units
e. More reliance on renewable resources of energy
f. Construction of new dams
g. Appropriate utilization of Thar coal
h. Exploration of new energy reserves
i. Crackdown on power theft
j. Political consensus
k. Check and balance in industries

6-Conclusion

Introduction

Energy is an engine of social and economic development of a country. No country can get success without it. It plays a pivotal role for industrial and many other processes. Hence, it goes without saying that all those nations are developed which have more energy resources and a technology to convert these resources into useful form. Sadly, in Pakistan we are suffering from worse crisis of energy. It has made our lives miserable and impeded the economic growth of country. This unfortunate reality notwithstanding, the energy crisis is completely a curable ailment. We do have all resources to deal with this ongoing challenge which has put the development of country on back burner. But what is lacking is a rational, result-oriented and realistic policy which can enable those at the helm of affairs to manage the existing resources in the best possible manner. Someone in this regard has rightly said that 'Pakistan is not a poor country but poorly managed country'. Admittedly, all of this is not a result of mindless decision-making at the top, but a number of other genuine factors are also responsible for this sorry state of affairs. Lack of technology, corruption, unsystematic urbanization, political instability, lack of coordination among institutions are few of those causes which have pushed us in this current unrest. There is a dire need of realizing that the true prosperity and progress of country lies in having adequate energy. If the resources are used properly, problem of circular debt solved, new plants installed, corruption is dealt with iron hand, and political consensus is built up to cure the energy problem; we will possibly be able to pull ourselves out of this current mess and move towards a progressive, prosperous and peaceful atmosphere.

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nice attempt

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welcome back. Its nice effort. Plz let me clear one thing is ths right to mention we and our words like u mention in your essay introduction.

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ENERGY CRISIS IN PAKISTAN
1.INTRODUCTION
2.ENERGY CRISIS IN PAKISTAN
3.FLAWS OF CRISIS
¤fluctation of oil and power prices
¤poor management
¤dearth of energy plants
¤illegal use of electricity
¤inadequate oil and power production and distribution
¤wastage of power
¤lack of proper planning
¤lack of modern technical methods
¤corruption
¤ignorance of politicians
4.CONSEQUENCES OF ENERGY CRISIS
¤victimatization of industrial sector
¤agricultre sector
¤economic loss
¤unemployement
¤poverty
¤disturbance of domestic life
¤transport problems
5.ENERGY RESOURCES IN PAKISTAN
¤thar coal
¤solar energy
¤hydropower i-e kalabagh dam
¤nuclear energy
¤tidal energy
¤thermal energy
¤wind energy
¤biogas fuel
6.RECOMENDATIONS/HOW TO GET RID OFF CRISIS
¤utilization of renewable resources
¤ use of modern technical method of utilization of thar coal
¤proper planing and management
¤installement of power and solar plants
¤political consensus
¤WAPDA and KESC should take serious steps
7.CONCLUSION
Energy is most important vehicle in the progress of economy of any country. Energy crisis is the shortfall of power, oil and water resources. Pakistan has been facing energy crisis since independence but still face energy crisis which become hindrance in the economy and development of country. Today Pakistan is facing an acute energy crisis specially power and oil. Pakistan is rich natural resources country; but lack of proper usage and utilization methods become poor country. As per estimation Pakistan is third largest coal reserve country. Solar and wind energy are more in coastal areas of Baluchistan and Sindh. Nuclear energy is also resource to attain electricity. Many flaws are behind energy crisis which are dearth of plants, power theft, inadequate electricity supply which cause severe load-shedding and victim of agricultre and industrial sector and price hike in oil price.Energy crisis lead poverty, unemployement and distrub domestic life. To overcome these crisis WAPDA ,KESC and Govt must take political consensus, exploration and utilization of natural resources to meet the demands of nation would become attaining the economic and social development.

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Well, It was very difficult for me to understand your attempt. Although it makes sense that you have quite good knowledge of topic but you failed to present your ideas smoothly and effectively. I have found many repetitions like you used few words again and again, and the same case with sentence structure. Be remember that if you repeat yourself much, then examiner will come up with conclusion that you cannot deal the topic in depth. Try to interlink your sentences. Don't always try to give a single information in one sentence, Like you stated " Energy crises is a shortfall of oil and water resources" so whats special in this? everyone knows it after all. Give information and link it with any other idea.

you also asked for usage of I , You and We. In my opinion, Its not good to use these wording. I don't use.

My rectification in your attempt is purely constructive

Nicely attempted All of your ideas are flowing in order